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作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-9 12:07:16 标题: [口语小组]xueyicathy 10.25

本帖最后由 xueyicathy 于 2013-10-22 15:14 编辑

HW 10.9
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1884pZ

10.10
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1l8b7o
Feel amazed I can still do it after a couple of drinks. yea, for sure, I'm a little bit drunk now...\

10.11
http://pan.baidu.com/s/11hkYv

10.12
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1byKJX
To be continued

10.13
Q1 & Q2: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1Fu3An

Q3. singing competition

Q4 relict behaviors

Q5. homework

Q6. Strategy

Q3-Q6 are my old answers. I might redo them later this week, after my midterm.

10.14
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qsg9u
The lecture of task6 is not complete, based on my version of TPO.

10.15 T1,T2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/17TdVu

10.16 T1,T2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1zLRm5

10.17 T1 T2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1oW0Qp

10.18
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1suyzu

10.19
http://pan.baidu.com/s/17n44k

10.20
http://pan.baidu.com/s/17TFSU

10.21
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1wy5H2

10.22
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1vI6En

作者: 只有梦想 时间: 2013-10-10 09:18:50

I figure out your style is a little bit different from your former one, which is easier to understand. I really admire your pace of the sentence and the accuracy of every word.

T1
The example is really impressive and useful. Because of you speed, I can understand your meaning clearly. I think it is a good example for me.

T2
Excellent. But I don't know the word 'the most of the time, the class are impromatic?' Could you explain that for me？ thanks

T3
I don't know whether it is right or not, but I will say you should compete for the high score. But limited to your speed in this task, you may miss some practice examples in the conversation. If some details can be included, it must be more brilient.

T4
more and more, pronunciation.
maybe just a 'this reflect the irrational works' is not enough. Try to add 'from this example, we can know how irrational works to make xxxx' Personal opinion, welcome to talk with me.

T5
'during 15 in it?' sorry for my poor listening.The second sentence. It can be more fluent.

T6
without being hurt by the diry. not hurted.

Could you tell me how many sore you get in the first toefl test in oral parten? I want to judge myself because I am close to the former you.

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-10 11:53:40

只有梦想发表于 2013-10-10 09:18
I figure out your style is a little bit different from your former one, which is easier to understan ...

Q2 It should be 'informative'
Q5. it's 'within 15 mins'.

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作者: lhm77499 时间: 2013-10-11 23:37:35

10.10
your pronunciation is very impressive.
t1 I suggest you speak faster. As for your content, good, but I am not sure that natural connection is used properly.
t2your way of speaking is really impressive...:)
t3You have captured all the detials in the listening. "also"have been mispronounced.
t4There are some piece in your response that is irrevelant to the lecture such as patience
t5Good, but like other t3 and t4, you ahve not finished your response
t6rural and village, well I think the change is dscribed as changing for village itself, and tural place has not been mentioned.

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-12 14:06:56

lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-11 23:37
10.10
your pronunciation is very impressive.
t1 I suggest you speak faster. As for your content, ...

Thx. I have some weird accent mixing Chinese and southern american accents.

For the T6, you can listen again. I'm pretty sure the lecture says the people from rural area moving to the village. The village became bigger and bigger and developed into the city finally.

Speaking of the Economics textbook, I suggest you start from the basic ones considering you may not have enough background in math. The advanced level is mostly about math.

作者: lhm77499 时间: 2013-10-12 21:45:14

xueyicathy 发表于 2013-10-12 14:06
Thx. I have some weird accent mixing Chinese and southern american accents.

For the T6, you ca ...

Sorry, after relistening the task six, I think you are right. As I had not included that in my response, I think I should redo it.
Thx for your suggestion! I am now studying mathematical analysis open for math major along with several other math courses, I think after one-year training, I could be prepared mathematically.

作者: lhm77499 时间: 2013-10-13 13:30:20

I am glad we are partners today!
It seems you have completed only two tasks on Oct.12th, it is fine
when it comes to your first task, on career goal, specifically as university professor in your response and you give two reasons supporting it, I think you pronounced "could" rather strange, with [u:]mixed with [ju:]. other things are good. And your second task 2 on night person, this one is perfect. You cannot be early birds, but you can be night person.

