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Esther.LiUID：191003

谢谢trees JJ的解答！
0210.19
Ella Baker spent (her adult life) working for social change (by) lecturing, writing, (teacher), and organizing adult literacy (programs).
我知道答案是C，但是B难道不应该改成in 或者去掉么？ :confused:

abjureUID：169591

这篇帖子纪念自己突破1000分。同时改了自己的签名档。用来警醒自己
开始发问
Exercise 24
36
Under [the certain] conditions, a rainbow appears at the end [of] a [rain shower ]in [the quarter] of the sky opposite the Sun.
答案选A
我不明白为什么the要去掉。因为前面介词under？ 有特定规律否？

EXERCISE twenty-six

21. Each [of functions] of [the body], even thinking, require [the expenditure] [of energy].
答案选A这题，怎么改？ 改成each function 还是each of function。 我查了google，但是发现each of functions 和each of function 的使用数量级是一样的。
不解？

abjureUID：169591

最初由 Esther.Li 发布
[B]谢谢trees JJ的解答！
0210.19
Ella Baker spent (her adult life) working for social change (by) lecturing, writing, (teacher), and organizing adult literacy (pr..

以下省略...... [/B]

spent＋time ＋doing没错。这里doing就是working。
by＋doing指的就是通过什么方式，也就是后面三个ing。

abjureUID：169591

EXERCISE twenty-seven
35 【Perhaps】 more than 【any other】 United States city, San Francisco 【is a】 collection of 【neighborhood】.
答案选D，要改成neighborhoods。 any other +可数名词单数 ，collection不做收藏讲，也可数？  neighborhood这个词什么意思，为啥要变成neighborhoods？

Exercise twenty-eight
36 Almost [every] the hereditary [material] of [an individual] organism resides [in the ]chromosomes.
答案是A  every－》all 但是问题是material是可数名词阿，它的复数形式是它本身？

treesUID：82785

Topic: Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

A large company or a small one, the one you choose indicates should indicate your personality and ability. If you do not have enough capability, a small company might be your choice.总是感觉这个论调有点奇怪，不过twe中观点确实没有限制。 As for me, who love chanllenges and progress, a large company is my preference, with reasons given as follows:用句号就可以了

The number one keu reason is that large companies can supply good conditions for you. As the old proverb goes,"Genius can only breathe freely in an atomsphere of freedom." Having adequate facilities and funds, you need not worry about anything but only put your heart into work and make good use of all conditions, which is fairly significant for a junior worker's first step.which这一小句已经跟开头的capability对不上了

Secondly, in a large conpany, more opportunities could be offered, such as communicating with other famous corporations, have 这里要注意平行结构的时态 conferences with excellent specialists and experts and so on, from which you can obsorb a large amount of knowledge, which you will never heard of in a small company. These experiences are the sediment of yours or even longer time's working of the top experts, so you will undoubtedly make rapid progress once you master it.

Besides, you can enjoy perfect wellfare in a large company. That means not only sufficient salary and houses, but also insurance and regular training. Generally speaking, a graduate in a large company earns one time more than one working in a small company, in spite of the train that enhences one's skills greatly.

As a result, when taking everything into account, I prefer a large campany to work in , for its good conditions, sufficient chances, and perfect wellfare.

本篇中拼写错误还是不少的,要注意检查
本篇文章最致命的问题在于理由的阐述和开头的观点的主要理由完全对不上.上边写能力和挑战,底下却是各种好环境和条件.虽然TWE中语言要比内容更重要些,但是出现如此大的问题也是很可能被判低分的.

