Take Bill Gates, the founder of one famous corporation in the world, as an example. If he had not owned high intellect, Microsoft under his control, would have had no opportunity to develop advanced computer operating systems and dominate the PC market triumphantly
最初由 kavent 发布
社会不重视智力因素。层层深入式展开：从当前教育来看，教育系统重视学生的认知和记忆能力，教育更多只是单方面的传授，如历史，哲学等，而这个是社会片面强调“记忆型人才”的后果。当今很多企业中令总裁头疼的问题之一就是创造性人才的短缺，许多征募回来的“优秀毕业生”根本只会按部就班，唯令适从。拿智力因素中的推理来说，是一个管理人员必备的素质，书本上的只是永远都是以前的一种案例参考，相较于今天永远都是落伍的。所以推理让我们以所知来解决所未知，社会要发展不是依赖所知，而是要靠开发所未知。而这是个循环的过程，未知变为所知后才能继续向前开发，因而认知能力也是必不可少。认识不清跟没有认识一样危险！非智力的灌输只能让人陷于从前的淤泥里驻留而埋没。
这道题很能考察我们的思维能力和理解能力。首先审题注意忽略的主体是“社会”，不是“教育系统”，千万注意！我们可以从当前社会的一个组员——教育入手引出问题的根本，然后有效利用题目给出的两个提示性要素——推理和认知大做文章，有效各自展开。这样文章就比较容易上手了。注意我们检验文章是否回应正确的方法：题目问社会重视智力因素吗？你说当前教育不重视，导致社会上很多管理人才缺乏推理，认知能力，但是今天的社会仍在这种情况下不自觉地进行着这种恶性循环。可见问和答是匹配的。有效利用题目给出的信息，特别是列举是全面有效回应的好方法
最初由 kavent 发布
社会不重视智力因素。层层深入式展开：从当前教育来看，教育系统重视学生的认知和记忆能力，教育更多只是单方面的传授，如历史，哲学等，而这个是社会片面强调“记忆型人才”的后果。当今很多企业中令总裁头疼的问题之一就是创造性人才的短缺，许多征募回来的“优秀毕业生”根本只会按部就班，唯令适从。拿智力因素中的推理来说，是一个管理人员必备的素质，书本上的只是永远都是以前的一种案例参考，相较于今天永远都是落伍的。所以推理让我们以所知来解决所未知，社会要发展不是依赖所知，而是要靠开发所未知。而这是个循环的过程，未知变为所知后才能继续向前开发，因而认知能力也是必不可少。认识不清跟没有认识一样危险！非智力的灌输只能让人陷于从前的淤泥里驻留而埋没。
这道题很能考察我们的思维能力和理解能力。首先审题注意忽略的主体是“社会”，不是“教育系统”，千万注意！我们可以从当前社会的一个组员——教育入手引出问题的根本，然后有效利用题目给出的两个提示性要素——推理和认知大做文章，有效各自展开。这样文章就比较容易上手了。注意我们检验文章是否回应正确的方法：题目问社会重视智力因素吗？你说当前教育不重视，导致社会上很多管理人才缺乏推理，认知能力，但是今天的社会仍在这种情况下不自觉地进行着这种恶性循环。可见问和答是匹配的。有效利用题目给出的信息，特别是列举是全面有效回应的好方法
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最初由 sniper613 发布
我把我的syllabus说一下吧：
1． 与作者说的正好相反，现在的学校很强调intellect education.
2． 但是学校忽落了Emotion education.
