HK_House 发表于 2013-9-16 00:35
It is better than last time, but there are still plenty of rooms for improvement. Carry On.
HK_House 发表于 2013-9-16 00:35
It is better than last time, but there are still plenty of rooms for improvement. Carry On.
writing101 发表于 2013-9-21 17:58
这篇文章有很大改进空间。
首先作者对题目缺少分析。第二段主体部分一开始Although the thriving of a cit ...
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