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问题是上回没有准备好,而且不习惯写作,估计有很多拼写和语法错误,还是GG24,
这次自我感觉很良好,而且参加过了GRE作文小组,结果却变成了GF24(给G友们丢人了QAQ)
上回GG的独立:
When you are assigned an important presentation for work or school, you prefer to work on
it right away so that you can work on it a little bit every day, or wait until you have a good
idea about the presentation?
我就写了两段,说我觉得应该直接开始准备。
还记得开头是”Inspiration won't come to me unless I go to it.“ I revised this saying for this topic.
两段其实连论据都没怎么想,一段说我自己为例,虽然我是学设计的,我的灵感也是翻了大量书出来的。另一端举了个诺贝尔奖得主例子,是个改了专业的人,我说如果我开始的早的话,错了还有时间改正。通篇没提到presentation。。。感觉比起这次这篇,不仅语句应该各种不通顺....这例子还更牵强...