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本帖最后由薛定谔的喵于 2013-2-19 22:38 编辑

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2-19【独立写作】一米九一作业贴
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燃烧吧。奇
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本帖最后由燃烧吧。奇于 2013-2-20 15:56 编辑

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2.19 melo8412写作帖https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... age=1#pid1776574637

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eeeemily 发表于 2013-2-19 11:51
我春节出国去旅游啦~好久没交了
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eeeemily 发表于 2013-2-19 11:51
我春节出国去旅游啦~好久没交了
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哦哦

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求指导这篇写的是是否要对朋友诚实
我用易改检查说句子结构只有fair 我看了一遍觉得写的真是恶心可是就是怎么说不知道是题材问题还是啥原因，我真不知道怎么改能把句子结构改好点求大大指点
Supporting friend is the cornerstone of friendship especially when one side suffers setback and discouragement. Lie, way of essence to encourage another, is hard to accept by social, but all of us have lied in order to cheer our friend's up. For instance, Lin Dan, the most famous badminton player in China who won the Beijing Olympic Games, said he would give up on playing badminton if there is no support by his best friend. His friend thought he have an obligation to cheer Lin up, although he did not believe Lin would become the best player in the world, he still continue to encourage Lin and told him he is the best (actually he was not in that time). The line said by Lin's friend exerted an incalculable influence on Lin and make her become the actual test finally. The more conventional line between friends is "You will be ok" which is indeed lying but fulfill good wishes and encouragement. A mortal man who honestly enough to his friend should say "I am not pretty sure if you would be ok" which sounds stupid.

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