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作者: H-Kevin 时间: 2007-5-19 10:06:01 标题: 发几个雅思考试8分范文，大家参考，最后一个是九分的

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雅思考试8分范文：教育带给我们什么？

雅思范文仅供参考，不可背诵，更不可用于实际考试，否则可能因为雷同得到极低分数，甚至0分。
What can education bring us? Is “high mark” the real destiny of education? As researchers and scholars are investigating this subject, the accurate definition of education begins to have slight difference from what was in people’s mind before. Education, the bridge between teachers and students, the mediator between individual and society, means more than knowledge transmit, but being a wholly developed person in the society.

First, education brings us basic knowledge and skill to survive. From primary school on, students learn subjects like Maths, Physics, English, or in other words, academic subjects to gain the initial knowledge of the nature and world, which are extremely useful for our future career. Upon this, students also learn skills like sewing, cooking, and mending bicycles, which help them a lot in their future family life. To this extend, education provided us with fundamental concepts of living.

Second, education can cultivate our sentiment. Apart from academic subjects, art subjects such as music and art seems more interesting toward students. From these subjects, one can enjoy the pleasure of listening to music, try to guess a composer’s emotion when writing a music chapter, or understand the meaning of a piece of drawing, from which process they themselves are edified and assimilated, and finally have their own clear opinion on what is beauty.

Third, education makes an individual adapted to the society. Being innocent and naive, young people always find it hard to immerge into the complicated environment, and feel frustrated. Through education like communication skills, students may know the essence of getting on with other people. This kind of education influences our personality and views everyone as a whole individual in the big family of society.

Above all, knowledge, emotion, and personality form the most important part of the content of education. The aim of education is to teach a per son become a completely developed individual.

Topic: The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in the society. Do you aggress or disagree?

　　Prompted by some incidents of television and film inspired crimes, the issue of whether the government should control the amount of violence in films and on television has been a contentious discussion. Views on the topic vary greatly.

　　Advocates claim that the practice of controlling the amount of violence in mass media is a brazen violation of the people’s basic right to know the truth of the world. For example, some films contain some violence, but they reflect the things happened around us. Rather than producing negative effects on audience, to some extent, these films educate them. Furthermore, violence in films or on television programs cultivates people’s senses of crisis and responsibility, which makes ordinary people and police work better for public security. Consequently, it is irresponsible and foolish to blame the media for violence in our society.

　　However, opponents argue that violence in films and on television is detrimental to audience’s psychology. Taking fantasy for reality, people become aggressive and eccentric. They believe things can be solved by violence. In addition, violence has negative impacts on the stability of society. Research findings reveal that 60 percent of crimes are committed by teenagers after watching films or television which had a large amount of violence. Teenagers are so vulnerable and immature that they cannot judge whether the activities performed in mass media are right or not. As an illustration, a boy killed his younger sister in Australia because he imitated the violent scenes from television programs.

　　In my opinion, the disadvantages of controlling the amount of violence in media outweigh the advantages. But I believe the government should label how much violence the programs contain on the screens, and parents and teachers have responsibility to guide their children and help them to distinguish right from wrong when they watch violent programs.

是否应限制航空旅行

Air travel, once a privilege of the wealthy, has been gaining popularity worldwide over the last few decades. The number of people traveling by air has been growing by leaps and bounds. Some environmentalists, however, propose that air travel be limited, on the ground that it may give rise to a series of problems, including pollution and exhaustion of the world’s valuable energy resources. To my mind, it does not make much sense to restrict air travel.

The most important and obvious reason is that no other vehicle can travel as fast as an airplane. In other words, air travel may be the only and easiest option when it comes to long-distance trips. For example, if a student from China wishes to go to the United States for further studies, the only means of transportation that could send him to the destination is undoubtedly the plane. Also, for people traveling on a regular basis, such as those engaged in transnational business, air travel would mean less time on the road. This will certainly enable them to better prepare for their future tasks, such as business negotiations, both mentally and physically.

