Originally posted by chenda8201
故我认为还是在最后要回归来说到students 是否能被encourage to question or criticize咯~;看了下面这一段发现就有做到这点~
突出的是要我们讨论to question and criticize是否对social harmony有promote吗,而不是education能帮助society become harmonious~;所以最后那句话写出来偏离了题目的讨论范围,对全文的结论影响很大啊~
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