8.10 mresc8 x( \. N- Q8 R& } topic:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries. / y9 K0 S L8 A; h 2 ]& Y# ~4 l+ ]7 x- A! q . r9 e" J. t, p {; h: W Movies and TV programs usually present a historical story or reflect nowadays(这里后置比较好,一般都放在句首或句尾) social problems. The types of the program can be different, like comedy or tragedy, the themes of the programs must (may,后面有or 显然不是绝对的)be base on the life around us, or written materials in the books.I am more familiar with (the)life and cluture in my country, so when I see Movies and TV programs made in my own country, lots of fun and sympathetic responses occure to me., H3 g3 `+ Y1 b3 ^6 h% B There is always bulks of fun in my country's TV programs, especially those historical serials(series). I have read many a classic book(many a ?many classic books) on our country's history, so I can easily fingure (figure)out where the historical serails(series) make a funny mistake in some unnoted details. For instance, a comedy which talks about the doctors have the following scene: A(an) old man who is proficient in Traditional Chinese Medicine is trying a boy's pulse. After that, the man says:"His breathe is so hard to trace.He's in danger!I only know that his blood type is B and who has the same blood type?". How ridiculous it is! I konw not(don't know) so much about Traditional Chinese Medicine but at least(后置,这样说是中式) I know one cannot tell a patient's blood type only by trying the pluse!(举得这个例子应该用过去时态)" A4 X' j [0 [/ n9 d1 A6 a Besides picking(不合适,having) some unreal details in the TV program,I also like to watch modern serails(series) and (没有并列关系,应该用that)reflect on the social problems in my country. One famous TV serails is called Chinese Divorce. It's a kind of tragedy, in my view, that unstable social structure and too much working pressure leads to the family‘s seperation(break). Since I'm living in the country where such socail(social) phenomeno exist, I can easily get the same problems and thinks(单复数不一致), which arise (arouse,唤起)my intrest to go through(看完这样表达不太好) this TV programs.The way in which the hero in the program handle the social problems, on the part of me(是想说对我来说嘛?这样表达没见过), is more interesting than other country's strange way of life. , H h1 K; y( s, G3 i2 j6 A7 j. B" t8 @I know more about my own country than other countries, other countries' program just fail to have resonance on me. This is why I'd like to see Movies and TV programs made in my own country. 建议每次写完后复制到WORD里检查一下拼写错误还是蛮多的~还有句子结构及形式不够丰富~应该变换点句型。有的短语很中式,至于内容嘛~觉得第1个例子还OK,第2个例子看不出来interesting在哪。仅仅是引起共鸣了~~所以构思的时候还是要再多想想啊~~~继续加油!! |
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