Hi old friend! I like your intonation.
task 1: i think it is better to speak out what is "first one", for instance, you can say"spending time with friends brings me more pleasure", that gives listener a better idea of what option you are explaining.
task 2: The beginning part sounds very good. Pay attention to the pronunciation of the word "opportunity"
task 3:this one is really good.
task 4:i think the one is good too.
task 5:this one is a little bit messed~~. The reasons are understandable but not clear and concise.
task6: I think it will be better to explain in advance what is weathering, however your two examples are clear.
task 1 good
task 1-1 good 最后一句那个so medicine.....感觉可以换成so doing team sports....反正都是要总结的话,点题一下也不错~
task 2 good。20s那三个词是什么?=。=这里你说的都是人们怎么怎么样。我倾向于从自己出发,把people换成me,/比如in fact, many people prefer to...那里,然后后面都不用改。这样就变成了,我喜欢在一个安静的地方生活,这对健康什么的好,而很少有人能做到,所以rules可以帮助他们更好的要求自己。有时间可再加一个,所以有较多rules的地方往往比较安静,我喜欢这个。个人意见
task 3 4s处,最好能指出是advisor meeting,学校的理由的第二点,我听是,“not easy to adjust their shcedule所以才取消”,这个我不确定。反对的理由的第一点,可以指出extra information是“advisor可以就个人的job等给出建议”。最后一点的表达很不错~
task 4 good。说起来我这个有些没听太懂。
task 5 good.24S出如果能指出another concert 是哪一天的就更好,跟前面那个区分开来。因为前面那个在另一个时间play,其实也可以说是play in another concert.
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T1
tip 的发音, when people are .....and disappointed
T2
could influences 把三单形式去掉
T3
study effectively
T4
good
T4
is held注意发音
T5
good
T6
ancient 发音
楼主依然是人神共愤的语速啊,信息量很大,学习了~