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作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-6-14 19:02:23     标题: 【Daily Writting 作文特训小组】novapeng作业

本帖最后由 sonicjam 于 2012-6-20 13:24 编辑

大家好,我是菜鸟,文章写得很菜,求狠批!
6.14号作业独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Recently, we have so many sources of news and information, so that we can not tell which one is the real one or who is telling the truth.

Nowadays, with the developing of the society, people could get news and information from newspaper, broadcast and internet easily, and these sources of news and information have become more and more. However, sometimes, the same incidences reported by different news institutions are different. So some people argue that we can’t tell which one is the real one or who is telling the truth. Personally, I quite agree with the arguer.
  At the first place, there are much more sources of news and information in our modern society than that ever before, such as newspaper, broadcast, TV set and Internet. Therefore, most of these institutions face dramatically competition with others. If they want to win the competition, they must attract more customers. However, in modern society, most people like to read some interesting or alluring news. Therefore, in order to make their news and information more interesting and fascinating, so many companies decided to exaggerate the facts or change them. In this case, as a common reader, we can’t judge which one is accurate and which one is wrong.
  At the second place, generally speaking, almost every news company represents various classes. For example, the national news and information company always consider the profit of the government, whereas companies established by businessmen, admittedly, regard that the profits of these businessmen are the most important. In this case, even if reporting the same thing, different companies have different views. For example, when the national company and individual news company report a novel commercial law which is beneficial to the government, but harm to businessman, they would inevitably analysis this issue from various aspects. What’s more, the news and information institutions from different country are also view thing from different aspects because of their various cultures and traditions.
  However, in my view, this phenomenon is not a good one. If a news company always report something which is quite different with the fact, the public would never read its news, then the company would face bankrupt. Reporting news accord to the fact is the basic responsibility for every interviewer and news company.
  In a word, as the number of press companies become more and more, the competition among them become more and more dramatic. In order to win competitions with other companies, most companies always tell lies. However, I quite disagree with this incorrect method, which would confuse the public. The public have the right to know the fact and telling the public the facts is the responsibility for every journalists.   

作者: 神探夏洛克    时间: 2012-6-15 00:01:00

标记一下,明天来改~
作者: liang0603    时间: 2012-6-15 11:25:09

lz写的不错,加油哈!
作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-6-15 17:14:56

6.15作业
作者: 神探夏洛克    时间: 2012-6-15 18:27:01

继续加油!
作者: 水果的夏天    时间: 2012-6-16 15:32:41

楼主请过目
作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-6-16 23:01:18

6.16
作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-6-19 01:43:09

6.18
作者: shendaisy0702    时间: 2012-6-19 14:43:30

作文已改。请过目。
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作者: 小强强强强    时间: 2012-6-19 21:35:13

6。18已改

作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-6-20 09:35:07

6.19
作者: 竹叶结    时间: 2012-6-20 10:05:25

已改!
作者: 竹叶结    时间: 2012-6-20 10:18:48

加油!
作者: songlu87    时间: 2012-6-20 18:00:50

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作者: 小强强强强    时间: 2012-6-20 21:05:45

6.19已改

作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-6-27 18:33:58

一周没写,感觉不会写了,今天的题目真心不会写啊
作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-6-28 16:04:37

6.28-nova
作者: dream0611    时间: 2012-6-28 17:54:29

我昨天的作文上传错了 不好意思
作者: dream0611    时间: 2012-6-28 18:33:28

0627 已改
作者: 燕鱼小窝    时间: 2012-6-28 20:06:04

请过目

作者: shendaisy0702    时间: 2012-6-29 14:30:29

0628 作文已改,楼主过目。
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作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-6-29 16:01:33

nova
作者: snowman007    时间: 2012-6-29 16:59:29

6.28 作文已改 请楼主过目
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作者: snowman007    时间: 2012-6-29 17:00:15

本帖最后由 snowman007 于 2012-6-29 17:01 编辑

6.28 作文已改 请楼主过目
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作者: 纯黑色爱恋    时间: 2012-6-30 21:45:24

6月29日作文已改,嘿嘿
作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-6-30 21:57:44

6.30
作者: rrison    时间: 2012-7-1 21:43:04

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作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-7-2 18:23:55

7.2nova
作者: snowman007    时间: 2012-7-3 19:34:10

pengzichaonba 发表于 2012-7-2 18:23
7.2nova

作文已改 请楼主过目
作者: tangrr58    时间: 2012-7-3 22:31:27

已修改
作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-7-3 23:28:10

7.3nova
作者: rrison    时间: 2012-7-4 22:58:03

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作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-7-5 21:59:47

7.5-nova
作者: pengzichaonba    时间: 2012-7-6 22:56:53

7.6-nova
作者: rrison    时间: 2012-7-7 00:54:22

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作者: tangrr58    时间: 2012-7-7 12:37:21

已修改
作者: rayban二代    时间: 2012-7-7 19:38:20

楼主7.6已改好,请过目:





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