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标题: 7月24日 辨析假设的专项练习 [打印本页]

作者: tesolchina    时间: 2015-7-24 00:36:03     标题: 7月24日 辨析假设的专项练习

本帖最后由 tesolchina 于 2015-7-24 00:36 编辑

7月22日的argument练习中暴露出一个严重的问题- 很多同学对于assumption这个概念不太理解。在概括assumption的时候出现照抄或者复述原文的claim的情况。这里有必要再温习一下Toulmin模型,并针对辨析assumption进行专项练习。



argument 153  
The following appeared in a memo to the board of directors of Bargain Brand Cereals.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

One year ago we introduced our first product, Bargain Brand breakfast cereal.

Our very low prices quickly drew many customers away from the top-selling cereal companies.

Although the companies producing the top brands have since tried to compete with us by lowering their prices and although several plan to introduce their own budget brands, not once have we needed to raise our prices to continue making a profit.

Given our success in selling cereal, we recommend that Bargain Brand now expand its business and begin marketing other low-priced food products as quickly as possible.

拿到题目,我们首先要找到claim,也就是结论。  

这里的结论或者claim是

那么这里的data有哪些呢  

data 1:
data 2:
data 3:  

接下来要考虑的就是从data推理到claim的过程里暗含的某些假设或者规律、原则

实际上这里的data 123是要放在一起考虑的
基本的故事情节就是 退出减价产品抢走客人后 其他公司也减价并退出廉价品牌 而公司并不需要涨价来盈利

这里面的假设包括
1. 关于其他公司的计划对BBC的影响:
2. 关于BBC产品的前景:   
3. 关于BBC新产品的前景:  

注意这里的假设都不是复述claim或者data 而是要看到从data到claim的推理过程中一些暗含的关系  
文章既然提出要扩张营业、推出新的产品,那就意味着...... 要按这个思路去考虑 才能找到假设

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argument 95

The following appeared in a memo from the new vice president of Sartorian, a company that manufactures men's clothing.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

Five years ago, at a time when we had difficulty obtaining reliable supplies of high-quality wool fabric, we discontinued production of our popular alpaca overcoat.

Now that we have a new fabric supplier, we should resume production.

Given the outcry from our customers when we discontinued this product and the fact that none of our competitors offers a comparable product, we can expect pent-up consumer demand for our alpaca coats.

This demand and the overall increase in clothing prices will make Sartorian's alpaca overcoats more profitable than ever before.

相信大家可以很轻松的辨认出

claim 1:
claim 2:
claim 3:

注意这种argument有三个claim 而且其中两个又是支持另一个的data

data 1:
data 2:  
data 3:
data 4:  

那么这里可以讨论的假设包括
1. 关于新的供应商:
2. 关于消费者对草泥马毛料大衣的需求:
3. 关于做草泥马大衣的成本和利润:

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Argument 73

The following appeared on the Mozart School of Music Web site.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

The Mozart School of Music should be the first choice for parents considering enrolling their child in music lessons.

First of all, the Mozart School welcomes youngsters at all ability and age levels; there is no audition to attend the school.

Second, the school offers instruction in nearly all musical instruments as well a wide range of styles and genres from classical to rock.

Third, the faculty includes some of the most distinguished musicians in the area.

Finally, many Mozart graduates have gone on to become well-known and highly paid professional musicians.




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argument 77

The following recommendation appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of Hopewell.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

Two years ago, the nearby town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel.

During the past two years, tourism in Ocean View has increased, new businesses have opened there, and Ocean View's tax revenues have risen by 30 percent.

Therefore, the best way to improve Hopewell's economy - and generate additional tax revenues - is to build a golf course and resort hotel similar to those in Ocean View.


这道题我不写了 你们自己写吧
我写过一篇类似的 169  在博客 422楼

希望大家通过这几道题能明白assumption的含义,并尝试回帖练习写主题句概括assumption。



作者: ILOVECHEMISTRY    时间: 2015-7-24 07:25:17

呵呵!王老师辛苦了!出题出到这么晚,又偶遇小强,也是醉了!
作者: dingchenchen    时间: 2015-7-24 16:21:39

本帖最后由 dingchenchen 于 2015-7-26 13:02 编辑

7月24日 辨析假设的专项练习


我觉得从条件与结论来推里面的假设,有的时候会有推出多个假设,有的不止3个,那我们在写的时候是不是就选择其中的3个来写?
有的时候自己推出来的假设跟老师写出来的不一样。


argument 77 )练习:

Claim 1: the best way to improve Hopewell's economy - and generate additional tax revenues - is to build a golf course and resort hotel similar to those in Ocean View.

Data 1:Two years ago, the nearby town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel.
Data 2: During the past two years, tourism in Ocean View has increased, new businesses have opened there, and Ocean View's tax revenues have risen by 30 percent.

