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do you agree or disagree that improving schools is the most factor in successful development of country

Every country is dedicated to its development by implementing various deliberate strategies. Different countries may hold their own opinion based on their unique culture and belief. Yet, there is no disagreement of the fact that education is the foundation of almost every realm to a modern society. As a result, the improvement of schools, the crucial factor in promotion of education, is becoming to play an increasingly decisive role to a country's development.

The primary reason to support my opinion is that educational enhancement can motivate the development of technique, which is the key element to being a developed country. Suppose that if the number of school in your country is not big enough to satisfy the requirement of children and adolescents, how could they learn knowledge , for instance, about medicine, business management, and computer skills? The command of this knowledge for future social leaders is absolutely of significance to the development of a country in consequence of the long unanimous recognition----“Knowledge is power”.
Therefore, the opportunity to study in schools is considerable.

Lending more credibility to my point of view is that the level of civilization of a country is always based on the popularization and high quality of education in a society. For instance, Finland is a developed country in spite of its limited population and small geographic area. The most factor of its success, from my perspective, involves the strategy that maximize the investment, to some extent, in advanced facilities and training faculties in elementary schools, high schools, colleges and universities. Their high emphasis on education result in accelerating the speed of their national development.

Nevertheless, improving schools is not the only means that contribute to the development of a country. Other more effective and more efficient ways can be added to this method at the same time. For example, it is also fairly significant to focus on accelerating national defense construction, completing the legislation system, and promoting international exchanges and cooperation in aspect of economic and culture.

Judging over all the consideration discussed above, it is not difficult to assert this summary that enhancing schools is one of the most factor in successful development of country due to the reason that education is the fundamental part of the progress in other areas.

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