2、词汇:
"score deficit"建议改为"scoring gap"。deficit是财政赤字。
"5 vs 15"建议改为"5 to 15"。几比几一般用to,然后你可以补充说明"We were 10 points behind them"。
"come over my mental frustration"应为"overcome my frustration",come over是过来,overcome是克服。
3、语法:
沒有大問題。
"The unforgettable thing I do with her was participating on the women's badminton competitions three years ago."建议改为"The unforgettable thing I've done with her is participating in the women's badminton competition three years ago."
"After one hour's competitions, ..."建议改为"After one hour's play, ..."因为录音里是说比赛进行了1小时。
"After that competitions, ..."应为"After that competition, ..."。
"Both of us love this outdoor activities."应为"Both of us love this outdoor activity."
2、词汇:
词汇丰富,表达变换多。有个别表达不够准确。
"She can keep a well life balance."应为"She can keep a well-balanced life."
3、语法:
很好。
4、语音:
总体很好,但有个别词发音不准。
Angelina Jolie的姓Jolie,o发“欧”且重音在lie,发jo-LEE。
我发现Karen有个发音的坏习惯,就是会不自觉地在单词后面加t音,这个会影响理解(比如录音里"She can keep a well life balance"的can加了个t,听起来就是"She can't"了)。需要多加练习改正过来,不要发不必要的音素。
谢谢斑竹MM的恳切指正!我会注意这些方面的,不过我那个本来是念I've learnt it for three years,应该是我读的还不是很到位的原因吧,让斑竹MM没听出来。
像那个thoroughly我才发现原来自己读的一直都是错的...所以太感谢斑竹MM啦~
另外我想问下,斑竹MM觉得我是英音还是美音,还是混合音呢?