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发表于 2012-5-17 10:30:04 |只看该作者

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5.16 独立 4.24jj

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发表于 2012-5-17 18:08:25 |只看该作者

517 独立求狠批,快考试了==呜呜
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发表于 2012-5-17 20:51:51 |只看该作者

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发表于 2012-5-18 13:31:17 |只看该作者

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这是第二次写综合，感觉比独立写的顺畅

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一战22 继续努力 525 独立报名

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发表于 2012-5-25 10:10:22 |只看该作者

先占座，等分组，是吗？

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发表于 2012-5-25 10:12:03 |只看该作者

2482# laotaitai 然后你可以开始写了传在自己的帖子里等分租有的时候没分组也会有gter友情修改

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发表于 2012-5-28 12:03:21 |只看该作者

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TPO14 综合写作

The reading passage and listening passage debate on whether salvage logging is benificial both to a damaged forest and to the economy or not. The reading passage outlines three different theories to explain that slvage logging has benifit to the forest and economy, which are contradicted by the listening material.

First of all, the reading passage holds that removing dead trees can make room for new trees at once, because it will take years for the dead trees to decompose. On the contrary, the listening passage refutes that cleaning up the damaged trees does not have benifit to the forest, because it can not enrich the soil of the forest and make the soil lack the nutrient. Apparently, this view is just opposite of the writer's.

Second, the reading passage argues that removing decaying wood helps minimize the dangers of insect infestation and contribute to the health of the forest, because the damaged forest is a suitable habitat for the spruce bark beetle. However, in the listening passage, it holds that removing rotting wood is a harmful to the forest, because the decaying wood is not only suitalbe for the beeltes, but also suitalbe for the birds and other harmless insect. In the long run, removing rotting woods will do harm to the health of the forest.That is, this point is right contrary to the reading.

Finally, the reading passage demonstrates that removing damaged trees can provide much wood and more opportunity to the local residence, while the listening passage states that removing damage trees has a tiny influence to the local economy, because the damaged wood can not last long and removing rotting trees can only provide temporary job opporunities.By this way, the lecture contradictes the reading passage.

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发表于 2012-5-28 12:03:58 |只看该作者

Do you agree or disagree, the world is changing fast, people are less happy.

By the developing of economy and society, people tend to pursuing philosophy questions: Where is happiness? How to gain happiness? Are people happier than those in the old days? As for me, I definitely disagree with the statement that the world is chaging fast, people are less happy, because happiness bases on the insight of themselves, have no relationship with the changing of the world. In addition, only if the world changes faster, can people enjoy themselves by all kinds of channels.

First of all, only if the world change faster, can people enjoy much more happiness through different kinds of ways, because they can get more information from the Internet, they have sufficent finacial condition to do something they want to do, and they can communicate with other people(sharing?) who are sharing the same hobby. However, back to the old days, those things I concered above are beyond the imagination of the most of people in our country. Take my mother for example, she is a very diligent common famale, lives an ordinary life in a small town. In the past, except for dedicating herself to her children and grandchildren, she did not know how to gain happiness, so she felt lonely and unhappy because the town was changing slowly than the big cities, and she had little sence of happiness. Once, she went to Beijing and lived with me for a period, she felt the fast changing of the world immediately and found her own hobby, swimming and climbing the mountain. When she came back to the hometown, she persisted on her hobby and became happier than before.

In addition, to some sence, happiness have nothing with the changing of the world if people pursue it from their insight world, since the meaning of happiness can be embodied though sorts of style, except for the material standards. Maybe they can feel happy though chatting with friends or families, or they can taste happiness only due to a piece of cake, or they can experience happiness by reading a favorite book. This means, in spite of the changing is fast or slow, they can feel joyful wherever and whenever they are. According to the calculation of the psychologist, there are only 10 percent peolple who gain happiness related to the changing of the world, their mood and mentality might change on the basis of viberations of outside factors. On the opposite, there are 90 percent people can find harmony and happiness through the inside feeling and experience.

All in all, although according to the faster changing of the world, people may feel more pessure or less happy occasionally. As I have stated above, people can taste happiness though sorts of ways by the fast changing of the world, and the most important thing is that people can enjoy happiness to your own inside world, no matter that the outside world changes or not, even no matter the changing is slow or fast.

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