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作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-18 11:59:37     标题: 【口语小组】Fiona作业贴

本帖最后由 Fiona小福 于 2013-5-31 02:58 编辑

Gather ye rosebuds while ye may,
Old Time is still a-flying:
And this same flower that smiles today;
To-morrow will be dying.
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5.31题目
Task 1.Your friend want to get better grades, what advice you may give to your friend. Please give specific details and examples in your explanation.


Task 2. Do you agree or disagree that to be successful, a person should study in the university? Use specific reason and example to support your answer.


Task 3-6 TPO 22



5.30题目
Task 1. Who is the person you admire the most? Please give specific details and examples in your explanation.

Task 2. Some people believe that students who want to go to university after graduation from high school should have about one year's time to get a job to obtain work experience or have a travel to enlarge their vision. Do you agree or disagree? What’s your opinion?

Task 3-6 TPO 23

5.29题目
第一次尝试严格卡15s准备和一遍录……求狠拍,再给评个分~~~~~~~~
Task 1. What type of music do you enjoy most? Explain why you enjoy this type of music. Include reasons and details in you explanation.

Task 2.Do you prefer driving or taking public transportation?


Task 3-6 TPO 24
The woman expresses her opinion about the student’s proposal. State her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

Using the example of the macaw from the lecture, explain the concept of a flagship species

Briefly summarize the problem the speakers are discussing. Then state which solution you would recommend. Explain the reasons for your recommendation.

Using the examples from the lecture, discuss two types of narrators that an author of fiction might use.

说的太紧张和磕巴,还有好多单词和时态说错了……唉

5.22题目
Task 1.Describe your favorite place to shop for clothes. Explain why you like to go there for clothes. Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.


Task2. Do you prefer to write a long essay or give a speech in front of class for a assignment? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


5.21题目
Task 1. Talk about a subject that you think is important but you do not enjoy studying. Explain why it is important but you do not enjoy studying it.

Task 2. Some people use products without reading the instruction, others read instruction before using . Which one do you think is better?

Task 3-6 TPO 16


5.20题目
Task 1. Decribe a friend of yours. Explain how you become friends,please include reasons and details in your response.


Task 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Bosses should require employee to wear the formal cloth instead of the casual cloth. Use specific reasons and details to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO 17


5.11题目
Task 1
If you had a chance to travel to the outer space, will you to or not? Give your specific reasons.


Task 2
Do you agree with the statement that Artists and musicians are important to the society. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-18 12:00:25

本帖最后由 Fiona小福 于 2013-5-18 12:25 编辑

Task 1
If you had a chance to travel to the outer space, will you to or not? Give your specific reasons.


Task 2
Do you agree with the statement that Artists and musicians are important to the society. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-18 12:27:16

时间有点超是因为点停止点的慢了。。
作者: 糖甜甜    时间: 2013-5-18 23:40:22

本帖最后由 糖甜甜 于 2013-5-18 23:41 编辑

童鞋这个不是518的题目,请注意看沙发的公告
1.语速合适
2.吐字清晰,语调自然
3.表意明确。挑个句法的问题,This kind of experience won't be able to have应该是we won't be able to have this kind of experience或者是This is a kind of experience that we won't be able to have
4.内容上挺好的。
就是task 1的时候说了三个理由,但是每个都没怎么展开,建议只说一两个论点就好
作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-20 03:35:27

糖甜甜 发表于 2013-5-18 23:40
童鞋这个不是518的题目,请注意看沙发的公告
1.语速合适
2.吐字清晰,语调自然

谢谢修改~~~!
这句确实是错了,错的真是离谱- -||
理由那个本来你以为是第三点的那句话其实是属于第二点的,但是我现在听听觉得没有相关。。那句话该换个别的相关的说说。
作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-20 03:41:56

本帖最后由 Fiona小福 于 2013-5-20 04:13 编辑

5.20题目
Task 1. Decribe a friend of yours. Explain how you become friends,please include reasons and details in your response.


Task 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Bosses should require employee to wear the formal cloth instead of the casual cloth. Use specific reasons and details to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO 17

作者: 糖甜甜    时间: 2013-5-21 00:11:13

本帖最后由 糖甜甜 于 2013-5-21 00:28 编辑

童鞋请和翼_yoyoyoyoy互评5.20作业
作者: 糖甜甜    时间: 2013-5-21 00:45:28

Fiona小福 发表于 2013-5-20 03:41
5.20题目
Task 1. Decribe a friend of yours. Explain how you become friends,please include reasons a ...

我表示我各听了3遍,发现鸡蛋里面没有骨头。
不过还想再说一点,如果是直接说的,那么perfect。如果是写了稿子的,建议尽早脱稿
作者: 翼_yoyoyoyoy    时间: 2013-5-21 00:52:39

Fiona小福 发表于 2013-5-20 03:41
5.20题目
Task 1. Decribe a friend of yours. Explain how you become friends,please include reasons a ...

嗯。。。我也不知道点评什么哎
就是很好很好~~
^^刚开始听TASK1还想说提醒你强调下怎么become的后面也详细提到了~

作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-21 01:41:53

糖甜甜 发表于 2013-5-21 00:45
我表示我各听了3遍,发现鸡蛋里面没有骨头。
不过还想再说一点,如果是直接说的,那么perfect。如果是写 ...

谢谢~~~!
第一个是说了好几遍才成功- -||,所以零零碎碎的把提纲都快补成稿子了……
第二个只有关键词的提纲,但是是第2遍说……
作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-21 05:30:27

翼_yoyoyoyoy 发表于 2013-5-21 00:52
嗯。。。我也不知道点评什么哎
就是很好很好~~
^^刚开始听TASK1还想说提醒你强调下怎么becom ...

