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作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-2 21:43:22 标题: 【口语小组】kanari作业贴

本帖最后由 kanari 于 2013-8-6 16:26 编辑

7.20 TOEFL 加油！！！！

谢谢帖子内为我评分的各位以及辛勤的版主~
7.20的成绩已经出来了，107=25+28+27+27
口语27，和想象得差不多，谢谢寄托！！让我心定了不少！
7.2homework
Task 1 What suggestions would you like to give to a child who is starting school for the first time? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these suggestions are important.

Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important lessons cannot be learned in classrooms.

======T3-T6fromTPO16=======
T3

自己听了一遍作业，感觉1.口水好多 2.逻辑混乱时间把握不好……

7.3homework
Task 1 What's your favorite toy or game in your childhood?

Task 2 Do you like to be taught by experienced teachers or by new teachers?

7.4homework
Task 1 Describe one thing you didn’t want to do but you were asked to do. Explain what the result of that thing was. Include reasons and details in your response. 

Task 2 Some people prefer to make detailed plans for the future. Others prefer to concentrate on present things and don't make any plans at all. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

7.5homework
Task 1 Describe a historical event that you’re interested in most. Explain why you are interested in it and want to know more about it. Include reasons and examples to support your response.（这题不好说,but we need to prepare for the worst!  ）

Task 2 Some people believe that a person needs to possess natural physical ability in order to be successful at sports. Others believe that any person can become successful at sports through hard work. Which do you agree with and why?

7.6 homework
Task 1 Talk about a memorable experience you had in a restaurant or cafe. Explain what happened and why it was memorable. Give specific details in your response.

Task 2 Do you prefer to have fast food in a fast‐food restaurant, or do you prefer to have food in other kinds of places?

7.7 homework
Task 1 Your friend often feels nervous when speaking in front of a large group of people. What suggestions would you give to your friend to overcome this fear?

Task 2 Do you agree or disagree the following statement: Advertising has too much influence on what people buy.

7.8homework
Task 1 Describe a piece of news or a story that you are interested in recently. Explain why you think it was interesting. Include reasons and details in your response.

Task 2 Some students prefer to take an essay question where they must write an essay to a question. Other students prefer to take a test with objective questions. Which type of exam question do you prefer? Give reasons and examples in your explanation.

7.10homework
Task 1 Among the following three professions, which do you respect the most: photographers, musicians, painters. Explain why.

Task 2 Some people think it is better for students to study in a classroom building. Others think that it is better for students to study on the Internet. Which do you think is better and why?

7.11homework

7.12homework
Task 1 Describe a tool or object that you rely on often in your daily life. Explain why it is important to you. Include reasons and examples to support your response.

Task 2 Some people like to spend their spare time with friends, some people like to spend it alone. Which one do you prefer?

7.14homework
Task 1 Describe a person whom you would like to spend time with. Explain why you would like to spend time with this person. Include reasons and details to support your response.

Task 2 Do you prefer to listen to live music like concert, or do you prefer to listen to recorded music.

7.15homework
Task 1 Describe a period of time in your life that you enjoyed the most. Explain why.

Task 2 Some people prefer to solve a challenge all by themselves. Others prefer to depend on other people's help. Which do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.

半夜录的= = 精神不佳嗓音略带困意 T2尝试了一下one shot

7.16homework
Task 1 Talk about an experience of learning something new. What difficulties do you have to overcome in order to learn it?

Task 2 Do you like to go to one place and stay there for a long time for your vacation, or different places and spend little time at each place?

7.17homework
Task 1 Among the following three types of professions, which do you think makes the most important contribution to society? Primary school teacher, nurse, artist.

Task 2 Some people like to watch or listen to news every day while others do that occasionally. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to illustrate your point.

7.18homework
Task 1 Describe a good study habit you have that is different from other students.

Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who are 18 years old are not mature enough to vote.

作者: 伪理想主义 时间: 2013-7-3 20:25:50

7.2
T1
T2: thinking the others' way and also try to understand others 意思重复
T3: 注意 treatment 发音
also be opened → also open
T4 ...can be the best... 只有两个solution 使用better
T5
T6 听力中internal 的例子是she, not he

语音语调自然
T3-T6不必硬撑时间说完点就差不多
可以看看30分Robin的指导贴https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1596093-1-1.html

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-3 21:51:51

7.3
Task 1 What's your favorite toy or game in your childhood?

Task 2 Do you like to be taught by experienced teachers or by new teachers?