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-14 04:41:10

本帖最后由 xueyicathy 于 2013-10-14 04:42 编辑

lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-13 13:30
I am glad we are partners today!
It seems you have completed only two tasks on Oct.12th, it is fine ...

I didn't do the else because I did TPO19 before.
Q3. rec plan

Q4 social learning

Q5. schedule conflict

Q6 adaptations

These are old answers. I might redo them if I get time. I have a midterm exam this Wed, so a little bit busy. And this weekend is my fall break....

作者: nimaoerzxy 时间: 2013-10-18 08:53:37

10.16 号的录音怎么删了呢亲

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-18 09:07:58

本帖最后由 xueyicathy 于 2013-10-18 09:11 编辑

nimaoerzxy 发表于 2013-10-18 08:53
10.16 号的录音怎么删了呢亲

不知道怎么回事，我试了几个不同的链接，都点不进去。我刚重新上传了

作者: Cashvs 时间: 2013-10-18 16:25:20

T1 no one is always XXX没听清楚其他部分都讲得不错唯一要注意的地方是有些单字的重音发的好像怪怪的

T2 This is a pathetic more(?) commitment and more(?) efficient
LZ讲得都不错但总觉得缺乏例子来论证再补上就没什么太大问题了

作者: 失落的谁 时间: 2013-10-18 22:34:54

本帖最后由失落的谁于 2013-10-18 22:36 编辑

17 1/2

1. 发音上 pathetic第一个音节没有卷舌因为没有r
另外on it建议LZ进行连读哈
2. 语法和表达We will be more commitment and more efficient... 这里的commitment用法不对需要一个形容词如 committed
It is a pathetic 这里没有a哈
learn the knowledge right这个表达我觉得不太好建议调整成get the right knowledge
3. 内容上我觉得没什么问题如果逻辑上更严密些更好了 LZ and和so使用的有点儿多可以找些其他的词来替换下

今天实在时间有限就先听了1/2题明天你3~6上传了我们再往你听哈

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-19 04:00:05

失落的谁发表于 2013-10-18 22:34
17 1/2

1. 发音上 pathetic第一个音节没有卷舌因为没有r

谢谢，说的时候还真没注意这些语法问题，想到哪说到哪

作者: nimaoerzxy 时间: 2013-10-19 08:40:36

10.16
好惭愧。。。楼主说得好好。。。话说楼主你是不打算互相点评我的了么:L

作者: 星尘想去看极光 时间: 2013-10-19 13:43:30

发音给个赞

t1还有惊奇的语气在，内容灰常赞
t2按楼主这样不一条条列点说感觉很赞啊，终于见了完全没模板的

渣渣膜拜一个。。

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-19 21:00:13

星尘想去看极光发表于 2013-10-19 13:43
发音给个赞
t1还有惊奇的语气在，内容灰常赞
t2按楼主这样不一条条列点说感觉很赞啊，终于见了 ...

谢谢，刚刚上传了T3-T6.昨晚出去玩，喝多了，没来得及做。今天一早起来做的，现在还有点宿醉。。。。

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-19 21:01:26

nimaoerzxy 发表于 2013-10-19 08:40
10.16
好惭愧。。。楼主说得好好。。。话说楼主你是不打算互相点评我的了么

抱歉，最近有考试，我已经忙晕了，现在就去评

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-19 21:03:11

失落的谁发表于 2013-10-18 22:34
17 1/2

1. 发音上 pathetic第一个音节没有卷舌因为没有r

我TPO13的T4显然受了ben神的影响，你要不改评19号的？而且昨晚喝多了，到现在还有点口吃不清。
谢谢！！！

作者: 失落的谁 时间: 2013-10-19 21:45:27

xueyicathy 发表于 2013-10-19 21:03
我TPO13的T4显然受了ben神的影响，你要不改评19号的？而且昨晚喝多了，到现在还有点口吃不清。
谢谢！！ ...

