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Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits. R( r5 l3 A; l7 U0 `
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Obviously, innumerable advertisements, which are broadcasting on every corner of the world, such as on daily newspapers, vogue magazines, and street billboards, exert considerable influence on people's life and under some circumstances, mislead the eating habit. However, it is not completely true to say that

It is undeniable that advertising indeed induce people to eat unhealthy food and have erratic meals. Captivated by the inviting images of fast food, which （is） contains high calories and low vitamins, the adolescents, especial those who are still scanty of the ability to differentiate right from wrong说不能区分对与错是否严重了点？说成不能区分是否对自己身体有益与否更好, haunt the KFC, or Mcdonale everyday and eventually suffer from obesity and malnutrition. Moreover, recently在米国也是最近开始的吗？如果不是的话讲明是中国比较便于老外理解吧，或者就直接讲：这种24小时的服务更如何如何, the KFC advances the slogan of 24 hours opening, which provides a expedient excuse for those who do not want to have super on time, because they can order food on midnight
. While according to a latest research paper on （the） Science, having food on midnight will increase the risk of gastric cancer, because the stomach cannot get enough time to rest.

Advertising may, nevertheless, help foster more healthy eating habits than before. Many parents, who are concerned about their children's dislike of meals, learn a lot from the advertisement about essential nutrients, such as iron, and then remember to prepare certain dishes that are copious of iron. I （am） also benefit a lot from advertisement. The pills, which are propagated to be instrumental to sleep, release me from the nightmare, which is originated from my intense pressure from the approaching TOEFL test.这里你讲的是一种帮助你睡眠的药，而不是给你健康饮食的药

In addition, there are also many other factors that lead to the unhealthy eating habit. People nowadays have very little time for anything, even for eating. People have to work overtime, on the expense of meals latter. Husband, whose wife is working overtime, stuffs himself with a piece of （bread）一片面包太减肥了吧，说叫份外卖或者吃点pizza and a bottle of beer, and then spare much time to watch the exciting World Cup and champion and acclaim his favorite football star. A child, whose parents are working overtime, will go改成order的话句子比较顺 to KFC for his supper.
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Judging from what has been discussed above, the saying that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits, is evidently wrong.这里最好再讲一下，你的观点是确实有些不好，但是也是有些广告是不错的

最后，不好意思这么晚才给你改作业