另外还有一点which is less crutial but still worth mentioning here, the sense of humor.....
文中可以加一下幽默的成分吗？
刚才在看这一个issue的时候：
Imaginative works such as novels, plays, films, fairy tales, and legends present a more accurate and meaningful picture of human experience than do factual accounts. Because the creators of fiction shape and focus reality rather than report on it literally, their creations have a more lasting significance.
我想到一个句子，可以放在开头，而且无论是哪种观点都可以用：
The viewpoint of the topic seems to be plausible .... otherwise there souldn't have been so many students reading novels under the desk in their history classes.
当然我不会没事在写ISSUE的时候把美国政府骂一遍……
比如说在一个因果关系的题目中（一时想不到），我的观点可能是:
things in this world are much interwined with each other and therefore quite difficult to identify the causal relationships among them. The huge tragedy that happened on Sep.11th, 2001 can, to some extent, be one example. Is it because of the terrorist attacts that the US government decided to take hard actions on international terrorism, or is it the foreign policies of US government that caused the attacks? The answer to this question can be equally puzzled as the one stated in the topic..........