谢谢评改~~~!
作者: 翼_yoyoyoyoy    时间: 2013-5-21 09:59:22

Fiona小福 发表于 2013-5-21 05:30
谢谢评改~~~!

哎嘿嘿。。可惜没帮上什么忙。。。
作者: 糖甜甜    时间: 2013-5-22 00:49:58

童靴请按照板凳的分组进行互评哈
作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-22 04:57:52

糖甜甜 发表于 2013-5-22 00:49
童靴请按照板凳的分组进行互评哈

已经去改了~~
另外,请问有什么更好的方法找到同组同学的帖子吗
我每次都是爬楼去找她交作业的那一楼。
按ID来搜帖子好像总不成功……
作者: 糖甜甜    时间: 2013-5-22 06:59:05

Fiona小福 发表于 2013-5-22 04:57
已经去改了~~
另外,请问有什么更好的方法找到同组同学的帖子吗
我每次都是爬楼去找她交作业的那一楼。 ...

目前看来也只有你说的两种方法了:爬楼,或按ID搜帖子。
我觉得ID搜帖子,还是比较容易搜到的吧:lol
作者: hua_draw    时间: 2013-5-22 10:44:42

5.21的同学点评:
我来了~~
我每个都听了5遍...然后感觉...楼主你说的好好听><我特别喜欢你的咬字,很清楚,还有你的语速,非常自然~不快不慢
我很努力去找茬了..感觉找不到的话就太对不起你啦...
所以- -我从鸡蛋里面挑出了一根小鱼刺..就是在TASK1的时候,我觉得你和我有一个共同的问题就是..大篇幅说的都是我们不喜欢那个SUBJECT,提及为什么IMPORTANCE的时候..我们都是一概而过的说.
0.0我只能找到这个了~~~
作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-22 12:17:12

hua_draw 发表于 2013-5-22 10:44
5.21的同学点评:
我来了~~
我每个都听了5遍...然后感觉...楼主你说的好好听>

谢谢点评!还有谢谢鼓励~~~嘿嘿
是的,task1说的时候觉得importance不是很好说,我说的算是必要性,但不是重要性。
而且我担心到时候时间短更加想不出来。。。你上传的是第1遍的说的吗?
作者: hua_draw    时间: 2013-5-22 13:14:16

Fiona小福 发表于 2013-5-22 12:17
谢谢点评!还有谢谢鼓励~~~嘿嘿
是的,task1说的时候觉得importance不是很好说,我说的算是必要性,但不 ...

Robin给我点评的时候也是提到我的importance说的不够..我在开头一句带过..你在结尾一句带过...囧~~~

诶.我第一遍说不出来...我也很担心这个问题,不过我现在录音比以前快多了...我第一个录了150遍..每次都是一开口...卡了...或者说着说着就乱了..
反正我个人的观点就是...一定不写稿子,脑子想着要点,然后开录..直到录的差不多顺..0.0不晓得对不对..
作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-23 01:18:19

hua_draw 发表于 2013-5-22 13:14
Robin给我点评的时候也是提到我的importance说的不够..我在开头一句带过..你在结尾一句带过...囧 ...

我是必需要写key words,你都完全不用写啊,真厉害!
作者: gywshhz    时间: 2013-5-23 10:39:25

怎么办,我听了好几遍,没找到什么问题,每个理由都有展开,有支持的点。
然后语速也适当,不知道为什么我说得快的,我觉得我2个观点还可能讲不完,但lz讲了3个观点时间也刚刚好
作者: crazyrobin    时间: 2013-5-23 18:03:58

5.22
Task 2 powerpoint读错了
基本两点都没问题
不知道你这个录了多少遍
作者: llsss_1234    时间: 2013-5-29 16:02:59

我个人觉得你说得太快了,可以说慢点,可以就算发音不准也能听清楚。。。
作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-29 23:04:52

llsss_1234 发表于 2013-5-29 16:02
我个人觉得你说得太快了,可以说慢点,可以就算发音不准也能听清楚。。。

谢谢~~~!
我也觉得我说的太急了,其实内容也没多说多少,语调和发音却急急忙忙磕磕巴巴的。
紧张了……

你觉得都听不清楚吗
作者: benjamin8451    时间: 2013-5-29 23:14:20

5.29
Task 1
Task 1


Task 2
Task 2


作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-29 23:25:07

crazyrobin 发表于 2013-5-23 18:03
5.22
Task 2 powerpoint读错了
基本两点都没问题

谢谢robin点评!寄托怎么没有回复提醒,今天才看到。。
嗯,后来听的时候也意识到读错了……

这个task录了得有5遍,我从29号开始录1遍过的了,感觉一紧张就要差很多。
能帮看下1遍录的大概是什么水平吗~~~~~?

作者: Fiona小福    时间: 2013-5-30 02:54:37

benjamin8451 发表于 2013-5-29 23:14
5.29
Task 1
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谢谢!!其他几个task你有做吗?
BTW 你的口语真好
作者: 南宫翊熙    时间: 2013-5-30 17:57:40

小福,29号是我们互改哦~~~
作者: 南宫翊熙    时间: 2013-5-30 18:03:54

TASK 5 try to use the computers in the conputer center 感觉会好一些~~~
TASK 6最好能把两个narrators 稍微开头区别一下就好了~~~我个人感觉两个分开讲比较好些~~~先说一个怎么样,然后一个说完了再说另一个。

其他的都蛮好的呀~~~我觉得衔接都挺自然的,然后楼主MM的口语很清楚,蛮好的~~语速也很好,我也没感觉说太多时态和单复数的问题~~~都还不错~~~
作者: 南宫翊熙    时间: 2013-5-30 18:05:48

哇塞,楼主MM的口语果真非常好,鼓掌,呐喊~~~~膜拜你~~~~~~




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