Because education is out of human's need and aspiration for knowledge（这句的意思是？）, every country intends to develop it(education) stably and rapidly (and)?should take human's education seriously.(不明白) Some people may argue that government should invest more on young children’s education than universities because young children's developments are always relied (不被动，relies)on outer environment. (孩子的教育依靠的是外部环境，跟本论点似乎没有直接的逻辑关系，至少应该搭桥上去，否则会造成不理解)However, as far as I am concerned, as the cost spent on universities educations is much more than that on children education， and （如果要用and,因为前面用的是名词形式的连接，后面也要这样跟名词形式）we can benefit more from excellent universities education, I incline to the point that government should focus its budget more on universities.
First of all, although the importance of spending money on very young children education should not be neglected, it's much more reasonable for the parents not the government to play the most significant role in children's education（这两句连接不上，更像是两个独立的句子，没有转折关系）. According to the law, as legal guardian, parents should take good care and act on the behalf of their children, including the （删除）education. On the other hand, parents understand better than anyone else about what their children's effective ways of （把children’s移到这里）education are; as the old saying goes, parents are always the best teacher of their kids. Thus it's not necessary for the government to focus too much budget on children education.（我个人认为该论点不直接，不合理，也没有说服力，按这样的话，应该不需要学校的存在了）
Secondly, building up a better environment for universities students is really an urgent thing for government, because the university students are the most immediate successors for the country. The fate of the country, to some degree, is determined by the quality of universities education. For example, the developed countries, such as USA, Canada and Japan, are also （删除）leading with universities education in the world. Better university education can provide more talents, who can promote the development of science, （两个句子并列，加个and吧）improve the development of a country as a sequence. It is really a big deal for the government to invest more on universities education.
The last but not the least one, it costs more money on university education than on young children.(强调句么？it代表什么？) University education needs a great amount of budget such as purchasing teaching facilities, paying professors' salaries, providing the opportunities for brilliant students to go abroad for their further education. Compared with the heavy budget on universities, young children education seems to a big relief to the government, because the children only need the government to provide them the classrooms for studying and the teaching materials which are relatively much cheaper than the teaching materials(that) in university.
In conclusion, although I agree that young children education is also important for the country, the investment of university education can be much more urgent. A better university education provides the country marked outstanding people and guarantees a bright future of the country. Thus there are considerable benefits for (these considerable benefits render)the government to (删除)focus on more budgets on universities education than on（删除） young children.
话说8.3的题目
应该是这个咯
In order to become financially responsible adults, children should manage their own money at a young age.
跟你写得不一样，没法帮你看咯~作者: paooozhixia163 时间: 2011-8-5 08:19:52
抱歉我权限不够还不能上传附件，我贴这儿没问题吧？~~
Agree or Disagree, in order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
Outstanding people always stand out.
1. The capability of innovation is essential for people to win the heated competition in recent days.
2. Trying new things can bring about a lot of surprise in their way.
3. Taking the rare risks, which most people are
I disagree with the statement that people who are similar with others （加rather意思更明确，个人意见，或为避免与下文的重复，用comparing with who）than differ from them are more probable to succeed eventually. From my perspective, outstanding people always stand out, so the man who wants to win always has his own special characters rather than following the main stream.
First of all, creativity and innovation are becoming extremely essential to the success because there are rapid and major changes in all areas. To cope efficiently with the environmental pollution, scientists must become more innovative to devise new environment friendly products and implement appropriate adoptions to improve the environment. Business man should be creative to put forward the beneficial strategies and make more profits. Even the students are encouraged to think creatively instead of keeping on conservatively, because increasing number of companies are in favor of employing workers of innovative talent. Thence creativity and innovation are advantageous for people to gain success in his area.
In further, people whose thoughts differ from others’ may be more potential to be successful. On the one hand, a man who used to think matters from another angle could find out the potential benefits from them. The most well regarded example is Bill Gate（Gates小错误啦） who is one of the richest business men in the world. When Bill was still an undergraduate student, he showed excessive interest in Computer Science. Not until he received the degree of Bachelor, he decided to leave school and establish his own enterprise, Microsoft. His special foresight and excessive bravery contribute to his success. On the other hand, the special persons are more likely to handle the pressures from risk and have the considerable confidences to move forward to the success. Therefore, people who think unlike others are superior in attaining their achievements to the mass.
Lastly, to the people（person）who succeed（succeeded） in his career (,he) should improve himself and never give up even if they fail(he fails) sometimes. A survey published by US News demonstrates that nearly 80% of the businessmen have met various kinds of failures in their way to succeed. Some of them choose to constantly overcome the fear of failure and struggle again and again, because they are born to live on the edge. Others like most of the ordinary people, however, give up trying another time and return back to their normal lives. Thus, unlike the common people, the final winners are those people who have the strong belief to succeed and the intelligence to remove the obstacles on their way to win.
In conclusion, I incline the idea that people who always varies from others is more possible to gain accomplishment, because the capabilities of creative thinking, special foresight and fearless (fearlessness) of difficulties can lead them to succeed.
8.11 综合
The professor debates the reading passage's idea that there are three disadvantages make the online encyclopedias less useful than traditional ones.
First of all, the lecturer admits that there are several errors exist in the online encyclopedias, he(不是she?!) claims that the printed encyclopedias also have errors. It is much easier for the online encyclopedias to correct the inaccuracies conveniently (和前文easier意思重复，可不要) than for the printed encyclopedias. Moreover, to the traditional encyclopedias, we need to wait a few decades to revise.
Secondly, the professor casts doubt on the reading's passage that the second shortage of online encyclopedias is the hacker. The speaker indicates that there are two strategies to get rid of the problem. One is to put crucial facts on the online encyclopedias that no one access to change the contents. Another one is to employ a special editor, whose duty is （to）focus on monitor (monitoring) the changes and limit the changes.
Lastly, the speaker demonstrates that the traditional encyclopedias focus inaccurately, because of the limited space, the judgments concerning whether the contents are related or not are not accurate. Thus, the traditional encyclopedias don't reflect the interests that people really have. However, the online encyclopedias represent the academic articles, and the various diversity (diversities) of articles are added in to further indicate the main idea. From the speaker's perspective, the different kinds of diversities are advantages in the online encyclopedias.