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TOPIC：ISSUE 150 - "Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete."
WORDS：575          TIME： 01:11:44          DATE：2006-2-6

提纲：
1、人的天性决定是否愿意出门旅游
2、旅游能够让人亲身接触并认识自然，并从中体会到一种成就感。另外，旅游能让人有丰富的经历，学习如何与人相处等等
3、电视和网络的确会对一些没有特色的景点有不利影响。

Whether tourism would become obsolete, with the television and Internet, from which people can become familiar with a great many places that they have no chance to visit is an interesting question. Some people would agree the dim future of tourism, since the seemingly overwhelming power of television and Internet, from which people could find almost everything about a scenary on the Earth. However, after the observation of our daily lives, we can conclude that the future of tourism is still bright. Analysis which supports the assertion is as follow.

To begin with, the nature of a person is the most important factor which would influent people's behaviors. For those who naturally love traveling, the introduction of a place on the television or Internet was the trigger of their tourism, rather than an excuse of avoiding leaving home. It would be easy to imagine that people, who are fantasy in traveling, would show unexpected enthusiasm to the new places that they have heard or seen, and would make plans to travel in the near future. Moreover, for those who are annoyed by the noise, pollution and quick pace of the modern life in the city, although they may not love traveling, tourism is a marvelous alternative for them to relax and entertainment. At this time, the advertisement of a place on television and some information concerning beautiful scenary on the Internet will not become the role of obstacle tourism, but a positive role to advertise the places. And a survey conducted by the Business School of Columbia, shows that most managers would like to travel to some spots in their vocation every year for relaxing. Consequently, although television and Internet can tell people many things of a place, they do not play a negative role to tourism. And the nature of different kinds of people decides their willingness of traveling.

In addition, traveling could help people recognize the nature by their own, rather than through the documentary on the television and the introduction of the others on the Internet, which aroses the honor of accomplishment. When people are traveling, they would be excited to discover something special, which hardly can be seem in their daily life, and such excitement cannot derived from the television and Internet. Moreover, the experiences during the journey are the wealth of one's life. In the journey of some places, people encounter some problems, caused by the nature or by others. And the procession of solving these problems becomes an indispensable experience of one's life, which could teach people how to cooperate with others and some effective methods to overcome the trouble resulting from the nature. Therefore, people can learn much during the tourism, which cannot from the scenary programs on television and Internet.

Admittedly, from certain aspects, the television and Internet can reduce the number of tourism for some spots. Tourists could know more about the places from the scenary to the weather, and make the decision of their destination after comparison of all these factors. For those places lacking unique features, people may ignore them, resulting in an unfortunately end.

To sum up, although the television and Internet produce negative effect on tourism from a certain angle, they cannot undermine tourism as a whole. Because the nature of those who love traveling and people's desire to have an alternative to relax and entertainment, as well as the knowledge and excitement provided by the nature, tourism could not become obsolete.

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Issue150 欢迎排砖，留链互拍

TOPIC：ISSUE 150 - "Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete."
WORDS：575          TIME： 01:11:44          DATE：2006-2-6

提纲：
1、人的天性决定是否愿意出门旅游
2、旅游能够让人亲身接触并认识自然，并从中体会到一种成就感。另外，旅游能让人有丰富的经历，学习如何与人相处等等
3、电视和网络的确会对一些没有特色的景点有不利影响。

Whether tourism would become obsolete, with the television and Internet, from which people can become familiar with a great many places that they have no chance to visit is an interesting question.(读着别扭) Some people would agree the dim future of tourism, since the seemingly overwhelming power of television and Internet, from which people could find almost everything about a scenary on the Earth. However, after the observation of our daily lives, we can conclude that the future of tourism is still bright. Analysis which supports the assertion is as follow.

To begin with, the nature of a person is the most important factor which would influent people's behaviors. For those who naturally love traveling, the introduction of a place on the television or Internet was the trigger of their tourism, rather than an excuse of avoiding leaving home. It would be easy to imagine that people, who are fantasy in traveling, would show unexpected enthusiasm to the new places that they have heard or seen, and would make plans to travel in the near future. Moreover, for those who are annoyed by the noise, pollution and quick pace of the modern life in the city, although they may not love traveling, tourism is a marvelous alternative for them to relax and entertainment. At this time, the advertisement of a place on television and some information concerning beautiful scenary on the Internet will not become the role of obstacle tourism, but a positive role to advertise the places. (是证明本段论点么？)And a survey conducted by the Business School of Columbia, shows that most managers would like to travel to some spots in their vocation every year for relaxing.(如果是argument就是个片面例子J) Consequently, although television and Internet can tell people many things of a place, they do not play a negative role to tourism. And the nature of different kinds of people decides their willingness of traveling.

