大家来看看，我觉得自己可以得7分以上，别人说可以给4分

caoietlsUID：3463982

Some people think students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers’ job
performance. Others believe that will lead to loss of respect and discipline. Discuss and
give your own opinion.
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The given topic is widely existed in the education system. Traditional opinions supported the preservation of teachers’ previlage and the educational regulations. Nevertheless, I strongly supported the convention of evaluation of teachers’ job performance.
I have a handful of reasons to solidify the argument.
First, the roles of educators in schools or universities are extremely very important. For pupils, the[y] received fundamental education and will explore the world with [of] guidance of the teachers. For postgraduates in universities, professors help them to investigate the world scientifically and accurately. Therefore, the influence of teachers is unavoidable. In other words, teachers’ powers are essentially significant in the process of education. Thus, the power should be supervised and restricted. As a result, education evaluation by the students will be one of effected solutions.
Second, as Confucius said, teaching and learning interplayed positively during the education. Then it is easily accepted that students’ evaluation about teachers; lectures, person al characteristics and other things happened in their working performance are necessary, or even indispensable in modern education.
Third, the opposed viewpoints would argue that there might be some seditions against good teachers. For example, students who get low scores in exams, or punished by teachers might plot to take revenge against teachers and slander in the evaluation. My reply to this concern is that , as Chinese saying goes, people should not refrain from dining because of the possibility of choking .  We will not know whether the problems initiate in the evaluations are slandering or teaching misbehaviours. Thus, positive and negative evaluations on teachers are both important . Even if there are unreal or exaggerating evaluations from students, education institutes could investigate and find out the truth.
Fourth, on extension of the third point, I have to mention that the students evaluation belong to the modern democracy and human rights system, which is a useful method to muzzle the hegemony of educators. To put it differently, to cultivate innovative students, it is highly important to affiliate the evaluation system with education.

To conclude, I have to highlight that evaluating teachers’ job performance is totally necessary. With the evaluation, the education quality and students’ human right could be well guaranteed.

evaevawuUID：3455986

Done.

喵呜~UID：3339380

我没细看  但是有一点非常重要
我不希望写作小组最后误人子弟，

就是在用电脑写之前，先用手写

我看了一下的字数，严重超标啊，一般同学在那么短的时间内是不太可能写那么多的，当然如果你确定你在35min内能写360字，那我没话说。但是如果你只能写260字的话，我真的推荐先适应一下答题纸的格式

真的大家一定要现在答题纸上练出感觉，如果你习惯了写300字的，然后考前一周突然在纸上练习，发现以前的写法在规定时间内写不完，你又需要重新适应新的写作方式。这又要花一段时间

在答题纸上练习最终要炼成的习惯是：自己知道每一段写到哪一行左右收手，写到第二页的哪一行就可以还是写结尾段。大家一定要这么做， 你适应了这样的感觉之后，之后就可以不用纸写。

我真的是不希望别人被写作小组误导，咱们虽然是交word，但是考试时候是纸，大家是一定要适应适应适应的啊

我最近也有点忙  抱歉了，不能帮你看

evaevawuUID：3455986

252132618 发表于 2013-10-13 19:43
我没细看  但是有一点非常重要
我不希望写作小组最后误人子弟，

I totally agree with you.

In fact, I wrote down on the paper and then typed the essay into my computer.

In this way, we have more control over our time and the number of words.

laiweikunUID：3481736

这个方面的话题的 都讨论一下

huangfx2003UID：3443377

雅思作文写中文谚语，我觉得不太恰当了