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作者: 囧囧哥    时间: 2013-5-16 10:21:16     标题: 囧哥做语法69

Alaska regularly deposits some of its profits from the sale of oil into a special fund, with the intention to sustain the state’s economy after the exhaustion of its oil reserves.


(A) fund, with the intention to sustain the state’s economy after the exhaustion of its oil reserves
(B) fund, the intention of which is to sustain the state’s economy after they have exhausted their oil reserves
(C) fund intended to sustain the state’s economy after oil reserves are exhausted
(D) fund intended to sustain the state’s economy after exhausting its oil reserves
(E) fund that they intend to sustain the state’s economy after oil reserves are exhausted

考察修饰的简洁性
A. With结构是状语,修饰整个句子的或者是修饰主语,表示伴随或者是结果,但是这里的Intention是fund发出的,所以不对,而且With结构后面一般加简单的名词,而不是像A中名词后面有冗长的修饰成分
B. They指代有歧义,到底是deposits,还是profits
C. 正确
D. after exhausting 这个现在分词短语的逻辑主语是句子的主语,但是原文没有明确给出消耗油的发出者
E. They指代有问题而且表达比较啰嗦
技巧:SVO,with结构一般都是有风险的,要么是修饰错误,要么是修饰不简洁。




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