Essay topic:
Some universities require students to take courses in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Thesis statement:
It is advantageous for students to focus on only one subject rather than juggle numerous courses of various subjects.
Middle paragraph 1
Point:
Balancing classes, tests, projects as well as extra-curricular activities is enough to make any college students feel overwhelmed, let alone coping with courses among different disciplines.
Information (examples):
Students majoring in computer science in Harvard University serve as a persuasive example. Not only do they have to frequently stay up whole nights to write codes, but also they have to take internships to find a well-paid and decent job, such as working in Google or Facebook, after graduation. With this crammed schedule, hardly can they allocate time to other disciplines.