都行今天太累了再等一下吧。。。

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-19 21:59:02

失落的谁发表于 2013-10-19 21:45
都行今天太累了再等一下吧。。。

辛苦辛苦！我晚上上传19号的。
话说你是天津人？我本科是在天津上的

作者: 失落的谁 时间: 2013-10-19 22:28:59

xueyicathy 发表于 2013-10-19 21:59
辛苦辛苦！我晚上上传19号的。
话说你是天津人？我本科是在天津上的

嗯在哪里上的呀我也在天津上大学

作者: 失落的谁 时间: 2013-10-19 22:32:26

xueyicathy 发表于 2013-10-19 22:31
nankai

额。。学姐呀~~ 幸会幸会

作者: 失落的谁 时间: 2013-10-20 22:45:43

19 3-6
1. 发音上建议注意下th的发音比方说them中th的音录音里听得不是很清楚感觉不太对
            学姐应该是偏向美音的吧但是比如more和work这样的词卷舌不太够又如money和consiously 好像听到了卷舌但是即使是在美语中没有r就不可以卷舌哒

2. 语法上依旧有小地方语法有错误比如she thinks的s被忽略了这种但是不影响大局
            because和so不能在一个单句中使用

内容上4个题没有什么问题细节结构都很完整加油加油哟

作者: 只有梦想 时间: 2013-10-21 08:33:41

T1
clearly, your speed is at the right pace. I don' t understand what the last sentence means.

T2
perfect！这个是我见过的除了crazyrobin之外说的最好的了！！！附上robin对比[attach]269927[/attach]

T3
I think the former part could be longer, how about 30s? Your tone is flawless. Great.

T4
no emotion on his face
At first, I am afraid you might not have time to cover all the points, then I realize I was wrong, you make pecfect of it and the relation ship. You are much better then me!

T5
Again, I recommend you use the example of yourself. But you have done a great job here.

T6
I think there might be a mistake, you might miss the meaning of the first point(or you might just have a spoken mistake).

substitute increase; decrease

I wish I could have an intonation like you.

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-21 08:33:54

失落的谁发表于 2013-10-20 22:45
19 3-6
1. 发音上建议注意下th的发音比方说them中th的音录音里听得不是很清楚感觉不太对
...

谢谢！其实我发音改卷的地方没卷，不该卷的卷了。以后会注意。

作者: 缄素远 时间: 2013-10-22 11:31:59

10.13 终于来了，我一直拖到现在求原谅｡･ﾟﾟ･(>д<;)･ﾟﾟ･｡

T1 说得很有条理，如果有自己的具体细节经历做例子会更好。go to your parents to cry with them的意思是一家三口一起哭么，感觉表述不太对。

T2 个别单词听不太清楚，it won't（是won't吗？） help me。every lesson I learnt from 什么by heart.再细节一点会更好。

（T3~T6 音质太terrible了，听得好难受）

T3 LZ的发音和语速都很棒，内容没什么问题。

T4 内容应该没什么问题，太细节听不清=.,=音质啊音质

T5 话说LZ没有把两个选择说清楚吧，感觉最好还是说一下。

T6 说得还好~

有时间也请点评一下我的谢谢：https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... xtra=#pid1777432906
（如果没时间就算了，毕竟我晚了这么多天 (ノω=;)。。。）

作者: mimimomo666 时间: 2013-10-22 21:32:45

你好，不好意思啊，1021应该我给你评，但是我可不可以推后几个小时，23号之前绝对能评完，抱歉啊～

作者: jocabjfw 时间: 2013-10-22 23:13:52

本帖最后由 jocabjfw 于 2013-10-23 11:02 编辑

你好呀！好像你是我学姐诶我也是南开的。。。。

10月22的作业！
T1 special event这题自己的例子很生动很好呀，建议就是，该卷舌的地方没卷舌或者是卷的不到位就美音的感觉一下子少很多，另外最后十秒，说的底气不是很足的，应该是该说的东西说完了没东西说了么。。不管怎样说口语一定要骚气的说有底气的说！即使后面没实质性的内容！
T2 art and music 这题学姐后半段说的好好啊，强烈点赞有三个单词第一个是 huge u发音不到位，第二个单词是experiment 说太快不标准了第三个是because au这个音总体就是觉得好像是一个单词一个单词再说如果该用连音的地方连起来会更好如果全部像后半段说的就更好了！（我自己口语好渣- -这样评你的口语我很不安。。。。。）