主旨句:
It is assumed that the main reason why tourism has increased, new businesses have opened and tax revenues have risen by 30% in Ocean View is that a new municipal golf course and resort were built in Ocean View two years ago.(给Ocean View 带来这么多好处的如果不是因为这些原因,那么Hopewell效仿这个做法也无效)

It is assumed that building golf courses and resort hotels can attract more tourism to Hopewell and thus increase the Hopewell’s economy.(如果Hopewell市不具备旅游业的条件,仅仅build golf courses and resort hotels也是不够的)

It is also assumed that Hopewell’s economy will generate additional tax revenues by building a golf course and resort hotel similar to those in Ocean View. (带来税收利益的有其他方面,如果旅游业的增加带来其他行业的衰退,这样税收也不能增加)
作者: bairong    时间: 2015-7-24 16:51:14

本帖最后由 bairong 于 2015-7-24 19:48 编辑

来啦,先mark,一会儿看,老师辛苦~
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... amp;fromuid=3607808
辨析假设的专项练习,首段和三个假设的主题句,老师帮忙看看有没有问题吧,谢谢~
作者: 牛奔奔    时间: 2015-7-24 19:15:02

学习了~
作者: jingyuege1    时间: 2015-7-25 00:28:33

我来回个贴~
作者: 牛奔奔    时间: 2015-7-25 00:52:01

Claim: Therefore, the best way to improve Hopewell's economy - and generate additional tax revenues - is to build a golf course and resort hotel similar to those in Ocean View.
Data 1: Two years ago, the nearby town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel.
Data 2: During the past two years, tourism in Ocean View has increased
Data 3: new businesses have opened there
Data 4: and Ocean View's tax revenues have risen by 30 percent.

Assumption 1: The success of golf course and resort hotel building in Ocean View two years ago can be applied to Hopewell and reach the desired result today.
Assumption 2: The increase in tourism in Ocean View resulted from the building of golf course and resort hotel.
Assumption 3: The increase in Ocean View's tax revenues is attributed to building of golf course and resort hotel.
Assumption 4: Construction of golf course and resort hotel leads to the growth of new business.

审题的时候有一点疑问,就是这四个data是独自支持结论(即每个data都是引入Golf course and resort hotel的原因),还是依次递进支持的呢 (Data 1 -> Date 2 -> Date 3-> Date 4, 即build golf course and resort hotel -> increased tourism -> more business –> more revenue)呢?

这题的assumption 是按照4个data独立支持结论写的。

作者: 毉易-牧羊人    时间: 2015-7-25 14:29:49

周一见
作者: 雲靉玥    时间: 2015-7-27 14:06:26

终于解禁了~
作者: yolandapiu    时间: 2015-7-27 18:09:20

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作者: tmdxlp    时间: 2015-7-28 00:33:29

本帖最后由 tmdxlp 于 2015-7-28 15:37 编辑

本来的回复是:周末无网络,周一补上

仔细的看了老师的帖子,发现老师你是段子手啊!!!!!

假设1:Ocean View的高尔夫和酒店的建设是导致游客,新企业和税收增加的原因。有可能是政府加大了旅游资源的宣传,出台了的宽松的经济政策。
假设2:Ocean View的成功模式能够复制到Hopewell。Hopewell 有没有旅游资源,社区环境是否安全,有没有场地建立高尔夫和酒店。
假设3:Hopewell 有能力建设高尔夫场地和酒店。就算成功经验能被复制,但是政府有没有足够的资金建设?或者政府能不能吸引到投资者投资。

不知道以上列出的3个假设会不会偏题,谢谢老师。

看了老师所说的,受到的启发很大。不知道老师能不能按照这种模式,也说说其他类型的argument。谢谢老师!
作者: Narcissus-art    时间: 2015-7-28 13:22:26

本帖最后由 Narcissus-art 于 2015-7-28 13:40 编辑

补课
作者: 毉易-牧羊人    时间: 2015-7-28 17:24:12

辨析假设专项练习,王老师辛苦了!
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... amp;fromuid=3458186
作者: ILOVECHEMISTRY    时间: 2015-7-29 08:48:36

18楼
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... xtra=#pid1779705141

作业晚交了,赶上上周有点空,老师的文章却看不了,这周实验室的事情太多。估计作业都要晚交了。

这个专题对我来说很有帮助,自己以前就是重复原文,没有把chaim 和 data的逻辑给点出来。
作者: carino    时间: 2015-7-29 11:16:45

学习一下
作者: 乱羽乱舞    时间: 2015-8-2 20:03:56

前来学习
作者: tesolchina    时间: 2015-8-5 09:07:03

tmdxlp 发表于 2015-7-28 00:33
本来的回复是:周末无网络,周一补上

仔细的看了老师的帖子,发现老师你是段子手啊!!!!!

其实几种不同类型的argument写作指引本质上是没有区别的 只需要在措辞上做一些调整  
作者: 子非鱼v    时间: 2015-8-5 10:30:43

拜读拜读
作者: supersam    时间: 2015-8-9 20:52:52


作者: supersam    时间: 2015-8-9 22:06:38

8.9 outline Argument 77  谢谢老师和同学们!  关于建造费用是否能被收来的税弥补,是不是可以用 be justified by 这个词组?
作者: 范天霸    时间: 2015-8-20 11:24:06

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作者: verne91    时间: 2015-12-4 12:53:03

学校
作者: Jojobar    时间: 2016-9-5 15:33:54

努力练argument中!!!!!!!!
:mad:
作者: Mia5959    时间: 2016-9-10 20:29:23

谢谢老师,认真学习!
作者: 舞动青春---    时间: 2016-9-12 19:51:50

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作者: gettn1225    时间: 2016-9-14 17:59:54






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