0910G【Try Best】第一小组 issue99 by heliapple

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总觉得没把问题说清楚，而且有点虎头蛇尾
Issue 99
"In any realm of life—whether academic, social, business, or political—the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an idealistic, point of view. Pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options."
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It seems that the words idealistic and pragmatic are just on the opposite, while none of them are dispensible in the way to succeed. They are like twins that bonded together in almost every breakthrough during human history. While, pragmatic and idealistic life styles are two edge swords. They can either help you to get success or block your way leading to a better future. Thinking practically, and being satisfied in who you are and what you do, ones thought would be bridled and passion for life will be lost, moreover, some talent such as inherited ability of innovation will die out before being discovered. No doubt, what is waiting for in the head will be always a mediocre life.  Acting idealistically is also a disaster. Fanciful daydreams could not feed one’s soul and the body. Life is tough and complex, without obeying the rules of reality world, we can go nowhere.  But, do we have a remedy for success? I guess yes, we do. That would be the combination of idealistic thought and pragmatic behavior.

Idealistic thoughts, such as dreams , ideals and imaginations are the source of human development which will never be exhausted, being rooted in human nature. Without them, we won’t become what we are today. Our world is making progress in every field of life because of dreams. To fly in the sky, to land on the moon, to talk with people in the other side of world, they were all ridiculous dreams once upon. If there are no idealists, no dreams, there would be no cars on the road, planes in the sky, spacecrafts in the outspace. Computer, TV, fridge, lamp all of them would be gone. Could you imagine your life without all of them? Fortunately, our forefathers never stopped imagination and dreaming and they were not frightened by the threats, cynicisms and all other obstacles on their way to the truth. Copernicus didn’t, so didn’t Galileo and Bruno. Without the breakthrough they made in science, the lands of Americans would not be discovered. The foundation of United States of American once to be a dream for many settlers, but it came true. Being living equally in the US once to be a dream for the black, but it came true. To land on the moon, travel in the outspace, transplant artificial organs to save dying people, all these dreams have come true. Dreams are just like the beacon standing in the destination that bright and lead your way to success and cheer you up when you are tired.

If dreams are the beacon then pragmatic behavior would be the boat which takes you to the destination. Practical behavior is the kind of behavior which is effective and always compatible with the rule of the human nature as well as the physical world. To accomplish something, we need act practically.  It is just like that we have a blue print of a our dream house, we couldn’t conjure it out like Harry Potter in a second, but we can build it brick by brick using our hands. Successes in all fields were achieved by pragmatic behavior. To found a democratic country and to be independent from England, Civil War was taken during which hundreds of lives were lost.  To earn equality and respect, Martin Luther King made great effort even lost his life to wake up the justice deep inside everyone’s heart. Without the pragmatic behavior, the numerous experiments, Edison couldn’t invent lamp.  Without hard lab work, biologists wouldn’t find antibiotics and other medicines.  In one word, one could not succeed without acting practically.

Do you have a dream?  Do you want a better life? Do you want to find your power and your talent that you have never known? If the answers are yes, just let your dream lead you and act soon.

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Issue99提纲
第一段：解释理想注意和现实主义，陈述各自缺点，并提出自己的观点，即两者的结合才是成功的秘诀
第二段：理想主义的思维，拥有梦想才会有成就，并举例
第三段；现实主义的行动，有了梦想，只有踏实的完成，不脱离实际，才能成功。举例
第四段；　简单结尾



It seems that the words idealistic and pragmatic are just on the opposite, while none of them are dispensible(dispensable) in the way to succeed. They are like twins that bonded together in almost every breakthrough during human history. While, pragmatic and idealistic life styles are two edge swords(double-edged sword). They can either help you to get success or block your way leading to a better future. Thinking practically, and being satisfied in who you are and what you do, ones thought would be bridled and passion for life will be lost, moreover, some talent such as inherited ability of innovation will die out before being discovered. No doubt, what is waiting for in the head (我不太懂这个词组，换成forwardly是否好些)will be always a mediocre life.  Acting idealistically is also a disaster. Fanciful daydreams could not feed one’s soul and the body. Life is tough and complex, without obeying the rules of reality world, we can go nowhere.  But, do we have a remedy for success? I guess yes, we do. That would be the combination of idealistic thought and pragmatic behavior.

Idealistic thoughts, such as dreams , ideals and imaginations are the source of human development which will never be exhausted, being rooted in human nature. Without them, we won’t become what we are today. Our world is making progress in every field of life because of dreams. To fly in the sky, to land on the moon, to talk with people in the other side of world, they were all ridiculous dreams once upon. If there are no idealists, no dreams, there would be no cars on the road, planes in the sky, spacecrafts in the outspace. Computer, TV, fridge, lamp all of them would be gone. Could you imagine your life without all of them? Fortunately, our forefathers never stopped imagination（imagining） and dreaming and they were not frightened by the threats, cynicisms and all other obstacles on their way to the truth. Copernicus didn’t, so didn’t Galileo and Bruno. Without the breakthrough they made in science, the lands of Americans would not be discovered. The foundation of United States of American once to be a dream for many settlers, but it came true. Being living equally in the US once to be a dream for the black, but it came true. To land on the moon, travel in the outspace, transplant artificial organs to save dying people, all these dreams have come true. Dreams are just like the beacon standing in the destination that bright and lead your way to success and cheer you up when you are tired.

If dreams are the beacon then pragmatic behavior would be the boat which takes you to the destination. Practical behavior is the kind of behavior which is effective and always compatible with the rule of the human nature as well as the physical world. To accomplish something, we need act practically.  It is just like that we have a blue print of a our dream house, we couldn’t conjure it out like Harry Potter in a second, but we can build it brick by brick using our hands. Successes in all fields were achieved by pragmatic behavior. To found a democratic country and to be independent from England, Civil War was taken during which hundreds of lives were lost.  To earn equality and respect, Martin Luther King made great effort even lost his life（at the cost of,但似乎改过后需变句子结构，你自己看吧）to wake up the justice （hidden）deep inside everyone’s heart. Without the pragmatic behavior, the numerous experiments, Edison couldn’t invent lamp.  Without hard lab work, biologists wouldn’t find antibiotics and other medicines.  In one word, one could not succeed without acting practically.

Do you have a dream?  Do you want a better life? Do you want to find your power and your talent that you have never known? If the answers are yes, just let your dream lead you and act soon.(最后一段的确没有开头严谨，不过感觉气势很好。)

写的很好，只有一些词语使用上的小问题，我没什么更好的建议，受教了apple.