In addition, air travel offers the comfort that cannot be found elsewhere. Most people, who have the experience of traveling by air, are bound to miss the snacks and drinks served on board, as well as the smiles on the faces of flight attendants. In some cases, you could even enjoy a favorite movie while on a plane, completely unaware that you are hundreds of thousands of feet above ground.

Last but not least, it is important to bear in mind that air travel is simply a personal choice and should be respected. This clearly means that any attempt to restrict air travel would be seen as a violation of human rights and is both groundless and unjustified.

In summary, despite the various problems arising from air travel, it should not be limited or eliminated. What we should do is to give full play to the function of air travel, by maximizing its benefits while trying to come up with practical solutions to the existing problems, such as developing fuel-efficient airplanes and alternative energy resources.

9分一篇

Task 2: The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity. Thus, some people believe new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　We all know that China’s history is a long and complex one which stretches over thousands of years. With such a long and varied history, it’s hard to accurately define our ‘cultural identity’. For example, in the Tang Dynasty, many people thought that fat women were the most beautiful, but now things are different, and most people think that slim girls are prettier. The same is true for building designs; some things that were desirable in the past are no longer popular.

　　I think that, as a country, we have a responsibility to preserve a piece of our past, but that doesn’t mean that we have to live in the past. Just because my relatives were farmers, doesn’t mean that every future generation has to live in a farmhouse, or even in a house that looks like a farmhouse.

　　Many modern buildings are safer than old buildings, because we have learned how to make stronger buildings that will last longer. I think that modern buildings that incorporate a subtle traditional style into their design are beautiful, but it’s also good for buildings to have a wild, modern, Chinese flavor. Each period of Chinese history is a little different, so we should leave room for new expression.

　　In the future, today’s newest designs may well become traditional. Keeping this fact in mind, I agree that some buildings should be built in traditional styles; however, we should also allow young Chinese architects to weave the essence of the current era into their building designs. The government is not only responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity; it also has a responsibility to allow for continued growth.

作者: tanzhenyi 时间: 2007-5-19 10:26:11

would u mind making friend with me ?

作者: wushasha 时间: 2007-5-19 14:11:09

Thanks for sharing……

作者: yidi mercury 时间: 2007-5-20 22:27:37

;d: 估计这辈子偶是达不到。。

作者: forbeck 时间: 2007-5-20 22:30:46

9分！！！要是考中文的鸭子，我可能连7分都难啊！！！:funk:

作者: H-Kevin 时间: 2007-5-20 23:01:24

哎，牛人还是很多的，我看见同学9。8。9。8眼睛都掉下来了

作者: forbeck 时间: 2007-5-20 23:13:37

原帖由 H-Kevin 于 2007-5-20 23:01 发表
哎，牛人还是很多的，我看见同学9。8。9。8眼睛都掉下来了

9.8.9.8:funk: :funk: 让你同学些个经验贴吧！英语专业的吧？

作者: GF 时间: 2007-5-21 00:25:25

原帖由 forbeck 于 2007-5-20 23:13 发表

9.8.9.8:funk: :funk: 让你同学些个经验贴吧！英语专业的吧？

就是啊～～写经验

作者: H-Kevin 时间: 2007-5-21 08:14:19

对阿，就是英语专业的;d: ，现在教书，实力派的不谈经验，呵呵，主要是没法谈，人家四年都苦学英语，你说我们怎么能有那个实力阿:confused:

作者: yidi mercury 时间: 2007-5-21 11:22:09 标题: 回复 #5 forbeck 的帖子

seven is easy

作者: pearl222 时间: 2007-7-21 17:08:45

:funk: 厲害！！

作者: 67169619 时间: 2007-7-21 18:33:18 标题: 回复 #11 pearl222 的帖子

NIU B

作者: clearsky_luna 时间: 2007-7-21 18:37:22

充分证明了我的猜想：作文还是要靠句型而不是很难的词汇~

作者: H-Kevin 时间: 2007-7-21 19:17:55 标题: 回复 #13 clearsky_luna 的帖子

词汇不是最重要的，尽量不重复就可以了 :)