今天看来在22：00前是无法完成TPO15剩下的部分了T-T 半夜补上吧…………

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-3 21:54:00

伪理想主义发表于 2013-7-3 20:25
7.2
T1
T2: thinking the others' way and also try to understand others 意思重复

谢谢谢谢！！！
听得非常仔细啊，我的确有些时候发音不清晰舌头打结。
T6我讲出来以后发现讲错成He了就索性一路错下去了……
原来T3-T6不用撑时间的啊………………谢谢指点！！
下次注意~

作者: 糖甜甜 时间: 2013-7-3 23:47:01

7.3
1.语速合适
2.吐字清晰，发音自然，很喜欢你的语音语调：）
3.表意明确
4.内容方面，有些地方有点重复、啰嗦。比如task 1，barbie doll should be every girl's favorite，和你的主题没什么关系吧。task 2，你说了they are more skilled at teaching， I think this would be better还有they will do a better job at teaching，这三句话表达的基本上是一个意思，不够具体，说一次就行了。建议加入具体细节，比如experienced teacher如何活跃课堂气氛bla bla bla的经历

作者: raisssa 时间: 2013-7-4 19:24:01

Hi 咱倆是不是應該互改？你的7.3的作業在哪裡呢？

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-4 20:11:55

7.4
Task 1 Describe one thing you didn’t want to do but you were asked to do. Explain what the result of that thing was. Include reasons and details in your response.

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-4 20:55:59

raisssa 发表于 2013-7-4 19:24
Hi 咱倆是不是應該互改？你的7.3的作業在哪裡呢？

歡迎互改哦~ 我已經幫你改好了今天的作業=]
7.3作業在“板凳”那一層！
今天7.4的作業好啦，在第7樓！

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-4 20:59:16

糖甜甜发表于 2013-7-3 23:47
7.3
1.语速合适
2.吐字清晰，发音自然，很喜欢你的语音语调：）

谢谢糖糖的点评=]
我也意识到了重复啰嗦的问题……我纯粹拿他们来占地方了……
以后努力在细节上下功夫！！！再接再厉！今天的作业就有想着避免重复，加入细节，有没有进步呢~~

作者: raisssa 时间: 2013-7-4 21:48:13

T1: TAT太強大了，我該怎麼評==。
連用了兩個but...說的時候可能沒太有感覺不過聽得話會很明顯。但是這個問題只有多加練習了。一不注意就會出問題。

T2：第二個論點關於“skilled"沒有發展，只是講了對方做得好的地方，最後只給出了一個就是好的結論。有點像毛主席就是好呀就是好（==）。

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-5 22:45:45

7.5
Task 1 Describe a historical event that you’re interested in most. Explain why you are interested in it and want to know more about it. Include reasons and examples to support your response.（这题不好说,but we need to prepare for the worst! ）

重新听了一遍，有一个单复数不一致的问题~

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-6 21:24:02

raisssa 发表于 2013-7-4 21:48
T1: TAT太強大了，我該怎麼評==。
連用了兩個but...說的時候可能沒太有感覺不過聽得話會很明顯。但是這個問 ...

謝謝你的點評~昨天太晚了忘記回復了= =|||
對的我覺得我的論點發展以及整個邏輯是硬傷。。。要是單看我的script的話估計20分都沒有。。。捉急

作者: yonggg 时间: 2013-7-6 21:28:33

本帖最后由 yonggg 于 2013-7-6 21:33 编辑

T1:大部分发音清晰，声音挺好听，听着很舒服，细节说的很充分。最开始没听清说什么，另外是说天安门事件，89的那个吗？如果是，这种敏感话题适合说吗？
T2:发音很好，细节也足够。但是好像张涵的书说ets喜欢听故事，是不是说了具体的例子更好点？

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-6 21:38:30

7.6
Task 1 Talk about a memorable experience you had in a restaurant or cafe. Explain what happened and why it was memorable. Give specific details in your response.

Task 2 Do you prefer to have fast food in a fast‐food restaurant, or do you prefer to have food in other kinds of places?

作者: raisssa 时间: 2013-7-6 21:40:37

kanari 发表于 2013-7-6 21:24
謝謝你的點評~昨天太晚了忘記回復了= =|||
對的我覺得我的論點發展以及整個邏輯是硬傷。。。要是單看我的 ...

