TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
WORDS: 470
TIME:02:11:15
DATE: 2010-7-29 14:17:19
Children will grow up and be the master of our world. In that sense, children's socialization is very important to our society. However, good socialization does not mean good society. Moreover, we have not yet put enough emphasize on children's socialization while educate children and our education system still need to be improved.
Adimttedly, if we define "socialize" as adapting oneself to the society, I would throughtly agree with that children's socialization determines the destiny of out society. Imagining that children all grow up without verbal communicaton skills and they can not express the ideas in their head. What does our society would be like then? In the schools, teachers may speak in the platform without ending for that they can not express their thought clearly. In the companies, they may isolate for that they do not konw how to get well with each other. In the family, the generation gap between children and parents may be wider and wider for that they can not communicate with each other well. Our society may be worse and worse. Thus, children's socialization is nothing but important.
However, owning good socialization does not promise that our society would be good. There also something others matters, like sprit of innovation and confirm convinction. For example, Deng Xiaoping, the designer of reform and open policy, formulated "one country, two system" polocy. It was due to his innovation sprits, but not the socialization that china's international and military stature was greatly increased. Another example is Bill Gates, former chairman of Microsoft, who left Harward to found that company without thinging much about the result. Now, he and his wife create the Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation, which provides scholarships for poor studens and AIDS-infected person. Is what that makes the society good? This case apparently demonstrates that it is the firm convinctions matters. With only socialization, our society may not be good as it now. Consuquently, good society is determined not only by socialization but also sprits of innovation and convinctions.
What's more, our society has not paid enough attention to the children's socialization while treaning them. From our own experience, the phenomenon that "high scores while low capacity" is common in our schools. Children get high scores in schools while get little instructions for generation from teachers. Children may be knowledge owner but good worker while gradulating from schools. It is mainly because of that education systems put undue stress on the chideren’s scores when training children in schools. That is to say, adquate attention has not been paid on children’s socialization.
To sum up, from all that has been discussed above we may finally draw the conclusion that children's socialization is important to our society's destine as well as innovation sprits and convinction. And we society has not given due attention to children’s socialization.作者: haowatson 时间: 2010-7-29 17:27:18
Children will grow up and be the master of our world. In that sense, children's socialization is very important to our society. However, good socialization does not mean good society. Moreover, we have not yet put enough emphasize on children's socialization while educate children and our education system still need to be improved.
Adimttedly, if we define "socialize" as adapting oneself to the society, I would throughtly agree with that children's socialization determines the destiny of out society. Imagining that children all grow up without verbal communicaton『拼写错误』
skills and they can not express the ideas in their head. What does our society would be like then? In the schools, teachers may speak in the platform without ending for that they can not express their thought clearly. In the companies, they may isolate for that they do not konw how to get well with each other. In the family, the generation gap between children and parents may be wider and wider for that they can not communicate with each other well. Our society may be worse and worse. Thus, children's socialization is nothing but important.
However, owning good socialization does not promise that our society would be good. There also something others matters, like sprit of innovation and confirm convinction. For example, Deng Xiaoping, the designer of reform and open policy, formulated "one country, two system" polocy. It was due to his innovation sprits, but not the socialization that china's international and military stature was greatly increased. Another example is Bill Gates, former chairman of Microsoft, who left Harward to found that company without thinging much about the result. Now, he and his wife create the Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation, which provides scholarships for poor studens and AIDS-infected person. Is what that makes the society good? This case apparently demonstrates that it is the firm convinctions matters. With only socialization, our society may not be good as it now. Consuquently, good society is determined not only by socialization but also sprits of innovation and convinctions.
What's more, our society has not paid enough attention to the children's socialization while treaning them. From our own experience『可能会判雷同』, the phenomenon that "high scores while low capacity" is common in our schools. Children get high scores in schools while get little instructions for generation from teachers. Children may be knowledge owner but good worker『语法错误』 while gradulating from schools. It is mainly because of that education systems put undue stress on the chideren’s scores when training children in schools. That is to say, adquate attention has not been paid on children’s socialization.
