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Issue238  第2篇 青蛙要求被红烧
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从2004年11月28日13时25分到2004年11月28日14时45分
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Conformity almost always leads to a deadening of individual creativity and energy.
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Everyone is able to go day dreaming, but only those dreams conforming to the basic rules could be useful and even realized. Energy of an individual is from the encouragement of the realization of his creative ideas, which can't be achieved without the conformity between the team members in a world where collaboration is never more important.

The conformity is rather the source of creativity and energy than the murder of them, if probably applied.

Martin Luther King, Jr. has a dream, in which his children and the white kids could live together, judging not by their color but their performance. He is definitely such an energetic man that is capable of holding on to the dream for his whole life. And the conformity from all the people that hold the same dream has given him the power to fight on and on.

Edison is considered one the most creative man in the world. His inventions have generally changed the face of the world. He is in the first place a very knowledgeable man, who knows a lot from chemistry to physics. With the conformity to the fundamentals, he could progress to generate his useful ideas. He has a group of technicians, who made prototypes from all his designs. The conformity of the group to Edison's blueprint leads to the emergence of bulb, battery, cable, etc..

In the present world, the spirit of team work has never been more emphasized. The content of team work actually is dealing with the issue on how to fully make everyone in the team creative and energetic. When arguing about the plan for the team, everyone is promoted to think creatively. However, when the final plan is settled, everyone is supposed to conform to it and act on it. There is no longer any difference between "me" and "my team". High conformity assures high capability.

It happens that conformity deadens individual creativity and energy sometimes. Those are the occasions that one conforms without critical thinking but just following. A “good” conformity goes with some requisites, the most significant of which is thinking. Only those conformities with careful consideration nurture creativity and energy.

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字数好少,主要是鉴于第一篇偏题严重,这篇写之前思考了一下,不过时间就不够了。
我是一只青蛙,主要由圆形构成。
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发表于 2004-12-29 19:43:25 |只看该作者
Conformity almost always leads to a deadening of individual creativity and energy.
------正文------
Everyone is able to go day dreaming, but only those dreams conforming to the basic rules could be useful and even realized. Energy of an individual is from the encouragement of the realization of his creative ideas, which can't be achieved without the conformity between the team members in a world where collaboration is never more important.

The conformity is rather the source of creativity and energy than the murder of them, if probably applied.

Martin Luther King, Jr. has a dream, in which his children and the white kids could live together, judging not by their color but their performance. He is definitely such an energetic man that is capable of holding on to the dream for his whole life. And the conformity from all the people that hold the same dream has given him the power to fight on and on.

Edison is considered one the most creative man in the world. His inventions have generally changed the face of the world. He is in the first place a very knowledgeable man, who knows a lot from chemistry to physics. With the conformity to the fundamentals, he could progress to generate his useful ideas. He has a group of technicians, who made prototypes from all his designs. The conformity of the group to Edison's blueprint leads to the emergence of bulb, battery, cable, etc.

in the present world, the spirit of teamwork has never been more emphasized. The content of teamwork actually is dealing with the issue on how to fully make everyone in the team creative and energetic. When arguing about the plan for the team, everyone is promoted to think creatively. However, when the final plan is settled, everyone is supposed to conform to it and act on it. There is no longer any difference between "me" and "my team". High conformity assures high capability.

It happens that conformity deadens individual creativity and energy sometimes. Those are the occasions that one conforms without critical thinking but just following. A “good” conformity goes with some requisites, the most significant of which is thinking. Only those conformities with careful consideration nurture creativity and energy.

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字数好少,主要是鉴于第一篇偏题严重,这篇写之前思考了一下,不过时间就不够了。
我觉得你很强了,我的水平不能帮你改什么了。
时间会改变一切

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发表于 2005-1-3 18:27:39 |只看该作者
我觉得你写得好棒,羡慕,不知道怎么红烧!
TOMORROW IS ANOTHER DAY!
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发表于 2005-1-4 00:38:06 |只看该作者
谢谢大家的关心。
红烧青蛙其实很简单,只要看看那家伙写的时候有没有中心,是不是形散而神散,就知道这青蛙容易下刀。
我是一只青蛙,主要由圆形构成。

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