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发表于 2013-7-17 16:21:37 |只看该作者

7.16
T1
1.语速适中，内容具体
2.但时态不一致
T2
1.第一句应该是说只有short vacation吧
2.It is发音可以短促一点，不要拖很长音，enough的发音也不要拖。
T3
1.那个男生说会create more traffic，但没有说不安全
2.money can be saved说错成了solved.
3.语速适中，关键点都答全了
T4
最开始的那个audience发音不准
T5
第一个solution应该是这个professor建议女生去和另一个教授说，不是叫这个教授去和另一个教授说。
T6.
1.广义定义时的那个例子好像说taxi driver offer a ride to a farmer，不是给farmer drive
2.taxier？应该是 taxi driver
3.those发音不要拖

总体上语速适中，关键点都答全，个别单词发音要注意。考试加油！Happy birthday to your mom！

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小麦爱自由发表于 2013-7-17 16:21
7.16
T1
1.语速适中，内容具体

恩恩，我会好好加油的~~~谢谢小麦~~~:loveliness:

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发表于 2013-7-18 10:32:54 |只看该作者

【7.17】
Task 1
最后一句，children are the future of the country, so primary school teachers play an important role in nurturing their good habits...that is why primary school teachers are...

Task 2 OK
一二题问题不大，表达的时候别紧张，把你的观点讲清楚，good拿下了！

Task 3
前面plan介绍的有点长，"one student is in the position of a plan"这个不用说。尽量在25s内搞定plan，给后面的两个理由留时间，不然碰到理由内容多的可能说不完。
后面概括的挺好的。

Task 4
一个读音，colleague不对
例子讲的有点乱，你准备的20s尽量把例子概括成3-4句话，比如这题：
① they brought a plan to change the old-looking design of the product，got many supporters at first
② a senior manager disagreed with the plan, causing many people to change position because they did not want to attack the manager; the prof.changed his idea too because he did not want to waste time debating...
③ turned out that their competitior had better design and the company lost money
总结， thus, you can see that group thinking may lead to bad decisions because we thend to give up what we think is right to conform to the group

Task 5
问题不大，那个volunteer具体干什么的-drive the other car 要讲出来。此外OK

Task 6
OK

last minute tip: 听的时候原句没记住没关系，关键要听懂，能用自己的话说出来反而更好呢。准备的时间里整理好思路，有长例子的自己标下号，概括成3-4句话说出来。
剩下这两天随便找份鸡精自己说说一二题吧，最好不准备直接说，想到啥说啥，也练练反映能力。
考前看下听力经典加试。

果果加油！！等你的好消息~

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Irene1084 发表于 2013-7-18 10:32
【7.17】
Task 1
最后一句，children are the future of the country, so primary school teachers play ...

谢谢Irene ~~~~:loveliness:

么么哒~~~

还有两天好好准备准备~~~~~~:loveliness:

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发表于 2013-7-18 19:36:53 |只看该作者

t1: "i think pri. tea. that" it is not a right sentence;
   distinguish rise and raise. raise one's hand
t2: no need to say "in my family"-->chinglish;
   learn fm country, learn from xx; learn from xxx'-->not a good sentense. just say: learn fm country, xx and xxx;
   btw: pay attention to "books". do not eat the "k" sound ><
t3: the first sentence: i think it is grammatical wrong.
   campus is not equal to uni. uni. is a name, but campus refers to the existence of buildings and other things that construct a uni. you could say" the uni is going to build a sculpture" but not "campus..."
   a good sentence you've said: it is suitable....
t4: gd words are used.
   guess you could follow recordings word by word to improve yourself. even u r going to take test this wkend, you could still try(for 5~10min/day is enough), and it indeed cultivate your language feeling. just take toefl as a beginning to your journey to learn english well! now you have the ability to access to the greatest minds in the world!
t5: supervise kids. superviosr of kids; pronounce volunteer~
t6:tells us the truth that.... instead of tell sth....
you may specify the truth that babies suppose there should be 2 dolls but actually 1;

Add oil!

Only "I" could create my destine. Hardworking with good methods would pay off.

t4

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