标题: issue 170[Dancing in the dark]第十二次作业by Camellia1a [打印本页] 作者: Camellia1a 时间: 2009-7-5 22:49:39 标题: issue 170[Dancing in the dark]第十二次作业by Camellia1a
Issue170
"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people."
TOPIC: ISSUE170 - "The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people."
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TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2009-7-5 22:07:27
The surest indicator of a great nation is the majority such as the rulers, the artists, the scientists or its entire people? In my opinion, they share the same importance and either one can not replace another.
First, we could not deny the importance of the general welfare of all its people. The aim of a nation, which most people may agree with, is to make its people live a good life. People who are the foundation of a nation give their leader the rights. Accordingly, the leaders should and must take responsibility for the mass. Welfare is the best way to reflect the degree their leaders concern about them. A good welfare is the sign that the society of a nation is harmonious and it comprehensive nation power is strong. It is impossible for a nation which is full of war to furnish its people a good life. May be most of the mass are living the life which is lack of food and cloth. In this condition, the society can not be stable. Crimes such as robber, theft may happen more frequent and these weaken the nation.
However, we could not ignore the importance of the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. A good ruler, who plays an important role in the society, can perfect the social security network, which enable their people enjoy the best service as well as the lifetime warranty. When people's material life is satisfied, their need of spiritual life is increase. This shows the importance of artists, person who can create works of art to satisfied people's spiritual life. Although people can appreciate works of art from other countries to fill up these deficiency, this kind of manner is harmful for the concentration of a nation and its people is liable to be assimilated by other cultures. So the characteristic culture of a nation is necessary which means the importance of artists should not be ignored. What's more, the invention of scientists is the propulsion that pushes the society forward. Inventions such as mobile phones, computers have changed people's life largely. It is not extravagant to say scientists are the insurance of a better life.
Both the achievement of minority and welfare of the mass is necessary and we could not detach them. If a nation owns a good welfare system but lack of a good ruler, the social order may be disordered shortly. In like manner, if there are no excellent artists, the test of its people may be not high and the quality of life is decreased. What's more, lacking of eminent scientists hinders the development of science which blocks the promotion of people's life as well. On the contrary, if the achievement of the minorities is eminent but people of the nation live a miserable life, the leader is not a qualified one. For he betray the hope of its people and failed to take responsibility for them. No matter how great these achievements are, people will not satisfy with the nation. A nation only has a pretty exterior but the foundation has shaked can not be a qualified one.
In general, a nation is consisting of both the minority and the general people. So partial to either one is unwise. Only they reach the balance, can we say the nation is a finer one. 作者: losingwood 时间: 2009-7-8 22:42:15
The surest indicator of a great nation is the majority such as the rulers, the artists, the scientists or its entire people?(.) In my opinion, they share the same importance and either one can not replace another.
First, we could not deny the importance of the general welfare of all its people. The aim of a nation, which most people may agree with, is to make its people live a good life. People who are the foundation of a nation give their leader the rights. Accordingly, the leaders should and must take responsibility for the mass. Welfare is the best way to reflect the degree their leaders concern about them.(Welfare is the best way to judge whether the leader fulfill his duties) A good welfare is the sign that the society of a nation is harmonious and it comprehensive nation power is strong. It is impossible for a nation which is full of war to furnish its people a good life. May be most of the mass are living the life(lives) which is lack of(which lack of lack 本身是动词) food and cloth. In this condition, the society can not be stable. Crimes such as robber, theft may happen more frequent(frequently) and these(these可以不要哦~~) weaken the nation.
However, we could not ignore the importance of the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. A good ruler, who plays an important role in the(the可以不要，不是特指的那个社会) society, can perfect the social security network, which enable their people enjoy the best service as well as the lifetime warranty. When people's material life is satisfied, their need of spiritual life is increase(is 应该去掉). This shows the importance of artists, person who can create works of art to satisfied people's spiritual life. Although people can appreciate works of art from other countries to fill up these deficiency(deficiencies), this kind of manner is harmful for the concentration of a nation and its people is liable to be assimilated by other cultures(这个后半句我喜欢，呵呵~你的想法总是很深入，学习学习。前面的思路和你有些相像，但是总是不能再进一步~~). So the characteristic culture of a nation is necessary which means the importance of artists should not be ignored. What's more, the invention of scientists is the propulsion that pushes the society forward. Inventions such as mobile phones, computers have changed people's life largely. It is not extravagant to say scientists are the insurance of a better life.
Both the achievement of minority and welfare of the mass is necessary and we could not detach them. If a nation owns a good welfare system but lack of a good ruler, the social order may be disordered shortly. In like manner, if there are no excellent artists, the test of its people may be not high and the quality of life is decreased(直接decrease就行吧~？~). What's more, lacking of eminent scientists hinders the development of science which blocks the promotion of people's life as well. On the contrary, if the achievement of the minorities is eminent but people of the nation live a miserable life, the leader is not a qualified one. For he betray the hope of its people and failed to take responsibility for them. No matter how great these achievements are, people will not satisfy with the nation. A nation only has a pretty exterior but the foundation has shaked(but the unstable foundation) can not be a qualified one.
In general, a nation is consisting of both the minority and the general people. So partial to either one is unwise. Only they reach the balance, can we say the nation is a finer one.