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作者: Arant    时间: 2010-7-31 15:20:39     标题: Arant作文本

本帖最后由 Arant 于 2010-8-4 00:17 编辑

Newspapersand magazines are greatest inventions – they can help us know whatis happening all over the world. But, Newspapers and magazines cannot be the best way to learn a foreign country.
Firstly,there may be a lot of obstacles access to newspapers and magazines onforeign countries. Languages will limit you reading a foreignnewspapers and magazines. You may have to face a foreign languagelike Japanese, French and Spainish. It is also uncomfortable to reada foreign language for a long time. And foreign newspapers are fewand expensive. Because they are generally for their overseascitizens.
Secondly,ignoring the limitation above, we can not find what we want from thenewspapers and magazines. You can find plenty of magazines andnewspapers about a certain country, but it is so hard to pick outwhat you are interested in. Assume that you are interested ingeography of a country and want to buy a magazine, such as NationalGeographic, can you easily find what you want on it? Probably not,because there are so many countries, and you can hardly find what youwant. Without a search engine, it is almost impossible to doeffective search.
Thirdly,it is hard to have a totally objective description. Perhaps nobodywould like to be inflicted on other's impression. But, it is almostunavoidable while you learn about a foreign country by newspapers andmagazines. The problem arises in part from
thearticles on them are picked by the editor, and there are no guaranteethe editor will be objective. Moreover, the articles are written bysomeone. They are expressing their feelings. The proverb says "Thereare a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes". It is alsotrue about country. Therefore, it would be much better if you feel ityourself.

作者: 白菜学英语    时间: 2010-8-1 21:49:12

修改啦~   也谢谢你的修改~ [attach]148483[/attach]
作者: Arant    时间: 2010-8-2 15:31:52

2# 白菜学英语
我看了一下...于是今天的特地想了很多词要怎么改...
= =不知道这个怎么样
作者: Arant    时间: 2010-8-2 15:32:29     标题: 8.2作文

09.02.27NA
Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with morevacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a highsalary but less vacation time.

Personally,I totally concede that a more vacation time but a low salary job isbetter. The following is some supportive reason.
Firstly,more vacation time benefits to one in mental and emotional health.Almost every one would like to have a long time for relax, duringwhich they can do whatever they like and spend some time with theirfamilies. Thus, they can release their pressure. That is to say,vacation can build your spiritual health which in my opinion outweighmoney. Seeing that keeping in good mood prevent diseases can saveplenty of money and time, we can easily conclude that being gratifiedworths much more than cash.
Furthermore,having a good mood in reverse assist us to work effectively andproductively. Working without rest will cause people feel down andhopeless, which may reduce them enthusiasm and eventually affect thework. A research recently also shows that the  speed of response willbe reduce significantly if one is in depression. At the same time,the comprehension and logical judgement are also affected. Theresearch confirms the importance of vacation from the other side.
Additionally,the salary one can earn depends greatly on his working performance.Namely, the salary will not always stay low if one is outstanding. Abetter work performance can obviously accelerate it. There is noexcuse for the boss to refuse to rise wages for a subordinate who isactually excellent. And this is also rooted in more vacation.
Inconclusion, it can be a virtuous circle if start with a more vacationjob – more vacation brings more enthusiasm and more enthusiasmresult in rising wages. Perhaps starting with higher salary can makeyou feel better, but starting with more vacation one can help you toachieve success quicker and happier.
作者: littlekuo    时间: 2010-8-3 16:38:56

不好意思,这几天比较忙,31号的作业我今天才给你改完
作者: Arant    时间: 2010-8-3 17:18:36

5# littlekuo
托福作文要写400字那么多么?不是说只要250~300么?
我也觉得我例子不够...因为觉得举不出来....You的问题自己也发现了....

谢谢
作者: Arant    时间: 2010-8-5 20:12:39     标题: 8.5作文

可以传作文了!!终于!!!!
作者: chenyyalex    时间: 2010-8-6 15:18:09

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作者: Arant    时间: 2010-8-7 14:59:19

今天开始都是写限时的了....
第一次写还真的会来不及= =

没做任何修改...

后面两个观点展开不够,而且在写的时候思路中间还混乱了一下,没有打草稿的坏处啊!!

