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作者: sallyremy    时间: 2011-9-10 14:38:53     标题: sallyremy写作版(独立)9.9

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99 20100821NA Some people say we should never be impolite to another person. Do you agree or disagree?
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Showing a polite attitude toward others has been one of traditional virtues of Chinese people. However, in contemporary society, always behaving very politely and respectably to other people may lead to some misunderstanding about a person's perseverance, ability and also has the possibility to be taken advantages of. Therefore, in my opinion, people need to be impolite to another person in some specific situations.



A person should be impolite to another people if his principle or bottom line is challenged. In present society, employers prefer to recruit employees who have their own principles and persist to them, especially in the politics field. Many scandals occurred in the politics field every year in the worthwhile. A politician needs to keep in mind that they should reject illegal benefits predicatively, otherwise they may be involved in the bribes or sex scandals in the future. In this situation, being polite to lickspittle only shows flabbiness and vacillation of a person.



Moreover, never being impolite to others also bring doubts to a person's ability. Take the situation in the conference of a corporation, if a person just simply approves of other employees' opinion to show politeness and respect when he is enquired by his employer about his perspective of the future plan of products developing, he will be considered lack of his own thoughts and creativity. As a result, his ability may be buried and he cannot get the opportunity to perform.



Although presenting a polite attitude is apt to be accepted by others, however, never being impolite to another person also leads to a more serious problem. Some scheming people tend to take advantage of your politeness and earnest help to exploit or plagiarize your ideas of projects. In this situation, a person should fight for his ownership.



In conclusion, a person need to be impolite to other people when his principles are challenged, when his opinions are enquired and when others exploit his ownership of ideas.
作者: venusbloom    时间: 2011-9-10 21:20:42

Showing a polite attitude toward others has been one of traditional virtues of Chinese people. However, in contemporary society, always behaving very politely and respectably to other people may lead to some misunderstanding about a person's perseverance, ability and also has the possibility to be taken advantages of. Therefore, in my opinion, people need to be impolite to another person in some specific situations.
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A person should be impolite to another people if his principle or bottom line is challenged. In present society, employers prefer to recruit employees who have their own principles and persist to them(易混淆), especially in the politics field. Many scandals occurred in the politics field every year in the worthwhile(worldwide). A politician needs to keep in mind that they should reject illegal benefits predicatively(predictably), otherwise they may be involved in the bribes or sex scandals in the future. In this situation, being polite to lickspittle only shows flabbiness and vacillation of a person例子不够详尽.% G4 c( W* R# I+ s( izi O! {9 T8 _' d+ O) R( U$ c! x, d7 k3 F


Moreover, never being impolite(polite to others also bring doubts to a person's ability. Taking the situation in the conference of a corporation, if a person just simply approves of other employees' opinion to show politeness and respect when he is enquired by his employer about his perspective of the future plan of products developing, he will be considered lack of his own thoughts and creativity. As a result, his ability may be buried and he cannot get the(little,不然太绝对了) opportunity to perform.+ R# U9 t' N/ u
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Although presenting a polite attitude is apt to be accepted by others, however, never being impolite to another person also leads to a more serious problem(后面的例子体现的好像不是这句话的意思). Some scheming people tend to take advantage of your politeness and earnest help to exploit or plagiarize your ideas of projects. In this situation, a person should fight for his ownership.! w! |; t9 I. i+ |& H6 r6 g

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In conclusion, a person need to be impolite to other people when his principles are challenged, when his opinions are enquired and when others exploit his ownership of ideas.(第一个理由和第三个个人感觉意思有点重叠)




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