In addition, traveling could help people recognize the nature by their own, rather than through the documentary on the television and the introduction of the others on the Internet, which aroses the honor of accomplishment. When people are traveling, they would be excited to discover something special, which hardly can be seem in their daily life, and such excitement cannot derived from the television and Internet. Moreover, the experiences during the journey are the wealth of one's life. In the journey of some places, people encounter some problems, caused by the nature or by others. And the procession of solving these problems becomes an indispensable experience of one's life, which could teach people how to cooperate with others and some effective methods to overcome the trouble resulting from the nature. Therefore, people can learn much during the tourism, which cannot from the scenary programs on television and Internet.

Admittedly, from certain aspects, the television and Internet can reduce the number of tourism for some spots. Tourists could know more about the places from the scenary to the weather, and make the decision of their destination after comparison of all these factors. For those places lacking unique features, people may ignore them, resulting in an unfortunately end.（会使某些无聊景点玩完，感觉没太大用）
To sum up, although the television and Internet produce negative effect on tourism from a certain angle, they cannot undermine tourism as a whole. Because（of） the nature of those who love traveling and people's desire to have an alternative to relax and entertainment, as well as the knowledge and excitement provided by the nature, tourism could(can) not become obsolete.
感觉都不是什么严重错误，但就是有点别扭。。。。。
粪兜！加油！：）

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Whether tourism would become obsolete, with the television and Internet, from which people can become familiar with a great many places that they have no chance to visit在这里加个逗号就好了 is an interesting question.(读着别扭) Some people would agree the dim future of tourism, since the seemingly overwhelming power of television and Internet, from which people could find almost everything about a scenary on the Earth. However, after the observation of our daily lives, we can conclude that the future of tourism is still bright. Analysis which supports the assertion is as follow.

To begin with, the nature of a person is the most important factor which would influent people's behaviors. For those who naturally love traveling, the introduction of a place on the television or Internet was the trigger of their tourism, rather than an excuse of avoiding leaving home. It would be easy to imagine that people, who are fantasy in traveling, would show unexpected enthusiasm to the new places that they have heard or seen, and would make plans to travel in the near future.

Moreover, for those who are annoyed by the noise, pollution and quick pace of the modern life in the city, although they may not love traveling, tourism is a marvelous alternative for them to relax and entertainment. At this time, the advertisement of a place on television and some information concerning beautiful scenary on the Internet will not become the role of obstacle tourism, but a positive role to advertise the places. (是证明本段论点么？)这里应该另起一段And a survey conducted by the Business School of Columbia, shows that most managers would like to travel to some spots in their vocation every year for relaxing.(如果是argument就是个片面例子J) 从师兄那里抄过来的技巧，还没用熟,呵呵Consequently, although television and Internet can tell people many things of a place, they do not play a negative role to tourism. And the nature of different kinds of people decides their willingness of traveling.

In addition, traveling could help people recognize the nature by their own, rather than through the documentary on the television and the introduction of the others on the Internet, which aroses the honor of accomplishment. When people are traveling, they would be excited to discover something special, which hardly can be seem in their daily life, and such excitement cannot derived from the television and Internet. Moreover, the experiences during the journey are the wealth of one's life. In the journey of some places, people encounter some problems, caused by the nature or by others. And the procession of solving these problems becomes an indispensable experience of one's life, which could teach people how to cooperate with others and some effective methods to overcome the trouble resulting from the nature. Therefore, people can learn much during the tourism, which cannot from the scenary programs on television and Internet.

Admittedly, from certain aspects, the television and Internet can reduce the number of tourism for some spots. Tourists could know more about the places from the scenary to the weather, and make the decision of their destination after comparison of all these factors. For those places lacking unique features, people may ignore them, resulting in an unfortunately end.（会使某些无聊景点玩完，感觉没太大用）那么,电视和网络对旅游最大的威胁是什么?

To sum up, although the television and Internet produce negative effect on tourism from a certain angle, they cannot undermine tourism as a whole. Because（of） the nature of those who love traveling and people's desire to have an alternative to relax and entertainment, as well as the knowledge and excitement provided by the nature, tourism could(can) not become obsolete.