To sum up, from all that has been discussed above we may finally draw the conclusion that children's socialization is important to our society's destine as well as innovation sprits and convinction. And we society has not given due attention to children’s socialization.
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As the globalization are developing further and deeper all over the world, children never grow up alone like their ancestor. ^Instead, while our children are growing physically and mentally, they are learning how to treat the world, the people, the nature and all the things they have faced or will face , that is what are called "socialized".
Whether socialization of children benefit children or not, we can never prevent the trend that more and more children will be socialized, unwillingly or eagerly. What we can do is nothing but help our kids adapt to the unmodifiable trend, prepare them swimming freely in the wave of the history.
The speaker worries, that we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society. The worries happens occasionally, when great changes shock the world. The Industry Revolution has witnessed the worry of that generation ,that whether their kids could make the good use the titanic machines that never exist on the earth. The Electronic Revolution also has witnessed the worry of that generation ,that whether the kid could lead the electronic technology to the light of human history.
Admittedly, we never learned to how deal with the new things before they come in front of us. As the earth never stop spinning, novel-new things are bound to appear. However, it is proved right by the evolution history of human, that we are continuously heading forward marjorly, even if we fall down sometimes.
There is a paradox in the speaker's assertion, that is the better society. How can we judge whether a society is better or not before it come true? And before we conclude that one thing is right ,how can we make a decision to teach our children ,"this is right, do it ,honey" .Does it strengthen the speaker's worry? Definitely, not. The human history have told us the answer. We, human, not like machine, that only does the things ordered, the evolution has taught us the most important skill to develop, the skill to correct our mistakes. The two World Wars, have destroyed billions of human lives and staff worth of billions of dollars, nearly bring the world to the hell. But the history told us , suffered these pain ,now we are more wise and sophisticated than ever before, elevating the civilization of human being to a higher degree.
In sum, we should instill our kids with the value to correct mistakes, they have made and gain a lesson to prevent the same tragedy from happen again.
Only by doing this can our future really perceive a better society.作者: yuren909 时间: 2010-7-31 00:15:45
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As the globalization are (is) developing further and deeper all over the world, children never grow up alone like their ancestor. Instead, while our children are growing physically and mentally, they are learning how to treat the world, the people, the nature and all the things they have faced or will face, that (. That) is what are (is) called "socialized".
Whether socialization of children benefit children or not, we can never prevent the trend that more and more children will be socialized, unwillingly or eagerly. What we can do is nothing but help (helping) our kids adapt to the unmodifiable trend，prepare them swimming freely in the wave of the history.（值得我学习）
The speaker worries, that we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society. The worries （去掉s）happens occasionally, when great changes shock the world. The Industry Revolution has witnessed the worry of that generation ,that whether their kids could make the good use the titanic machines that never exist on the earth. The Electronic Revolution also has witnessed the worry of that generation, that whether the kid could lead the electronic technology to the light of human history.
Admittedly, we never learned to how （how to） deal with the new things before they come in front of us. As the earth never stop (stops) spinning, novel-new things are bound to appear. However, it is proved right by the evolution history of human, that we are continuously heading forward marjorly, even if we fall down sometimes.
There is a paradox in the speaker's assertion, (去掉逗号) that is the better society. How can we judge whether a society is better or not before it come true? And before we conclude that one thing is right ,how can we make a decision to teach our children ,"this is right, do it ,honey" .Does it strengthen the speaker's worry?Definitely, not. The human history have (has) told us the answer. We, human, not like machine, that only does the things ordered, the evolution has taught us the most important skill to develop, the skill to correct our mistakes. The two World Wars, have (having) destroyed billions of human lives and staff worth of billions of dollars, nearly bring the world to the hell. But the history told us, suffered these pain, now we are more wise and sophisticated than ever before, elevating the civilization of human being to a higher degree.
In sum, we should instill our kids with the value to correct mistakes, they have made and gain a lesson to prevent the same tragedy from happen again. Only by doing this can our future really perceive a better society.（升华）