Argument6
The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
'A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, our proposed club, the C Note, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer, several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. It is clear that the C Note cannot help but make money. 翻译
在Monroe建立爵士乐俱乐部将会是非常盈利的产业。当前，最近的爵士俱乐部也在65英里以外；因此，我们筹建的俱乐部C Note将会占有全部的本地市场。而且，爵士乐在Monroe非常流行：去年夏天10万多人参加了Monroe的爵士音乐节，若干知名爵士音乐家居住在Monroe，Monroe获评价最高的广播节目是平时每天播出的Jazz Nightly。最后，一项全国性研究表明典型的爵士爱好者每年花费近1000元用于爵士娱乐。显然C Note将会赚钱。
11辛苦了！作者: imkris 时间: 2006-3-16 23:45:23 标题: argument6 kill me softly
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syllabus:
1.close to the market does not render the taking of the market.
2.are people in MR really fond of jazz?
3.whether the new club will be profitabl is suspicious(national trend and full consideration).
1. First of all, the arguer hastily assumes that the C Note will have the local market all to itself in that the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away.
2.In the second place, the arguer suggests that jazz is extremely popular in Monroe by citing that over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer. But we cannot find any information about where are these 100,000 fans from.
3.Last but not least, given that jazz is really pretty popular in Monroe, there is no evidence in the argument showing that the C Note jazz club will make lots of money from it.
提纲：
1.typical jazz fan 的花费不能说明jazz club一定就能赚钱；
2.65里之外的jazz club 不能说明C note 一定能取得所有市场份额，并有很好的盈利
3.超过10万人参加jazz festival不能说明jazz受当地人欢迎作者: 北回归线 时间: 2006-3-19 15:09:51 标题: 期待互改啊啊啊~~!
outline:
1.the arguer's assumption that jazz is extremely popular in Monroe is not convincing.
a.over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer
b.several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe
c.the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away
2.Even if jazz is very popular in Monroe, whether a jazz music club would be a tremendously profitable enterprise is still open to doubt.
a.the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight
b.our proposed club, the C Note, would have the local market all to itself
c.a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment