2、词汇:
a wide range of用得不错。
enthusiastic是“热衷于某事”的意思,但录音中似乎是想说店主"热心助人、善良",所以应为kind。
"I was willing to pay"是说“很愿意付钱”,但录音中似乎是想说“准备付钱”,所以应为"I was ready/about to pay"。
3、语法:
"What I must say is the owner of the cafe are enthusiastic."应为"What I must say is the owner of the cafe is very kind."
"I couldn't find my purse. It must be stolen."应为"It must have been stolen."描述在一个过去事件(I couldn't find my purse.)之前发生的事件(My purse was stolen.)应该用过去完成时。
"She even give me some cash to go home."应为"She even gave me some cash to go home."
3、语法:
其实我的女生啊。。。所以是her name不是his name。。。
"There is a huge number of people."应为"There are a huge number of people."因为a number of people相当于many people,可数名词复数。
"It was a forum where people can hear each other to improve their English in ways like evaluate each other's pronunciation, essays or stuff like that."j建议改为"It is a forum where people can listen to each other's recordings to improve their English in ways of evaluating each other's pronunciation, essays or stuff like that."
词汇:surprised the ……of people? tons ,发音貌似不规范我。
语法:when you compared with 为啥事过去时,我觉得可以直接用分词形式,compared with;对,一般时态就好。
the air has not been as fresh as…我觉得一般现在时就够了,因为是客观事实。我觉得完成时好,因为是想说一个从过去一直到现在的现象。
as to myself 我觉得一般使用as for。你说的对。
koalaemon 发表于 2014-11-6 21:17
6th Nov koalaemon
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgLu6s4
流畅度:确实说慢一点会减少停顿,还能减少语法错误
语音:照旧…………你试试用平调练练呢?especially的p读b就好了
词汇:surprised the ……of people?
语法:when you compared with 为啥事过去时,我觉得可以直接用分词形式,compared with;
the air has not been as fresh as…我觉得一般现在时就够了,因为是客观事实
as to myself 我觉得一般使用as for