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本帖最后由 tndstone 于 2012-4-9 22:14 编辑

第一次认真写作文,30min下来只写了230 words,求改!题目是TPO2独立。
Telling the truth is always the most improtant consideration in any relationship between people. I think it is not totally right.
First, to be honest is always a kind of virtue admired by many people. Telling the truth is the basic of being honest. To punish criminals or clarify the innocences, witnesses should let the couch know the truth; to make a paper more practical and preducible, a researcher should be hnonest on his research; to longthen and beautify a marriage, one should let his or her mate know what mistake he or she made.
However, sometimes it will be a injury to a person when he or she knows a fact. In that case, telling the truth is not a dedicated choise. For example, one of a family members has gotten a terminal cancer. The diagnosis was just sent to the family. Tell him the truth he will be anxious about his ill, but if he dees not know the fact, instead of a little disease, he will be much happier or easier. Another example: It will be more happy to receive surprise, but always such happines are based on kind of wellmeant lying.
Therefore, the world do need to tell the truth and to lie. All the things created by God are useful. Without lying the world will be much grayer, and that is why God create lying.
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发表于 2012-4-12 09:37:28 |只看该作者
离考T的时间只剩差不多一个月了~~作文还没有头绪~~求各位高人改作文啊~!话题:TPO2 Always telling the truth is the mostimportant consideration in any relationship between people.
   For centuries, people have been taught by teachers and parents thatalways telling the truth is the most important consideration. And some of thepeople followed it at an early age. But in fact, telling the truth no matterwhere, when, or in which relationship sometimes has a side effect on things.
Exactly, trust is very important in any relationship. In otherwords, Hence we believe in always telling the truth is a good way to keep a honestyimpression on others.
Granted, most people have that common consensus. But sometimes the truthwould make the listeners so uncomfortable and embarrassed that they wouldrather heard a white lie instead. For instance, when a fat girl felt downbecause of her appearance and asked you if she looks bad apparently. With the “alwaystelling the truth” brief, you told her, totally yes. Then you can imagine howawful she would feel after hearing your words. She was just urged to getcourage from you, whereas you hurt her deep. If you didn’t tell the truth,probably your relationship may become closer. In addition, sometimes we need alittle lie to protect ourselves. We everyone has a mass of thoughts that onlywant to be kept by ourselves. Telling every thought as a truth is like a persondressed up with nothing in public. And it may bring a lot of troubles to us. Asyou know, security and privacy is an essential need for almost everyone. Weneed a little white lie which is not to hurt others and avoid a series of troubles.
For these reasons, even though trust is very important in anyrelationship, we can conclude that always telling the truth is not the mostimportant consideration in any relationship at all. No matter which conditionwe are in, the first and foremost we need to do is putting ourselves to theother’s position and find out what is the best to do for others. There are manythings needed besides trust in a good relationship.

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