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标题: Issue81 求拍!! [打印本页]

作者: hmj0426    时间: 2014-4-11 21:01:56     标题: Issue81 求拍!!

第二次杀G了……作文水平还能像我一样的应该不多了吧……满眼都是泪,4月26日就要考试的我才开始写~

这次写的是第81题:
All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

因为没有经验所以这次作文是现在纸上写的,然后敲到电脑上的……失策地是字数严重地超标了……虽然尽量减缩了一下结果还是字数太多……所以求作文压缩意见~

谢谢能给我改作文的各位了!以为之前没怎么来过作文版,所以对于大家窝可能比较陌生,我会尽力帮大家改作文求脸熟的!!

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