写作前还是要多想1想

Esther.LiUID：191003

嗯，那篇硬套了一篇范文的开头，才那么文不对题，昨天自己重新看的时候才感觉到，以后注意。谢谢提醒！：）
现在作文每篇都整整30分钟完成，没有检查的时间，语法和拼写错误还那么多。。。 :(  怎么办呢

treesUID：82785

作文平时练习30分钟还可以的。考试的时候会快一些。因为都没时间想，偶曾经总结说，考试时候大家都是发挥了自己最快的速度和最真实最差的水平。根本没有心情去锤炼字句。所以还是要注意自己总结自己熟悉的摸版，至少不会出现没话可说的状况。

另外拼写没关系，因为打字和写字不一样。语法错误只能靠检查了。

treesUID：82785

24-36
the certain 两个词都是表示特定的冠词，不能同时用。考过3次左右

26-6
each function
all of functions
代词用时，加OF 加复数，但不包括EACH这种一定表示单数的词
所以EACH要直接加单数名词，作形容词这里

circlezhUID：186128

不可数名词+and+不可数名词   后面动词是单数还是副数

abjureUID：169591

今天严格模考测试一下自己现在的水平，问题发现很大。估计现在只有580。
丢分我分析了主要集中在听力的短对话，和阅读的文艺类和地理类的两篇文章。这两部分我错了17个题（本以为阅读没问题的！）。现在感觉到自己悬了。想在网上吐吐苦水，但又觉得这样做，他妈的太不男人了。想想还是把力气留在学T上。
短对话我一直也在听抄，我想问一下，一道题要听到什么程度才算成功。但是感觉听得很清楚，但错的很多，极其沮丧。
请问这是什么原因？还有一个我发现我对话句子的开头的部分老是会听不到。或者脑海里往往只有第二个人说得话。为什么会这样，有什么建议？

阅读，我想针对我这两种类型的文章专门训练，除了被专项单词，集中练习同类文章，还有没有其他建议。

treesUID：82785

Originally posted by circlezh at 2005-5-1 15:19
不可数名词+and+不可数名词   后面动词是单数还是副数

个人以为是单数

不管是可数还是不可数，以AND后边的为准

treesUID：82785

一般听力小对话50%考第1句话的内容。
建议1。练习迅速看选项，知道大概要问什么
      2。一个题不能马上想清楚，马上放弃，要不肯定影响下一题。一般这样就只能听到后一半。前1题还容易错

阅读看一下，非常专业的文章错一般出在定位

abjureUID：169591

对，的确，我大部分题目错的是细节题。

abjureUID：169591

Topic：什么是一个领导者最重要的品质！
Leadership
提纲。我从正直，责任心，敬业三个角度来谢。
不知道我这样展开有否问题？
这篇文章我在word上贴过了，把画线的都改过了，不过肯定还是有很多问题，希望大家多扔砖头。
thanks。
by the way： 其他几个同门师兄弟愿否互改文章。

In all fields and groups, there is a great deal of leaders who lead their groups to achieve dreams. Meanwhile, a question, still puzzle me for a long time is that the most important characteristic among leaders. The answer is likely to honest, teamwork spirit, or managing ability. In my opinion, honest is the best choice among all candidate choices.

Firstly, honest help leaders improve and push up the relationship of people, who are either strangers or friends. On the one hand, as a leader, he/she must make his/her group members work together in a nice relationship circumstance so that avoid causing misunderstanding emotion. If he/she is thought to be honest person, he/she will easy to coordinate relationship in a group,
because all people believe that he/she make a candid decision. On the other hand, leaders usually keep in touch with numerous strangers who come from other firms or groups. It is common sense that honest is easily accepted by other people, so strangers would like to make new friends with a honest leaders.

Secondly, a responsible person can accomplish more outstanding jobs and surmount himself/herself. In fact, a person's successful attribute to do one more step in working than other ones. If so, we have enough reasons to believe that responsibility would push people to walk one more steps toward successful orientation. For example, I am a leader in sales group and I have similar experience. Because I had actively searched some products information for my customers, my customers make quicker decision than before and help me achieve the goal of sell in that month. Thus I especially agree with the view that responsibility is a basic and significant element of a leader.

Thirdly, hardworking spirit plays increasingly considerable role in working. Actually, a good leader usually finishes more work than his/her usual crew, because the leader needs to show a lively example to usual crew. In this way, it is likely that leaders require other ones hardworking. On the contrary, neither is a leader hard working, nor owns positive working spirit, he/she is impossible to be a good leader.
  
In short, three basic element, honest, responsibility and hardworking become the most important characters of a leader.

[ Last edited by abjure on 2005-5-1 at 22:11 ]