[求助] Tofle考试改卷是不是分地区的？ [复制链接]

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发表于 2009-9-27 01:33:36 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

我6月份在澳门考的托福，结果出来叫我要吐血了，作文16分，说我的写作能力limited
我觉得我学的很好，我用的是GRE的5股文的格式，字也400多一点，写完还有5分钟，我还检查了一遍。
因为内地的考号不好刷，所以我到港澳考了
我想想问一问Tofle考试改卷是不是分地区的？
我怎么会出现这种问题，我准备重考，想吸取上次的教训
请各位指点指点

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发表于 2009-9-27 02:18:27 |只看该作者

跟地区没什么关系
GRE作文和ibt思路略有区别
如果觉得不知为什么分数低可以拿篇练习时的作文来大家看看

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发表于 2009-9-28 00:01:23 |只看该作者

应版主的说法我把自己的一篇练习贴出来大家看看
给我提些意见：
Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, movie becomes one of the most popular entertainments in our daily life. Every year hundreds of billions of dollars have been investigate to this industry, and there are more than hundreds of thousands of movies produced.  Some people hold the opinion that movies should be serious, designed to make the audience think, whereas, others believe that movies need to be designed primarily to amuse and entertain. In my view of point, I concede that movies ought to be devised to make audiences to consider themselves. I will demonstrate my standpoint in the following aspects.
To begin with, movie is not only a mean of entertainment.  As one the most enthralling media, movie industry becomes one of the most profitable industries in the realm of media.  Movie is now the mainstream media in our live. It can influence our thought, idea and ideology on some degree. A good movie can encourage people to struggle against difficult during their growth. For instant, Frost Gump, which had won the Oscar Prize, had encouraged people all over the world to work hard and headed for a glorious life.  Therefore, as one of the mainstream, movie can affect people's attitude toward the world.
Moreover, since a myriad of money and energy have been investigate into movie, besides of entertainment it also needs to be a lesson to human beings.  The history of movies is more than one hundred years. During this period, people's attitude to movie has changed a lot. In the beginning, people was curious to this new invention; then people got to appreciate it; in contemporary, people's desire to movie is not only effect of vision  but also a mean of education, which cultivates human beings thought of introspection. Accordingly, movie is not only a way of entertainment.
Last but not least, movie shows culture of a nation. There are a plenty of people manufacturing movie in various nation. Movie produced in different country will express different culture. When people are appreciating movies, they are appreciating culture of country making that movie. So, as a method to broadcast culture, movie needs to be designed with more thoughts in it.
In the final analysis, in contemporary movie is not only a mean of entertainment, but also a way to express the idea of the editors, a method to spread culture. Given the evidences referred above, which sometimes interweave into an integrated whole and become more cogent, we may safely arrive at the conclusion what I support.

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