08的作文修改小铺子

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LZ果然是高手啊~针对你上次改的问题做了改进，不知道有没有进步~辛苦啦o(∩_∩)o...
Is daily homework necessary for students?
   Nowadays, more and more students feel stressful about their academic courses; large amount of homework, more strict requirements and countless exams have filled their lives. Some people start to doubt that whether daily homework is necessary or. As far as I'm concerned, it's imperative for students to have suitable amount of daily assignments, and my reasons are as follows.
   To begin with, daily homework is a very good feedback from students and can improve their study efficiency. Teachers arrange daily homework at the aim of checking how much knowledge their students absorb and find the students’ weaknesses by collecting the mistakes. In the teaching -learning process, doing homework is an indispensable step since homework can be one of the most reliable sources for teachers to make out their teaching plans. Meanwhile, students can also have better insights to the courses. Students will encounter questions or troubles when doing homework and after consulting teachers, they can have a better understanding of what they have learned.
   Moreover, finishing homework timely and independently shapes students' personalities in some way. Students are required to do their homework everyday by themselves, which not only help them develop a good habit of finishing tasks on time, but also teach them to be responsible. A good student should try his best to do his homework before playing outside with his friends or watching TV. He ought to keep in mind that he has daily assignment to finish and it's his duty. Through doing homework, students start to form the concept of responsibility and independence.
   Nevertheless, homework will be a great helper only when it’s at reasonable amount. Too much homework will make students lose interests in study and feel overstressed. While, suitable amount of homework can arise students' passion in further thinking. Furthermore, different subjects should have different types of homework. It's quite effective to learn Chinese by residing important passages while it's quite boring to memorize the math equations.
   As the reasons stated above, it's not difficult to draw a conclusion that homework should and can play a vital role in students' learning.

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嘿嘿~谢谢LZ~我会加油的O(∩_∩)O~

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新的一篇~LZ辛苦了~~
  Has technology made the world a better place to live?
  Speaking of technology, different people will hold different views based on their own experiences and understanding. Some people will agree that technology is a useful tool which could help us in almost all fields, while others think technology has done more harm than good considering the damage to the environment and the pressure it brings to modern people. As far as I’m considered, technology indeed makes the world a better place for living and my reasons are as follows.
  First and foremost, technology has brought countless convenience to people nowadays. Technology is a greater help to our work as well as our family affairs. We are now using computers to solve complicated problems we meet in the research programs, to collect large amout of information we need in study, and even to oragnize our finiacial affairs, all of which save us a lot of time and money. What’s more, it’s easy for us to travel to different places due to the fast and safe transportation such as airplane or trains, and just a portable cellphone can connect us with our friends and relatives who are in foreign countries.
  Besides, thanks to the development in technology, we now live in a happier and healthier life. For example, Internet provides us with numerous ways to relax, we can chat with our friends online, play computer games, and watch live football games, all of these entertainments make our lives more enjoyable. More importantly, advancement in medical equipment leads to more breakthroughs in curing the deadly diseases, resulting the longevity of human beings.
  Nevertheless, there’s no denying that technology has made some negative effects to our environment. We’re now breathing dirty air polluted by the exhaust gases from cars, and drinking poisonous water contaminated by chemical wastes. Technology will still continue to damage our environment if we do not take effective actions.
  Based on the reasons stated above, we can still make the conclusion that technology is making a better world despite its bad influence. All we have to do in the future is to make the technology move toward the direction of creating a better world.

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:loveliness:呵呵~真有那么好么，LZ说得我都不好意思了~
恩，我就是尽量避免你说的几个问题，加上多看范文吧~LZ辛苦了^^

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LZ辛苦了啊~一篇新作文~感觉最近写得还挺流畅的
Should teachers be paid according to their students’ grades?(37)
Teaching is considered one of the most respectable careers in most people’s heart, but in fact rather than receiving deserved respect from the community, teachers in China are surviving under overstressed situations in the examination-oriented educational system. Some people even make a suggestion that teachers should be paid according to their students’ grades. As far as I’m concerned, I disagree with this statement and my reasons are as follows.
First and foremost, this payment standard is unfair to teachers. It’s a commonsense that different students will have different levels of ability to learn knowledge, so it’s simple that every class will have students who do well or bad in exams. To those who don’t work hard in their courses or absorb knowledge slowly, no matter how hard the teachers try, they still can’t get satisfied grades in the examinations. Since most of the teachers have to teach classes with more than 30 or 40 students, they can’t pay much attention on every individual. And if teachers are paid based on the average performance, low-grade students will drag the class, resulting in low payment for the teachers. If this situation goes on, teachers will begin to feel overstressed and depressed, and may even give up the job they once enjoyed.
While at the same time, students’ education will be effected negatively if teacher are paid based on the students’ performance. If teachers want to get high wages, they may begin to teach only what students need in order to help them get higher score, hence, students will miss out a lot education that can’t be measured in a test. Moreover, since teachers are always worried about their students’ test grades, they will ingnore students’ mental development and no longer takes time to communicate with students to find their problems in lives. Students who usually get low scores will also feel nervous and sad because they may feel that they have the responsibility for the lowing payments of their teachers. To make things worse, teachers will unconsiously treat students based on their grades, so bad students in their eyes will be ignored sometimes in the class.
  There’s no denying that teaching is a honorable task, for teacher shoulder the responsibility to transfer useful information to millions of students, but learning is a two- way process, which means students need to study by themselves after having classes in school. If one day, we use the students’ performance to determine teachers’ payment, we will finally lose the pure essense of education and many wonderful teachers.