3． 对于morality也是很重要的一个教育方面。
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intellect的重要性，有利于成功，Bill Gates(Bill哥的成功很大程度上不是intellect而是emotional factors)
。(例子完全错误，正是学校教育追求智力培养才重视考试，而忽略了其他方面，如情商，morality,马加爵是一个典型吧，intellect很高，但是都干了些什么？)
我觉得这个题目说的不是IQ和EQ的问题，而是说是否除了IQ外，应注重其他素质的培养，但是不一定就是EQ的
如果他没有高智商，怎么会抓住那种好的机遇呢？
题目说：社会没有给予智力培养方面足够的重视，比如人的推理和其他认知能力。我的立论是：同意题目观点，没有给予足够重视。
然后围绕这一点进行阐述，逻辑脉络就是：为什么说智力重要----为什么说社会重视不够----如何去加强重视。
至于你们所说的EQ问题，题目根本没有涉及啊？
题目就是问你，你是否认为现在社会给予IQ足够的重视
所以，我认为，如果再牵扯进来EQ的话，可能偏离的有点远。
最初由 sniper613 发布
[B]我的观点是只要和题目里面关键词可以联系的内容都可以写啊
一般意义上讲，IQ基本上是和EQ相对的。题目说没有对IQ重视，但是也没问你如何加强重视啊？
我记得issue里面有些题是关于竞争是否有利,但是我们仍然可以联系到合作阿。
所以我觉得这道题完全可以联系到EQ上面去。
最初由 imong 发布
[B]拜托各位~
没觉得这篇文章语言表达很出色，society does not pay enough attention on it, especially the somewhat unreasonable educational system.后半句怎么看怎么觉..
以下省略...... [/B]
最初由 lovebrian 发布
[B]不知道imong看了我的语言会怎么说~~sigh [/B]
最初由 xqmelissa 发布
[B]Issue 47
Issue 47
Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect—that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills.
社会没有给予智力培养方面足够的重视，比如人的推理和其他认知能力。
正好我也看了飞跃的材料：过来讨论一下，希望大家能够帮我想象这个提纲可行性，我不能确定的是第四段的写法。怎么布局，还是带一下即可。
我的提纲
支持作者的说法：
1)学校里学的知识是job-related的工作，这个我不想和您们争论我只想说这个观点是正对这个题目的。
In schools or colleges, students have to learn the theoretical courses and abide the rigid curricula, which restrain, at certain level, the student culture imagination and cognitive skills.--具体例子就是说叫我们一些practical skills-job-related education比如：我们去工厂实习，老师们会告诉我们不要乱动，好好听操作，将来工作能用。
2). 在工作岗位也是这样，每天重复无聊的工作，比如：我们天津的学生都知道天才公司，很多人以为买盗版光盘的，实际是个大公司，对此我们也不追求，我们回到下面买盗版光盘的地方，一般那些不懂电脑的大妈都回装机，手法比我熟练，我们加入这个“站队”，也只会装机，限制思维，李子不是这样了，李子：在工厂，我们工人以来计算机辅助控制，只需简单按几个纽，一天任务完成，不去想怎么做的，为什么？所以限制思维With the development of the line-production and computer-progress, people in the work are gradually accustomed to the strict courses, as the consequence, it declines the people's enterprise.-secretary-working machines
3). 这个比较麻烦，我想笔锋一转，又怕过分会跑自己d的TS，大家帮我参考：
No doubt, people should abide by the common courses and progresses, in order to conform to an effective group. 但是我们应该怎么做But we should cultivate a field that can prompt individual's reasoning and other cognitive skills.
下面谈谈我对这片文章的理解，请大家予以斧正：恳请大家指正，往往纠正的正确的自己还很得意，希望大家坦言，学习本来就是一个值得争论的话题吗？我个人认为没有绝对的权威，ETS也不是，尽管控制着我们的命运，至少是我们这些人。
As we all know, intellect, including reasoning and other cognitive skills, is an important factor in the process of individual success and social development. However, society does not pay enough attention on it, especially the somewhat unreasonable educational system.
