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TOPIC：Improving school is most important factor to successful development of country.

The economic downturn of Japan had increased dramatically after the World War II. How could that be? According to a survey, in 1965-1973, the average growth rate of public expenditure on education of Japan was 17.6% and the ever-increasing GDP had take place. Since the 18th century, the average increase of GDP jumped to 14.6%. It convincing indicates that economy prosperity can not with out the huge input of the construction of Schools. Developing education system is significant way to improving our society.

First, acquiring knowledge in a school is a widely accepted way for most teenagers who accent on a rugged foundation for their professional careers and lives. While a young person do some job at society, the affect can never be compared with absorbing a set of new theories in school and then constant use of the knowledge in everyday life. There is no better opportunity to improve academic skills than living in the schools in which it has a great studying atmosphere. Learning in schools can help you have a gradual wakening of the way you learning which means as much as same time, people can do much more work than they used be.

Second, Spending money on schools can offers teenager a different perspective of the world. On a modern campus, foreign students are likely to encounter their counterparts from various part of the world and are exposed to different idea and values. This helps students to have a meaningful understanding of different societies and inevitably sees their own country in a new light. When taking complex roles of societies, there is an extra advantage in having social intercourse, which lend color to their personality and improve the processes mind of global economy.

Third, spending taxes on schools, slowly payback and longtime costing as it may be, is helpful. A person have high-educated often experience difficulty—difficulty in adapting to a lot of new theories and in dealing with all problems alone. Yet, the difficulty, thousands of people with the frustration brought on by job-getting, is a precious learning opportunity for one’s future life and country’s high-quality workers.

Although greater school costs a lot, the payoff is worthwhile. Developing education system is significant way to improving our society and everyday life.

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