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作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-21 01:00:44 标题: 【Daily Writing作文特训小组】by lic158 作业贴

本帖最后由 lic158 于 2012-6-21 13:01 编辑

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If I must make a choice, I prefer the job that pays few salaries but allow me staying with my family and friends. Because, for me, my family and friends are more valuable and important than money, not mention to more advantages of working near my family and friends.
First, I want to say that the time with family and friends is much more precious than the time used to make money. I always remember the good time I have had with my family and friends. The currency of money is a cycle. We use money to buy some things and gain some services, and at the same time we earn money via working. There is no end to make money, but the days are gone forever. Some people may argue that they can work harder and make more money when they are young, even though they are required to leave their family and friends, therefore they can live a better life and have more time with their family and friends in the future. But for me, happiness is simple. Just staying with them I have already felt happy and satisfied, no matter how much I can earn.
On the other hand, staying with my family and friends is good for my job. Because I will always keep myself in a good mood with them every morning, so I will have a good spirit to do my work and a high efficiency, too. Besides, I will not feel lonely and they could also help me face and overcome some challenges. When I have a failure, for example, they can give me a comfort and support, and even help me analyze the reasons of the failure. In fact, though they can do nothing in many times, I also have enough courage to meet any challenge just since they stand behind me.
In a word, I would prefer to stay with my family and friends even though I was paid few salaries.

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-21 21:52:02

本帖最后由 lic158 于 2012-6-21 21:55 编辑

6.21 作文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the car has had greater effect to society than the airplane has to.

I disagree with the statement that the car has had greater effect to society than the airplane has to. Though both of them are traffic vehicles, they have different effects to society. For instance, it is convenient and effective to prefer to a car rather than an airplane to go to work or some places which are not far from your home. But if you need to be on a business trip to a far place in a short time, an airplane would be, of course, a better choice. So the statement above is too arbitrary. Moreover, to some extent, the airplane has had greater effect to society in spirit value than the car has to.

On the one hand, the invention of the airplane has made human's flying dreams come true, which extremely inspires human's confidence and pride about our creative ability. With an airplane we can fly into the blue sky, across big rivers and over valley and high mountains; and we can overlook the world from three thousand feet upper air. On the other hand, the airplane can also demonstrate the technology improvement in many areas such as manufacture, advanced material and stuff. It is because of this progress that the world is becoming smaller and smaller and people can go to more and more places for travel or investment.The airplane changes the world, indeed.

Besides, the airplane also inspires our interests to explore much bigger and further space. Nowadays the aerospace plane has been invented and makes human go into outer space and walk on the moon. This is a miracle. And we are creating more and more marvel.

Finally, I want to say the car and the airplane are both important to our society. Without them, our life will be very difficult.

作者: 秋雨荆州 时间: 2012-6-21 23:37:09

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作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-22 10:03:43

秋雨荆州发表于 2012-6-21 23:37

3Q，斑竹~:lol

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-22 10:09:21

秋雨荆州发表于 2012-6-21 23:37

3Q, 斑竹~

作者: 小强强强强 时间: 2012-6-22 22:38:14

6.21已改

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-22 23:26:37

0622作文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: it's more important for the government to build new housing than preserve old and historic building. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I agree with the following statement that it's more important for the government to build new housing than preserve old and historic building. Nowadays, with the development of science and technology progress, old things are always replaced by new things and the buildings are no exception. To some extent, it is necessary and important for the government to build new housing to replace some antique and dangerous buildings which may threaten inhabitants' life safety.

Besides, building new housing can also be better to preserve old and historic buildings. Some people may say some antique buildings have great historical and art values which will be destroyed if they are replaced by new ones. In fact, the dwellers' activities are more harmful to these values. Thus, the government builds new buildings and makes them move out old ones and into the new ones, which is actually a better measure to protect the old and historic buildings. The government could even build a museum for them, which would make better use of them to communicate their historic and aesthetic values and knowledge.