作者: ノ淘气の小叶 时间: 2013-10-23 00:08:03

迟来的10.20点评，因为楼主一直在主贴里面占座但是没传链接，我以为你还没交作业。不好意思。
T1：整体非常连贯，在停顿的时候可以加点you know什么的连起来。
T2：很生动，听得出来情绪在里面，说得很好呀，我技术太烂了指不出什么问题。
T3：感觉你这样说好像也可以哎，要是把阅读里面的那些细节再补充一下可能会更好。
T4：里面说漏了一点，那些人还有个特点就是没接受正规的艺术教育。
T5:交通堵塞是traffic jam。
T6：把第2个的例子里面颜色说出来会比较好，是放个红色的在绿色的前面。
说得比我好多了，都找不出什么问题来..点评的不好，别介意哈。

作者: mimimomo666 时间: 2013-10-23 09:35:50

本帖最后由 mimimomo666 于 2013-10-23 09:37 编辑

10/21
t1:我觉得你的内容很好，而且很有说服力，而且语言组织也不错哎，赞哦~
t2：语调很好哎，而且有细节，对我的水平来说，我觉得已经很好了，也说不出什么改进的，我觉得或者你可以再强调一下那个change吧，多说一说变化在哪里，恩恩~

对了，你是只录了1，2 题吗？是我们的组分错了吗？

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-23 13:44:52

mimimomo666 发表于 2013-10-23 09:35
10/21
t1:我觉得你的内容很好，而且很有说服力，而且语言组织也不错哎，赞哦~
t2：语调很好哎，而且有细节 ...

不是，我还没有上传T3~T6.我之前做过这套，所以有点懒得重做了。

作者: mimimomo666 时间: 2013-10-23 14:02:16

本帖最后由 mimimomo666 于 2013-10-23 14:03 编辑

xueyicathy 发表于 2013-10-23 13:44
不是，我还没有上传T3~T6.我之前做过这套，所以有点懒得重做了。

哦，好吧，那你能帮我评一下我的吗？谢啦~如果你上传了3-6可以告诉我，我再来评完

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-23 15:11:20

mimimomo666 发表于 2013-10-23 14:02
哦，好吧，那你能帮我评一下我的吗？谢啦~如果你上传了3-6可以告诉我，我再来评完

刚刚上传了T3-T6,现在去评你的。

作者: xueyicathy 时间: 2013-10-23 15:41:19

本帖最后由 xueyicathy 于 2013-10-23 15:43 编辑

只有梦想发表于 2013-10-21 08:33
T1
clearly, your speed is at the right pace. I don' t understand what the last sentence means.

谢谢，我说得还是差很远，练得少。
T1的最后一句话是‘this is some atonement'.
T3我研究了Ben神的答案，他的阅读部分只有15~16·秒，4~5秒说男人/女人的观点（同意或不同意）。所以我给自己卡在20秒以内。
T4这题是挺难的，我是因为之前练过这套才可以比较好得掌握pace.
T5这题不一定用自己例子（我还见过有建议不要用自己例子的经验贴），我基本是说第一反射的原因。
T6我重听了自己的答案，好像没错。'When the price of butter increases, the demand of margarine also increases to substitute butter.'没错啊。
我学了7年经济，这个基本原理是不会错的。即使不听那个听力，我也能说出来。

作者: 只有梦想 时间: 2013-10-23 16:49:55

xueyicathy 发表于 2013-10-23 15:41
谢谢，我说得还是差很远，练得少。
T1的最后一句话是‘this is some atonement'.
T3我研究了Ben神的 ...

Oh I see, I made a mistake.
I misunderstood it aimed to one product, so the price goes up and demand decreases.
Sorry for the error.

作者: jocabjfw 时间: 2013-10-23 20:04:41

学姐- -别忘了来听下我的呀- -！

作者: mimimomo666 时间: 2013-10-24 07:49:13

本帖最后由 mimimomo666 于 2013-10-24 07:51 编辑

10/21
t3:说得蛮好的哈，内容都全了，而且语言组织也不错，恩恩~
t4：语言组织依旧很好，而且细节都全了，也指明了reading和listening的关系
t5：其它同学教我的，说你在中间说错时，可以用I mean，来救救：），另外答题模式很好哦~
t6：感觉你转述的很好，而且总结的也很好哎，需要向你学习。不过话说其中一开始听到好多baby's cry，可以稍微换一下其他的哦。另外感觉有点紧张可能，你说得很棒，所以放松哈~

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