流畅:非常不错。
词汇:虽然简单可以描述得挺不错的。
语法:I saw his parents-oh, it was the boy's mother. I told her what happened.
语音:你的发音最近怎么怪怪的。自然一点好点。感觉每个单词都发得很用力的。不需要每个都这么用力吧,听起来好累的感觉。(e.g. As the old saying goes(应该系降调的,你升调了,听起来好故意的感觉)
语法:
其实开头不用很认真的说I‘d like to describe..........这么正式的说法,因为这是口语。
昨晚听一个IELTS的外教考官就指出这点,just with a simple begining like I’m just gonna talk about.............
Though working hard/ Though she has worked hard
最后,I was learned from her/ I learned(a lot) from her.