我估計大多數人都不會有什麽很強的邏輯。
你就想想，想去告訴別人一件事，想說服你的朋友該怎麼說。

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-6 21:47:51

yonggg 发表于 2013-7-6 21:28
T1:大部分发音清晰，声音挺好听，听着很舒服，细节说的很充分。最开始没听清说什么，另外是说天安门事件，8 ...

谢谢夸奖的部分，高兴地收下了！
T1讲得的确是有点敏感的事件，主要是我在30秒内真的想不出什么历史事件那就上它吧……不过我想如果考官是外国人的话，应该没什么问题的吧……吧……
【ETS的人喜欢听故事】嗯……你给了我一个很重要的提示啊！好的！以后我会试着用说故事的方式来举例的！！很好的建议~

作者: wstfw 时间: 2013-7-6 21:52:24

不好意思，我晚点给你批改口语(●''●)

作者: wstfw 时间: 2013-7-6 21:53:38

不好意思，我晚点给你批改口语(●''●)

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-6 21:53:55

raisssa 发表于 2013-7-6 21:40
我估計大多數人都不會有什麽很強的邏輯。
你就想想，想去告訴別人一件事，想說服你的朋友該怎麼說。

我最大的問題就是啰嗦。。。如果和我的朋友說的話我估計要說5分鐘，45秒是說不清楚的~
好的我會帶著你的建議試著說話簡練起來的！！！

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-6 21:54:28

wstfw 发表于 2013-7-6 21:52
不好意思，我晚点给你批改口语(●''●)

谢谢谢谢~~不要着急慢慢来！

作者: wstfw 时间: 2013-7-6 22:44:32

kanari 发表于 2013-7-6 21:54
谢谢谢谢~~不要着急慢慢来！

[7.5]
哇塞，我喜歡聽你說的口語。
task1：沒有發現什麽問題，難道說的就是6 4 event，好敏感
task2：“advantagement”好像妹有這個詞。還有一個問題就是沒有detail，如果能舉個例子什麽的就好了。

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-6 23:03:30

wstfw 发表于 2013-7-6 22:44
[7.5]
哇塞，我喜歡聽你說的口語。
task1：沒有發現什麽問題，難道說的就是6 4 event，好敏感

哈哈哈被你一说我也发现了。。。没有advantagement...一紧张多加了个末尾了……
对的我也觉得应该加个例子什么的，论证内容空洞是我的又一个大问题……下次争取多积累例子！谢谢点评~

作者: wstfw 时间: 2013-7-8 10:58:29

哈哈哈，我突然发现我的task2存错了，存了个没有说完的。你将就一下了

作者: wstfw 时间: 2013-7-8 21:25:06

hi！7.7
task1：1.第一句要用过去式I had to give a lot of ... 。2.最后一句，try to speak very slowly and deep breath可以改成take a deep breath before the speech and speak slowly during the speech。3.一共42秒，看到还没到就可以说慢一点，不要留空白。
task2: 倒数第二句，rather than those （which）are not known to us。加一个which~
不知这样批改对不对，你参考参考

作者: adrian小豆 时间: 2013-7-9 21:35:02

亲赶紧练3-6题吧你整体说的挺好的语音语调除了稍微有一丢丢卡赶紧练3-6

作者: yonggg 时间: 2013-7-10 16:22:26

kanari 发表于 2013-7-6 21:38
7.6
Task 1 Talk about a memorable experience you had in a restaurant or cafe. Explain what happened ...

首先抱歉评晚了。
T1很好啊，例子是自己的
T2只有原因，貌似没有具体的例子，我也犯了这个错误

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-10 16:59:18

adrian小豆发表于 2013-7-9 21:35
亲赶紧练3-6题吧你整体说的挺好的语音语调除了稍微有一丢丢卡赶紧练3-6

骚瑞这几天有点小忙！！今晚就练！

作者: jacky841102 时间: 2013-7-11 16:18:53

7.10點評

task1
語速很好，例子也很清楚，不過some太多了

task2
整體很好，我挑不出什麼毛病~

作者: hongfan 时间: 2013-7-13 20:47:13

抱歉，评得有些晚了，task 1， contact后面应该要有with，内容蛮好的，语音语调也可以
task 2， company 后面也应该有with，然后觉得题内容有些乱。。。。一般先说观点，说spent my spare with my friends can help me have a lot of fun. 然后扯一个例子。。。。

