30"The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."
题目逻辑分析：
1． Should
凡是题目里有should的地方都要小心，这涉及到人的判断。由于人们考虑问题出发点不同、看问题的角度不同、利益关系、目的不同等，往往会有不同的结论。带有should的题目，都要对其做出解释。
e.g. He should not give up. 他为什么不应该放弃，或者你认为他为什么应该放弃，都要给与合理的解释说明。
本题Issue30 The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people’s efficiency… 其中should be to..表示目的、意图。托福语法中经常会见到the goal of … is to…., 只不过这里又多了一个should，强调目的“应该是”。此题目的一个重点就在于分析这个should.
2. so that..
表示目的，这点不必多说了，基本常识。
本题有两个目的关系，前一个是隐藏的，the goal of… should be to…., 后一个是明显的，用so that引导。必须先分析前一个目的关系，因为后一个时间里在前一个的基础上的。
关键词分析：
Efficiency: 1 : the quality or degree of being efficient
2 a : efficient operation b (1) : effective operation as measured by a comparison of production with cost (as in energy, time, and money) (2) : the ratio of the useful energy delivered by a dynamic system to the energy supplied to it
两层意思，一是更快，二是用更少的投入产出更多的效益。
Leisure: 1 : freedom provided by the cessation of activities; especially : time free from work or duties
2 : EASE, LEISURELINESS
也有两种理解：工作外的空闲；轻松。Leisure time只能是指不工作的空闲时间了
my syllabus
Technology’s primary goal is to make the world a more comfortable to live in .
B1:Technology has helped make people’s life efficient,
In daily life, air conditioner, washing machine, gas-cooker, micro-wave oven
During work, in company, computer, robot, automation
B2 besides efficiency, technology has brought along high economic profits for individual, company, society.
GDP,
the total property of enterprise, a com in my twon
personal riches , example in my family
b3 leisure time ,
A、In retrospect, human has strived to make great progress of technology for the purpose of improving human's efficiency to the maximum, thus the pursuit of the greatest of efficiency has become the basic aim for technology.
（举例，电报，电话，交通工具，工业化大生产）
B、Aside from increasing people's efficiency, the advances in technology have ameliorated the health condition（治愈以往被认为是绝症的流感，肺炎，鼠疫，移植器官或人造器官） and living quality as a whole. （家庭主妇不用花大量时间做家务，周末可以到更远的地方旅游）
C、Nevertheless, technology inevitably leads to some side effects to human being. （例子1：美国硅谷的工作人员迫于市场压力被剥夺了休息时间；例子2：学生在上网查资料时有可能浪费大量时间）
（1）解剖作者的观点，然后明确表示不同意
（2）论述身边的例子，可以，First和后面Nevertheless、Secondly这种信号词的连用是很难接受的，First可以不要
（3）这段大谈技术进步不只是提高效率，还有另外的目的，倒也可以，但是我想这篇文章的论述最好还是针对leisure time的问题进行论述比较贴切，个人观点，仅供参考
（4）论述的重心有点偏，自始至终，文章讲这个技术进步是否带来leisure time，并没有潜藏人们是否利用它，文章的标题就明显的说了进步带来效率的提高，这足以说明这段的论述偏。记住，剖析作者观点也要尊重作者的观点
（5）好好总结一下，看看别人的文章，把问题尽快解决，好吧
By David 作者: 天晴了 时间: 2005-4-4 18:50:14 标题: 先看看提纲吧～～如果大家没时间拍全文 逻辑清楚吗？
Issue30 先看看提纲吧～～如果大家没时间拍 逻辑清楚吗？
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B1 the primary goal--welfare of human. case by case
B2 in efficiency-target societies, efficiency should be regarded no more than an approach or a short-sighted goal
B3 in non-efficiency-target societies, they have the capability to direct achieve the final goal, so no need to emphasize on efficiency
B4 in efficiency-promotion nations，leisure time is a luxury.
（1）背景开头，提出TA增加效率但是没有增加人们的leisure time
（2）词句很好，排比比较有气势，但是这段有个明显的问题，总结到最后是technical advancement提高efficiency，但是你的例子并没有指出提高效率，比说如坐在电脑前和图书馆的学生比较、control the process of manufacturing的工人、可以在开车时睡觉的drivers等等，并没有明显的说清效率的提高，你说呢？
（3）坦白的说，句式过于单一，全文这样的句子太多了，好好总结一下，试着作些改变，好吗？
（4）文章的分析并不是十分的到位，例子欠缺火候，希望能够好好努力，在关键的时候咬牙挺过去，祝楼主顺利，真的好久没见你发文了
（5）By David 作者: davidjacky 时间: 2005-4-5 10:10:13
thesis：Though technological advancement did greatly heighten our efficiency, it is far from the primary purpose of technological development. Actually, I think, the ultimate purpose of technological advancement is to make people's life much easier and happier.作者: ouzhang 时间: 2005-4-6 10:56:59
1.technology has contributed people's efficiency
2.leisure time becomes less rather than more, disadvantage of t.a
3.the primacy concern should be to make people's life more comfortable.作者: davidjacky 时间: 2005-4-7 13:00:13