After learning management knowledge for almost four years, I hope to become a manager at a bank.
In the college, I took part in many social programs to practicing myself, such as the project of Wetland Ambassadors hosted by World Wide Fund For Nature Beijing Office and Coca-Cola Company (Shanghai), in which we beat all the teams from dozens of universities and won the First National Prize, and the project of Keep A Pail of Water from Environmental Protection Foundation (Beijing) where my team got an honorary title of The National Outstanding Team. Besides, as a student member of Publicity Department in Jiangxi Youth Development Foundation established by the Communist Youth League of Jiangxi Provincial Party Committee in August 1991, I helped propagandize it to the public. Also, I took an active part in many kinds of student groups in which I played an important role. In the summer vacation of 2012, I got my internship to be a camp manager in Cnature Conservation Association (Beijing). During these practice, I tried to accumulate more experience and hoped that these practicing would be good for my future.
But I also realize that the knowledge I have learned is not enough. If wanting to go futher in the bank, the ability of understanding useful data and the financial knowledge is indispensable. Therefore, I hope to join the program to improve my ability of analysis and help me to become an effective manager at a bank in the future. 作者: Sissi1 时间: 2013-4-25 23:19:56
the project of Wetland Ambassadors hosted by World Wide Fund For Nature Beijing Office and Coca-Cola Company (Shanghai), in which we beat all the teams from dozens of universities and won the First National Prize 你两个项目都得全国一等将了么? 如果只是可口可乐的话要用限制性定语从句。
If wanting to go futher in the bank, the ability of understanding useful data and the financial knowledge is indispensable. 状语从句的省略,前提条件是主从逻辑主语一致,你从句逻辑主语是I,主句的主语是the ability, 有点问题。。。
呵呵,我英语系的,有点孔乙己,望见谅哈作者: Matthew2012 时间: 2013-4-26 12:48:03