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作者: morriscai    时间: 2012-10-5 14:05:28     标题: 【独立写作】morriscai作业贴

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作者: morriscai    时间: 2012-10-5 16:59:58

10.5作文.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, it is much easier for a person to achieve success without family's help than in the past. Use specific reasons to support your answer

I agree with this statement. There are many factors that contribute to a man's success. For example, from personal perspective, a brave heart, an innovative mind and working with diligence. From a team's point of view, he or she needs to cooperate with other people and share. In this information age, the software and hardware condition is much ameliorated than the past, and people tend to be more and more independent. Thus with the advantages of the modern technologies brought by such improvements, individuals can be less dependent on the outer environment, or as this statement claimed, the help from the family.

Let me take one example in the information technology industry to illustrate, when Bill Gates and Paul Allen found the Microsoft company, it was a really small business then and had not much to offer but a single system called MSDOS, and through the help of Bill's mother, Mary Gates, who is a well-connected people, introduced his son to the CEO of the IBM company and had purchased the MSDOS system for the coming IBM-PC. This is where the technology giant started its glories. In comparison, the modern IT companies born within the decade, the Google, Facebook, Youtube etc. share similarities that they started by group of young peoples, the internet are their playground, no deep background, but they had innovative ideas and brilliant minds. I think the internet has made profound changes to the society, for it has provided the equity of knowledge which was specialized and often hard to get in old times now to everyone who can access the internet. In this age, it’s easier for people to become success if he has good ideas, determination and devote to that idea using the modern technologies.

What’s more, the benefit one can get from the parents and relatives seems to be very limited in today’s world. The reason is that the working or the job is so elaborately divided into different categories, one may be asked to be very professional at his or her areas, and thus it becomes important that you improve the expertise skill on your own and the families cannot help much on that. It’s more about oneself.

Finally, in today’s world the modern technology has changed the world we live in. Better service is being provided and inspiring thoughts is widely spread. In order to win the completion and be successful, one should be professional enough and wisely utilize the product provided by the modern ages.

作者: fd笑笑    时间: 2012-10-6 20:43:30

已修改,水平有限,没改多少。。。。提了点意见。
也希望你尽快帮我改改吧~~
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作者: EmmaXu.95    时间: 2012-10-7 16:50:38

不好意思昨天有事耽搁了,也帮我改改哈

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