下次再努力!
作者: zak_chemistry    时间: 2010-8-7 22:36:04

zak_chemistry 的8。7 作文
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=1135586&extra=
一楼。
谢谢各位啦!!!
作者: ellishu    时间: 2010-8-8 13:28:31

该过了,希望你也帮我改下,谢谢。
作者: ttuuttuu    时间: 2010-8-9 21:27:18

0805修改
SORRY  上週網路出現問題  今天才可以上網 還望見諒
這是一篇寫的很好的文章  沒有拼字文法上的大錯誤
但建議在每個論點的支持例子可以多寫一點去支持他
開頭第一段有點短了點才兩句話。
建議結論可以再重申自己的主張的論點

作者: Arant    时间: 2010-8-9 21:57:05     标题: 8.10作业

先花了五分钟去构思disagree...然后写agree....无比之来不及
其中单词拼错了4个..无语啊!默默改掉了...

其余的完全没改....
作者: Arant    时间: 2010-8-12 16:33:16     标题: 8.12

本帖最后由 Arant 于 2010-8-12 16:35 编辑

这次超时了....没写完...

呜呜
作者: dandan17    时间: 2010-8-13 11:15:11

[attach]149469[/attach]
作者: dandan17    时间: 2010-8-13 22:17:39

请帮我改下,谢谢
作者: zhuminhappyrose    时间: 2010-8-14 12:55:07

楼主改好了,呵呵~
作者: Arant    时间: 2010-8-14 16:07:15     标题: 8.14

每次写到都发现自己好像跑题了是怎么回事...
作者: niunian    时间: 2010-8-15 12:20:31

8.14改好啦~~~
作者: liuxiaoyin    时间: 2010-8-15 21:28:52

评完了~
作者: liuxiaoyin    时间: 2010-8-15 21:30:32

别忘了帮我们回改~~
作者: Arant    时间: 2010-8-16 17:08:04     标题: 8.17

....写了两遍....
越发的对自己直接写的能力表示怀疑了
作者: Colin_h    时间: 2010-8-18 19:00:08

改好啦,请查收
作者: ~逆~    时间: 2010-8-18 21:40:28

Admittedly,
both televisions and telephones are great invention in thethe 去掉) history. However, I personally believe that telephones have changed our life much more than televisions have done.
First of all, telephones have completely changed the life of individuals. The invention of thethe 去掉) telephone allowed communication between people over great distances, which had to take days, months and even years by mail in the past. In 1970s' China, few families owned a telephone. My father told me that a friend of my grandfather once felt sick and wanted to go to the hospital, but he had to walk to hosptial painfully, because he has no other ways to inform the hospital his illness. if he had a telephone, he could have called an ambulance. From such an example we can conclude that the invention of telephones paved a path for new era of communication in some ways.
Secondly, telephones have changed society as it leads to a faster exchange of information and communication. With a faster exchange of information and communication, economy of the society can grow quickly. faster and more accurate information brings faster and more correct reactions, which helps companies stand out in the fierce competition. At the same time, the economy grows.
Thirdly, telephone revolutionized and modernized the world and made great strides in technology. Talking to someone on another part of the world was thought to be an impossibility before, but telephones made that possible. It was(was 去掉) greatly changes the view on the world. On the other hand, telephones also paved the way to more useful inventions which makes exchange of ideas, information and learning accessible to more people around the world. With the help of telephones, great scientists can exchange their ideas, thoughts and discoveries. Then, it resulted in more inventions and greater discoveries.
To conclude, I can not agree more about the invention of telephones having changed our world in depth. To individuals, to the society and to the process of mankind, telephones can be a significant invention.

TV只字不提是不是不太好呢?你可以说TELEPHONE 很好,但还是要提一下TV 然后比较得出TELEPHONE更好.个人意见.加油!
作者: Arant    时间: 2010-8-19 16:13:59

超时超时又超时!!!
作者: chenyyalex    时间: 2010-8-20 16:20:56

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作者: Arant    时间: 2010-8-21 10:08:20

....还是超时...而且还写错了无数的单词...= =...唉....
作者: killacat    时间: 2010-8-22 09:57:14

27# Arant
结构清晰,注意细节
作者: killacat    时间: 2010-8-22 10:38:25

我发不了附件,word发到你qq信箱里了,请注意查收
作者: 执着的丸子    时间: 2010-8-22 12:03:22

小丸子改8.21作文




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