提出观点，很明确，给分，尽管我说了不算。说的是社会忽视了intellect的教育，和我的一样，如果我没有记错pay attention to 才对，这个至少没见过。你那个写成这样，你看可以吗？however, society does not pay sufficient attention to intellect , neither does the somewhat unresonable educational system.或者这样：however, society, education system in particular, does not pay sufficient attention to intellect .教育制度前不要用的那么狠，既然你对教育已经否定了，ETS认为很生气。
Intellect, defined as the capacity for[B][ability of] [/B] rational or intelligent thought[B][thinking], [/B] includes reasoning ability, capabilities of analyzing and solving problems, etc.[B][and the like多几个字，可以不这样][/B] It is a crucial factor in the process of not only individual success, but also the development of society. Take Bill Gates, the founder of one famous corporation in the world, as an example.[B][这个地方被大家否定了，很遗憾，不过我想是这样，该一下Bill Gates, hornored for his great intellect by the world, 将Microsoft公司搞得蒸蒸日上。世界最大了，谁还怀疑世界错了，换个角度，错误也是真理，正如男女之间，不爱也是一种爱，总比故意去伤害好][/B] If he had not owned high intellect, Microsoft under his control, would have had no opportunity to develop advanced computer operating systems and dominate the PC market triumphantly. Therefore, intellect has an important influence on the individual success. As for the development of a society, the function of intellect also could not be neglected[B][今天GITER给我改作文提到这个词，你这个地方我看也改成这样could not be neglected or ignored][/B] . Social development depends on exploring more unknown fields, other than fields being existed. Discovering the unknown areas rests on the ability of reasoning, a factor included in intellect and an impetus for social development. As a result, intellect is a basic factor promoting individual success and social development.大的方面没问题
The phenomenon that society does not place enough emphasis on the training of intellect [U]is produced by [/U] --->[B]results from [/B] the defect加S，下面说SUCH AS of existing educational system to some extent, such as overemphasizing [U]on [/U] 不要姓马?一般我写overemphasizing 长相，你找不到好老婆，overemphasizing 人品，你也找不到好老公scores. Grades, standards[B][one of the most important standards] [/B] to measure [B][measure太俗了fathom][/B] how much knowledge in textbooks being mastered by students, have many defects[这里嫁了为什么前面不佳]. For example, the capability trained in the test is [U][B]the repeating [/B] [/U] to tediously repeat what the book says, while others, such as creative thinking and reasoning, could not be improved from[B][during][/B] this process. A consequence of these standard tests is the fact that some students, owning high scores in the school, have difficulties to fit [B][in qualifing][/B] the job requiring them to use their cognitive skills, other tan [B][rather than][/B] repeating. Only if educational systems could pay more attention on the training of the development of students' whole abilities, jobs requiring more cognitive skills are easier to be taken on than ever. Then, the improvement of educational systems will bring advantages to society.个人认为这一段论述和我的一致，我也会这么写！
对不起，今天太晚了，下一段不予评价，sorry
The approach of solving this problem is that not only educational systems, but also whole society should begin to attach importance to the training of intellect, as doing in some successful companies and universities nowadays. Some successful companies and universities adopt many measures to overcome defects in existing school education. For example, Microsoft has a strict procedure of enrolling employees, including an elaborate designed test which could scientific evaluate various intellect levels of job-finders. Employees in this company will receive a systematic training to improve their comprehensive intellect not only reasoning, but also other cognitive skills. There is another instance about the successful pushing an approach which reduces the pressure of pursuing high scores in Chinese elementary school recent years. As a result, a survey taken by an authoritative organization shows that the general abilities have obviously increasing after carrying out the approach, and recommends other schools to adopt this approach. From these examples, we could draw a conclusion that some good ways to solve the problem of ignoring intellect could be used as references by both educational systems and the whole society.
To sum up, society should pay more attention on intellect by adopting some effective approaches immediately, since it is too important to be neglected. （557 words）
以下省略...... [/B]
拜托各位~
没觉得这篇文章语言表达很出色，society does not pay enough attention on it, especially the somewhat unreasonable educational system.后半句怎么看怎么觉得是一个Toefl语法的选项，还有下面的being existed，前面in the process of success之类的用词，拜托各位不要溢美过头了~"
不要以为xqmelissa是版主就不敢批她的文章，她毕竟也还只是和大家一样在努力而已
这篇没有看，xpmelissa以前的文章看过一篇，感觉句子组织罗索空泛
提出过一点意见，不过马上就被其他人的溢美之词淹没掉了，这样对她本人绝没有好处
也会对其他人产生误导
我绝对支持wxlgh，砖头让人进步
不知道他如果来看这篇文章会批成什么样子，不过我记得他是曾经把galaxysong一篇很不错的文章评成“差劲”，很多人从那篇修改稿中也学到了很多东西。。。
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