写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Being happy with your job is more important than high salary.
It is everyone’s dream to find a pretty good job which possesses both high salary and elated pleasure. As things stand now, hardly can most of us find such a perfect job in our lifetime. In my opinion, being happy from the job is not as important as getting high salary.
First of all, it is more and more difficult for people to find a perfect job which will entail happiness to them in this society. Groups of refugee through(一个致命的拼写错误影响了大家的理解...抱歉) trash cans for food; workers are not able to meet their basic needs; and even well educated people usually loss their job, since the employment rate in our country is unbelievable low. This fact drives so many people to apply for jobs with few choices except the high salary, and having a gratified job is almost stories in fictions to them.
Furthermore, although living in this high competitive society, there are virtually large amounts of delighted people who own happiness on their positions. Although their jobs do not provide decent pay(是地道的一种用法), or always make them feel heavy stress, but those people, with strong heart and wise brain, never give up of finding the happiness from the job. For most of them, it is the heavy work itself provides happiness for them. They gain confidence and sense of achievements from conquering the work. To conquer is the very nature of human beings from the very beginning. Phiedippides, said seconds before dropping to death two thousands years ago “Rejoice, we conquer!” And it is perfectly logical for some people to believe that happiness follows conquer, and for them, every kind of jobs, especially some containing risks, would supply pleasure to them.(说的是对某些人来说,工作再差也能找到happiness,不过好像的确有些多余)
Finally, the drive of money might be the most important factors that people pursue jobs, since much money can absolutely change our quality of lifestyle. Although some people are not satisfied with their job because of lack of happiness, but the decent pay allows them to visualize the outstanding enjoyment of their lives. Driving luxury car, buying exorbitant clothing and eating delicious foods courage people so much as to striving in their works, and their annoyances during working time will partly be compensated by imagination of life based on high salary.
In conclude, high salary might be more important than happiness from the job, since the former could improve the quality of life and sometimes easier to get. In addition, to the brave and clever person, everything in the life is full of happiness, not to say job.
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Some people like to have their meals with their classmates outside in the restaurants, but I prefer preparing my meal at home. First, I can eat whatever I like if I prepare the meal at home, but in the restaurant, I can only choose the meal on the manu. Secondly, I always have a sense of achievement when I am eating the meal prepared by myself, which give me the confidence and delicious feeling.
It is everyone’s dream to find a pretty good job which possesses both high salary and elated pleasure. As things stand now, hardly can most of us find such a perfect job in our lifetime. In my opinion, being happy from the job is not as important as getting high salary.
First of all, it is more and more difficult for people to find a perfect job which will entail happiness to them in this society. Groups of refugee though trash cans for food(我没看懂什么意思,感觉这句有点多余); workers are not able to meet their basic needs; and even well educated people usually lost(lose) their job, since the employment rate in our country is unbelievable low. This fact drives so many people to apply for jobs with few choices except the high salary, and having a gratified job is almost stories in fictions to them.
Furthermore, although living in this high competitive society, there are virtually large amounts of delighted people who own happiness on their positions. Although their jobs do not provide decent pay, or always make them feel heavy stress, but those people, with strong heart and wise brain, never give up of finding the happiness from the job. For most of them, it is the heavy work itself provides happiness to them. They gain confidence and sense of achievements from conquering the work. To conquer is the very nature of human beings from the very beginning. Phiedippides, said seconds before dropping to death two thousands years ago “Rejoice, we conquer!” And it is perfectly logical for some people to believe that happiness follows conquer, and for them, every kind of jobs, especially some containing risks, would supply pleasure to them.(这段好象说HAPPY比高薪好啊)
Finally, the drive of money might be the most important factors that people pursue jobs, since much money can absolutely change our quality of lifestyle. Although some people are not satisfied with their job because of lack of happiness, but the decent pay allows them to visualize the outstanding enjoyment of their lives. Driving luxury car, buying exorbitant clothing and eating delicious foods courage people so much as to striving in their works, and their annoyances during working time will partly be compensated by imagination of life based on high salary.
In conclude, high salary might be more important than happiness from the job, since the former could improve the quality of life and sometimes easier to get. In addition, to the brave and clever person, everything in the life is full of happiness, not to say job.作者: zifanzi 时间: 2007-8-22 21:35:24
十月金秋小组--第九次作业
写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Being happy with your job is more important than high salary.
It is everyone’s dream to find a pretty good job which possesses both high salary and elated pleasure elated可以修饰pleasure吗？觉得意思有点重复. As things stand now, hardly can most of us find such a perfect job in our lifetime. In my opinion, being happy from the job is not as important as getting high salary.开头观点很明确
First of all, it is more and more difficult for people to find a perfect job which will entail happiness to them in this society. Groups of refugee though trash cans for food怎么没有动词？; workers are not able to meet their basic needs; and even well educated people usually lost their job, since the employment rate in our country is unbelievable low. This fact drives so many people to apply for jobs with few choices except the high salary, and having a gratified job is almost stories in fictions to them.读下来这一段，感觉一直在论述有工作的重要性，后面转到high salary 有点不自然
Furthermore, although living in this high competitive society, there are virtually large amounts of delighted people who own happiness on their positions. Although their jobs do not provide decent pay,可以用decent形容pay吗？我不太清楚啊 or always make them feel heavy stress, but those people, with strong heart and wise brain, never give up of finding the happiness from the job. For most of them, it is the heavy work itself provides happiness to for? them. They gain confidence and sense of achievements from conquering the work. To conquer is the very nature of human beings from the very beginning. Phiedippides, said seconds before dropping to death two thousands years ago “Rejoice, we conquer!” And it is perfectly logical for some people to believe that happiness follows conquer, and for them, every kind of jobs, especially some containing risks, would supply pleasure to them.
Finally, the drive of money might be the most important factors that people pursue jobs, since much money can absolutely change our quality of lifestyle. Although some people are not satisfied with their job because of lack of happiness, but the decent pay allows them to visualize the outstanding enjoyment of their lives. Driving luxury car, buying exorbitant clothing and eating delicious foods courage people so much as to striving in their works, and their annoyances during working time will partly be compensated by imagination of life based on high salary.
In conclude, high salary might be more important than happiness from the job, since the former could improve the quality of life and sometimes easier to get. In addition, to the brave and clever person, everything in the life is full of happiness, not to say job.开头和结尾写得都很好啊：）