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[未归类] 作文贴by stoptalking 真的勇士,敢于面对血淋淋的砖头 [复制链接]

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The author of the reading passage mentions three theories as likely explanations of great house. The lecturer, however, points out the inaccuracies in each of these theories.0 Q& f1 J! n% s  C4 j]]" s, G) l- o2 H* K+ X
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The reading thinks that the great house was used as residential places. The lecturer, however, argues that the great house can not be living apartment in support of the obvious deficiency of fireplaces.然后那?后面听到的也要写上去的啊
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The second theory of the storage function is also rejected by the lecturer. He explains that no spilled maize in the great house. This proves
that the great house is used for storing food is unlikely.细节不够

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Finally, regarding the third theory, the “ceremonial centers theory”, the lecturer also disagrees. He argues that there lots of construction trash and leftover in the great house, which means there can not be a sacred place.
值得赞赏的是,同学你听力的大概都是听到的,但你写的感觉是象提纲,只有框架,没有内容,再把听力的内容多写点,这样字数也够,文章看起来也丰满

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