作者: 冰火NaNa 时间: 2007-7-22 07:30:19

原帖由 clearsky_luna 于 2007-7-21 18:37 发表
充分证明了我的猜想：作文还是要靠句型而不是很难的词汇~

:loveliness: :handshake

作者: gaoping8778 时间: 2007-8-5 16:48:11

Good ones

作者: 涟漪微暇 时间: 2007-8-9 14:59:35 标题: 回复 #1 H-Kevin 的帖子

duoxie

作者: jeanclee 时间: 2007-8-9 20:46:40

版主真好，真敬业，:) 向你致敬！:handshake

作者: ypanda 时间: 2007-8-10 09:49:52 标题: 回复 #6 H-Kevin 的帖子

这个强的不是一点点了

作者: chenruiray 时间: 2007-8-10 11:02:53

7很easy吗？

作者: zhangning418 时间: 2007-8-20 14:53:20

:) 呵呵，“实力派不谈经验”完全赞成，感觉网上有些经验贴容易让人对考试大意，还是一份耕耘一分收获，碰好远得高分的事情总是发生不在我的身上。
谢谢版主分享，下下来用来分析的~~~~~

作者: 绝望的生鱼片 时间: 2007-8-20 18:06:29

为什么最后一篇可以有9分,哪位高人来分析一下,谢谢

作者: 啦啦啦qlm 时间: 2007-8-28 23:29:02

原帖由 绝望的生鱼片 于 2007-8-20 18:06 发表
为什么最后一篇可以有9分,哪位高人来分析一下,谢谢

我有同样的要求啊~~~~~~:loveliness:

作者: czlzy 时间: 2007-10-12 12:22:50

9分是梦想，先谢lz了！

作者: red8me 时间: 2007-12-4 16:21:48

不想说了，牛就一个字。我看我用中文写能不能拼一拼！唉

作者: terry7537 时间: 2007-12-30 15:11:11 标题: 三颗油～

祝大家新年快乐，好运常伴～！

作者: 730711 时间: 2008-2-17 05:59:53

谢谢了

作者: carroll 时间: 2008-7-15 19:54:12

9分那个，仔细看其实用的单词也不是很难，所谓的“高级词汇“
句式也是大家都可以用的
但是那个idea就好，也跳脱出了模版作文的套路
所以关键是有论证，有思想，句式会变化，单词不要重复
能让人觉得耳目一新有你自己的思考在里面

作者: believeruby 时间: 2009-3-13 13:22:41

I just read the last one tho, dont think it deserves full score:(

作者: d9401lizhi 时间: 2009-4-17 21:29:36

thanks

作者: 许二2012 时间: 2012-7-7 18:58:53

DING~~~

作者: 落日飞 时间: 2013-5-11 16:10:44

好东西

作者: elaine2775 时间: 2013-7-15 19:19:15

love the last one, i do enjoy the metaphor about farmers and their off-springs...

作者: woody_jt 时间: 2013-7-28 00:05:59

心向往之

作者: yunjjlong 时间: 2013-8-28 16:38:49

好帖子，顶一个~收了

作者: fishlover1990 时间: 2013-10-11 16:36:15

tanzhenyi 发表于 2007-5-19 10:26
would u mind making friend with me ?

这是土豪土豪我们做朋友吧的意思？2007年已经有这种说法了啊{:t_0004:}

作者: institutum 时间: 2014-1-13 23:45:17

9分Nice！！！逻辑很严密

作者: uknowyun 时间: 2014-1-15 12:29:26

有自己思想的文章才是好文章~

作者: 粥中粮 时间: 2014-2-17 21:02:03

thanks for sharing

作者: chers 时间: 2014-2-19 16:53:48

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作者: dabingdami 时间: 2014-9-7 08:52:57

Thanks for sharing. The most important things I guess are ideas and smoothness of the context.

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