作者: zqjin1988 时间: 2013-7-15 10:57:24

lz说得很棒如果是one shot我觉得高分没什么问题诶

作者: w_wby 时间: 2013-7-15 19:22:57

7.14
task1 声音很好听个人觉得用具体的实例比general 概括要好些
task2 挺好的

作者: 南宫翊熙 时间: 2013-7-16 09:38:06

7月15

TASK 1  口音没有问题，内容也很好~~~~
         一个小点：very attractive
         very OK

TASK 2  没什么问题~~~
         第一句话开头的很好
         楼主说的是polish么？？？

总体：很不错~~~~内容发音都很不错~~~~可以适当加快点语速~~~

话说和楼主一天考试：
这里是我的作业贴：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1585953-1-1.html

作者: w_wby 时间: 2013-7-16 22:28:53

陈道明头像的楼主，我们是7.14互评的哦~你似乎木有点评我的我也是7.20战友
这里是地址：https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... xtra=#pid1777030349

作者: jacky841102 时间: 2013-7-17 08:07:51

7.16
task1
我實在聽不出來你講的是神馬:L chandle?
Japanese, different from China??
雜音好大聲...
task2
內容不錯，講的挺好的
雜音還是很大聲...
聽得很辛苦

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-17 12:02:01

jacky841102 发表于 2013-7-17 08:07
7.16
task1
我實在聽不出來你講的是神馬 chandle?

我说的是kendo。。。就是剑道
我说的是日本的sword technique和中国的不一样
不好意思我因为昨天都一遍过没有重听= =|||居然杂音那么大！辛苦你了……

作者: 糖甜甜 时间: 2013-7-18 00:08:56

7.17
1.语速合适
2.发音清晰，语音语调自然，lz的声音很好听呢
3.表意明确
4.内容方面
task 1，你主要是说了children are in a pivotal stage of life when they are in primary school，然后概括了说了teacher如何影响他们，理由挺充分，但是感觉你说的东西不够具体。然后后面又加了一句they can see the potential in the children，这个是第二个论点吗？但是没有展开说明呀。
task 2，挺好。就是你在说information is the most valuabe asset in this age的时候展开得不够具体

作者: 糖甜甜 时间: 2013-7-18 00:26:33

楼主加油，祝周末考试取得好成绩！

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-7-18 21:21:39

糖甜甜发表于 2013-7-18 00:08
7.17
1.语速合适
2.发音清晰，语音语调自然，lz的声音很好听呢

谢谢糖糖的点评！！task1第二个论点其实是为了冲时间用的……所以就没时间展开了讲话之前脑子没有想清楚
展开永远是我的弱项……想得不够深入，似乎无关英语连中文也是这样 T-T

作者: rhino04 时间: 2013-7-18 22:44:55

楼主很厉害啦，只是觉得task2还可以在紧凑一些，要向楼主学习，顺祝取得好成绩！

作者: copyzero2 时间: 2013-7-20 14:51:25

7.18
T1:说的好好，好流利哦~~语音也好听，内容充实
T2：讲的点很好的说，可以举个小例子增加内容充实度
汗，最近比较忙，楼主大大应该已经考好啦，还是住有理想的成绩~~你的口语赞一个~~

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-8-6 16:25:12

谢谢帖子内为我评分的各位以及辛勤的版主~
7.20的成绩已经出来了，107=25+28+27+27
口语27，和想象得差不多，谢谢寄托！！让我心定了不少！

作者: wstfw 时间: 2013-8-6 16:34:40

kanari 发表于 2013-8-6 16:25
谢谢帖子内为我评分的各位以及辛勤的版主~
7.20的成绩已经出来了，107=25+28+27+27
口语27，和想象得差不 ...

恭喜kanari啊！
求问作文有神马经验，就怕上考场妹思路？

作者: kanari 时间: 2013-8-6 17:07:27

wstfw 发表于 2013-8-6 16:34
恭喜kanari啊！
求问作文有神马经验，就怕上考场妹思路？

作文的话，我觉得要点就在于，综合写作，语言精练简要，准确地指出文章观点，不要刻意写废话来充字数。主观写作要表达清楚自己的意识，引用生动的例子，要把它当做写中文作文来写……
详细经验我之后写个总结帖再告诉你好吗~

作者: wstfw 时间: 2013-8-6 17:32:21

kanari 发表于 2013-8-6 17:07
作文的话，我觉得要点就在于，综合写作，语言精练简要，准确地指出文章观点，不要刻意写废话来充字数。主 ...

好滴，还有十几天考试啦，哪里有生动的例子
期待总结帖:-)

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