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谢谢辛勤的LZ啊~假期要好好休息哦^^

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没有Jiang在~作文感觉退步的说~谢谢啦
Is television bad for children?
  With the help of mass media, people get more and more access to the outside world. While at the same time, the issue of whether these inventions have brought postive or negative effects to people, especially young generations, raises serious controversy. Some people may consider television as a beneficial innovation, for it indeed releases parents and provides large amount of informantion to children, but as far as I’m concerned, television has more negative impacts on children and my reasons are as follows.
   First of all, children have received much false information from TV which is bad for their development. Because of the comparatively loose policy of the contents of TV programs, children are exposed to a large amout of violent and sexual alluring contents that cause great negative influence on them. For example, boys who always watch the scenery of fights or quarrels are more tend to perform aggressive behavior toward others, and girls who are so attracted in the romantic plots of TV series will often imagine themselves as the main characters that they can’t get out of the illusion. Once these mistaken information are ingrained in chidren’s mind, it would be hard for parents to transmitt the accurate view to their children.
   In the second place, parents always find it more difficult to communicate with their children if the kids watch so much TV. It’s obviously that children will can’t help but indulge in the television if they form a habit of watching TV every day. So, it’s not hard to imagine that young children run directly to home after school just for their favourite cartoons or TV series. Whenever parents want to talk with their sons or daughters about the things happen in the school, they would receive no reply since their children are focusing on variouos shows. If this situation keeps going on, parents may force their children to stop watching TV, resulting in damage to parents-children relationship.
In addition, TV itself is a harmful devise to children’s health. Young people who watch TV for a long time are easier to get myopic eyes and gain weight. That’s why chidren who spend 3-4 hours watching TV get the nickname as Couch Potato. Moreover, the invisible radiowaves given out from TV are destructing children’s health without noticing.
Admittely, TV has brough some benefits to children. Scientific documentaries and latest news provide useful knowledge to children and may even stimulate their interests in study. But since the disadvantages outweighs its advantages, we can safely draw the conclusion that TV is bad for children.

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再次感谢LZ^^~

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LZ新的一篇作文啦~辛苦您啦~我的作文都是限时写的说
Classes: teachers lecture or students do some of the talking(discussion) ?
  Some people argue as if it were a general truth that teachers should do all the talking in class in order to ensure learning efficiency, while others show inclination the the idea of having students discussion. From my own point of view, it’s more advisable to choose the latter, and my reasons are as follows.
  First of all, students will play more active role in learning if they’re endowed with the opportunity to discuss. Most of the time, especially in Chinese classroom, students are afraid of expressing their opinions, since they are taught to respect teachers’ authority. Therefore, most of students actually have many unsolved questions after attending classes. But, if students can have a chance to take part in a group discussion, they would feel free to exchange their opinions and ideas with each other, resulting in better understanding of what teachers have taught. Besides, students would be more active in class because of competition in a the group talking, such as who can arise the most creative question in class.
  Secondly, teachers will get immediate feedback from class and quickly adjust their teaching method. Through students’ response, teachers will be able to learn more about students’ ideas and feelings. Whether students have questions in this section or they are not accustomed to that way of teaching will be reflected by the results of group discussion, correspondingly, teachers would slow the pace or change the teaching method at the aim of helping students study more efficiently. If this condition continues, the overall learning efficiency will be increased to a higer level.
  The last but not the least, providing students with some of the talking will promote harmonious relationship. Classmates can not only play together during breaks, but also study and cooeprate with each other in class, which would definitely contribute to more friendly class atomosphere.
  Admittedly, there would be some problems brought by students discussion such as talking about issues unrelated to class or some students would ignore others’ thoughts. But based on the above illustrations, it’s quite natural to make a conclusion that having students talking in class has more advantages than disadvantages. So, schools and teachers should consider to give students a chance to talk in class.

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考前最后一篇啦~再次谢谢08无私的帮助^^
Students should take the most difficult class in colleges or at university, even if you can’t get the top grades in them.
   With the increasing consciousness of the importance of education, universities and colleges are making more efforts in order to provide students with the education they desire. Nowadays, students are facing the difficulty of picking up suitable courses since schools offer them so many classes to choose. While some people suggest that students should take the most difficult class to improve their abilities, from my own point of view, I disagree with the opinion and my reasons are as follows.
First and also the most important, students should choose courses based on their own interests rather than on how difficult the courses are. Colleges and university are intended to give students the opportunity to find their real interests and further develop them, not to let students show that performs better in the difficult courses. To a student who has great desire in learning geology, it is unreasonable to force him to choose complex courses like philosophy in which he shows little interest. Therefore, it’s important to allow students choose what they really enjoy, which would be beneficial to their future development.
Besides, poor performance in difficult courses will discourage students from learning. There’s no denying that people are different, while some students are good at learning knowledge, others may find studying is a challenging task. So, when all the students are required to take the difficult courses, there would appear distinctive gap between their performances. Those who don’t do well in these courses may feel upset and worried or even lose heart in studying since their overall performance is affected by these hard courses. On the other hand, students who are strong in getting high score or probably good at this particular difficult course will feel confident and get more rewards. As a result, this requirement is in someway unfair and should be avoided in the university system.
In addition, students will lose much of their spare time because of hard work on these difficult courses. When students are demanded to take the challenging courses, many of them will spend much time on studying these courses, resulting in less time for enjoyment. Students pay more attention and do more preparations on the complicated classes in order to have a better performance, and if this situation continues, students will feel exhausted and depressed because of the tiring work.
Based on the reasons stated above, it’s quite natural to draw the conclusion that students needn’t to take the most difficult courses if they don't want to. Students should be endowed with the chance to choose whatever they like and develop their unique interests in colleges or universities.

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谢谢08一直以来的帮忙啊~！！^^我会加油的！