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Should teachers be paid according to their students’ grades?(37)
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Teaching is considered one of the most respectable careers in most people’s heart, but in fact rather than receiving deserved respect from the community, teachers in China are surviving under overstressed situations in the examination-oriented educational system. Some people even make a suggestion that teachers should be paid according to their students’ grades. As far as I’m concerned, I disagree with this statement and my reasons are as follows.
First and foremost, this payment standard is unfair to teachers. It’s a commonsense (common sense) that different students will have different levels of ability to learn knowledge, so it’s simple that every class will have students who do well or (and) bad in exams. To those who don’t work hard in their courses or absorb knowledge slowly (这里or容易引起歧义，以为是否定句的一部分，可以把两部分位置颠倒一下), no matter how hard the teachers try, they (把前半句（不好好学习的孩子）代替这里的they，用句型：those who XXXX) still can’t get satisfied (satisfying) grades in the examinations. Since most of the teachers have to teach classes with (of，with的意思是老师和40个人一起教) more than 30 or 40 students, they can’t pay (+too) much attention on every (each) individual. And if teachers are paid based on the average performance, low-grade students will drag the class (建议：hold back the overall assessment), resulting in low payment for the teachers. If this situation goes on, teachers will begin to feel overstressed and depressed, and may even give up the job they once enjoyed.
While at the same time, students’ education will be effected negatively if teacher are paid based on the students’ performance. If teachers want to get high wages, they may begin to teach only what students need in order to help them get higher score, hence, students will miss out a lot education that can’t be measured in a test. Moreover, since teachers are always worried about their students’ test grades, they will ingnore students’ mental development and no longer takes time to communicate with students to find their problems in lives. Students who usually get low scores will also feel nervous and sad because they may feel that they have the responsibility for the lowing payments of their teachers. To make things worse, teachers will unconsiously treat students based on their grades, so bad students in their eyes will be ignored sometimes in the class. 这段论证很好，很详细但是不啰嗦
There’s no denying that teaching is a honorable task, for teacher shoulder the responsibility to transfer (bring) useful information to millions of students, but learning is a two- way process, which means students need to study by themselves after having (taking, have多表示有课的状态) classes in school. If one day, we use the students’ performance to determine teachers’ payment (我们习惯在中文里这样用use，但是其实这句型很不地道，建议：If one day teachers' payment is determined by students' performance), we will finally lose the pure essense of education and many wonderful teachers.
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