Moreover, compared to the old constructions, the new ones are able to have their own unique and novel art values, too. There are also many excellent designers who have various of original ideas. With their creativity and hard work the new buildings can be much more beautiful and comfortable for people to live in, which can also contribute to the modernization of cities urban construction.

On the other hands, of course, building new housing also has some disadvantages. For instance, it will use a large amount of money and resources. However, with a population explosion, some old and low buildings have wasted great land resources which may be better utilized via new constructions. As every coin has two sides, we should make comprehensive evaluations on a case-by-case basis.

To sum up, it's more important for the government to build new housing than preserve old and historic building.

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-22 23:30:20

小强强强强发表于 2012-6-22 22:38
6.21已改

3q very much~:handshake

作者: shendaisy0702 时间: 2012-6-22 23:50:58

作文已改，请过目。
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作者: 燕鱼小窝 时间: 2012-6-23 16:51:05

已改，请过目

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-24 00:47:53

燕鱼小窝发表于 2012-6-23 16:51
已改，请过目

3q very much，刚写完今天的作业，实在没精力了，你的文章明天拜读，加油~

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-24 00:48:55

0623作业
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful at working in a group.

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作者: 秋雨荆州 时间: 2012-6-24 19:21:07

燕鱼小窝同学的作业记得给他改一下哦622,623的

作者: siehaha 时间: 2012-6-24 20:08:22

hi, 这个是etako0的旧号码

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-24 22:12:11

秋雨荆州发表于 2012-6-24 19:21
燕鱼小窝同学的作业记得给他改一下哦622,623的

嗯，好的

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-24 23:13:58

siehaha 发表于 2012-6-24 20:08
hi, 这个是etako0的旧号码

3q~加油~

作者: shendaisy0702 时间: 2012-6-25 21:16:33

6/23 作文已改。抱歉有些晚了。
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作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-25 21:30:48

shendaisy0702 发表于 2012-6-25 21:16
6/23 作文已改。抱歉有些晚了。

没事，还是非常感谢，呵呵~

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-25 21:31:48

0624作业：Do you agree of disagree with the following statement:It is impossible to be completely honest with your friend.
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作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-28 01:20:56

0626作文：Do you agree with the following statement: young people nowadays have no influence on decisions that determine the future of the society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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麻烦同组的猛龙过江同学与rrison同学了，你们的大作我会尽快拜读的。。。

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-28 22:19:47

0627作文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: one can learn a lot about a person from the types of friends the person has. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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作者: rrison 时间: 2012-6-29 13:04:24

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作者: 猛龙过江 时间: 2012-6-29 21:53:04

已改，请收

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-6-30 01:20:22

0628作文：Do you agree with the following statement: the fast development of society today is a positive trend. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.

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作者: shendaisy0702 时间: 2012-6-30 22:57:03

作文已改，楼主请过目
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作者: lic158 时间: 2012-7-2 01:31:35

0630 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now.

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作者: lic158 时间: 2012-7-2 01:38:45

shendaisy0702 发表于 2012-6-30 22:57
作文已改，楼主请过目

非常感谢，Daisy同学的建议很有启发性，这么写这种文章确实很耗时，你的大作我一定尽快拜读~加油~

作者: 小麦zhang 时间: 2012-7-2 10:48:50

啊啊啊，昨天出去了，立马补上~~

作者: 小麦zhang 时间: 2012-7-2 11:00:49

补上喽~~

作者: shendaisy0702 时间: 2012-7-2 23:03:44

lic158 发表于 2012-7-2 01:38
非常感谢，Daisy同学的建议很有启发性，这么写这种文章确实很耗时，你的大作我一定尽快拜读~加油~

……谈不上大作。= =我们一起加油才是真的!!

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-7-2 23:47:14

shendaisy0702 发表于 2012-7-2 23:03
……谈不上大作。= =我们一起加油才是真的!!

