今天下午都不在, 晚上回来很累了 才改.... Whether it is more important to award students for effort than for achievement? 听着不很顺的. As far as I am concerned, students should be encouraged to achieve more in their pursuing for knowledge rather than focus on how much efforts they have made. 总是感觉矛盾的,你让别人再读读看. 不努力怎追求知识?.. R* V3 S One reason for my point of view lies好 in the fact that students' achievements are ultimately base on their effort and, more important, efficiency. So concentrate --concentrating too much on hardworking at the cost of efficiency would be a waste of one's energy and time. So the concept that one can guarantee success by hardworking seems less convincing. J2 n. f5 B+ b Another reason for my point of view is that focusing too much on efforts without taking into consideration the importance of proper methods for studying is totally misleading. After being awarded for their efforts which may not be of any significant improvement for their study, students may be informed 好that hardworking is the only proach单词拼写 to success. So when faced with difficulties which they failed to deal with by hardworking, they tend to lose self confidence.2 R; `7 x5 j6 X) p / ?3 O% B6 v4 m; J9 x What's more, encouraging students to put more efforts to their study may lead to undesirable consequence. As the old saying, all study and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Teachers and parents must bear in mind that there are other factors that are equally significant to students' future success个人认为成功可以不用. So we must encourage our students to make better achievement in limited time, in order to leave more spare time to experience other parts of life. 1 p3 i& C' j; T) b In conclusion, awarding students for effort cannot be a better choice for teachers, as it failed to take into account other factors for students' real success. 观点蛮新颖的, 感觉支持的不是很强烈. 某些长句子过于长. 有的词汇用的很好, 值得学习 |
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