嗯，加油~

作者: 燕鱼小窝 时间: 2012-7-3 22:13:58

抱歉，晚了些，请过目。

谢谢祝福，加油~

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-7-3 22:35:31

0702作业：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
The most important problem that affects the society today will be solved during my lifetime.
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作者: rayban二代 时间: 2012-7-4 01:48:01

lic158 发表于 2012-7-3 22:35
0702作业：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
The most important problem that af ...

楼主，文章已改好，请过目，错误之处，烦请告知，表示歉意！
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作者: lic158 时间: 2012-7-4 22:45:44

0703作业： which is more important: hiring more teachers or having more facilities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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作者: tangrr58 时间: 2012-7-5 00:02:43

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作者: snowman007 时间: 2012-7-5 20:00:22

lic158 发表于 2012-7-4 22:45
0703作业： which is more important: hiring more teachers or having more facilities. Use specific rea ...

不好意思晚了请楼主过目

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-7-5 21:59:42

tangrr58 发表于 2012-7-5 00:02
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谢谢，指出的问题很有意义，所以去百度了一下，一起学习啊，哈哈~

if引导的条件状语从句的分类及虚拟条件句的判断

1.可以把条件句分为两类:
1).真实条件句(Sentences of Real Condition):凡是假设的情况发生性可能很大.就是真实条件句.例如:
⑴.If I have time . I will help you with this work.如果我有时间会帮助你做此工作的.
⑵.As long as I say anything wrong. you must point it out.只要我说了什么错话.你一定要指出来.
⑶.If time permits. we’ll go fishing together.(如果有时间的话.我们就一起去钓鱼.)
2).虚拟条件句(Sentences of Unreal Condition):当假设是不大可能实现时.就是虚拟条件句.例如:
⑴.If I were you . I would have attended the meeting. 如果我是你的话.就去参加会议了.
⑵.If he had come here yesterday. he would have seen his old friend.假如他昨天来这儿的话.就会看见他的老朋友.
⑴.If it had rained yesterday. we would have stayed at home.(如果昨天下雨的话.我们就会留在家里.)
2..if条件状语从句中虚拟语气的判断
判断是真实条件句还是非真实条件句.只有在非真实条件句中才使用虚拟语气.通过句子意思.看假设的条件是否能够实现.能够实现是真实条件句.不能使用虚拟语气,假设的条件不能实现则是非真实条件句.要用虚拟语气.
判断这个假设是与哪个事实相反.通常有三种情况:①与过去事实相反.②与现在事实相反.③与将来事实可能相反.
3.[后退一步法"
后退一步法是指在准确地判断了该句与哪一事实相反后.按虚拟语气的后退一步法处理从句谓语动词的时态.即:在非真实条件状语从句中.谓语动词按正常情况[后退一步".也就是:
①与过去事实相反.在从句中用过去完成时形式表示.
②与现在事实相反.在从句中用过去一般时形式表示.
③与将来事实可能相反.在从句中用过去将来时形式表示.
主句中则用情态动词would. should. could 等加一个与从句一致的动词形式.例:
⑴.If I had come her yesterday. I would have seen him.
⑵.If I were a teacher. I would be strict with my students.
⑶.If it should snow tomorrow. they couldn’t go out.
4.注意事项
①if条件句中如有were. should. had.可以省去if.并使用倒装语序.
②在现代英语中if条件状与从句中的谓语动词如果是be其过去形式一般用were.

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-7-5 23:46:50

0704作文
It is more important to choose friends that have fun with than to choose friends that will help you when you need them
写的好纠结~也不知道题意有没有把握对，汗~~
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作者: rrison 时间: 2012-7-7 00:20:29

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作者: etako0 时间: 2012-7-7 12:33:00

坐等作业

作者: lic158 时间: 2012-7-13 17:09:26

etako0 发表于 2012-7-7 12:33
坐等作业

非常抱歉，最近一段时间都比较忙，一个星期没上论坛了，可能要8月份才能回归，我会抽时间补上你的作业修改的，加油~

作者: etako0 时间: 2012-7-13 20:15:03

没事了明天就考试啦你也加油

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