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发表于 2010-3-23 11:44:57 |只看该作者

3.22https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1075433&extra=我错了。。。。。昨天有事

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发表于 2010-3-24 00:07:10 |只看该作者

There is a discussion over whether teachers should assign homework to their students every day. This issue has become a matter of concern in many places of the world. A large number of people live under the illusion that, by doing homework every day, students could obtain many kinds of useful knowledge and practical skill. But what these people fail to see is that occupying students’ leisure time may produce disastrous influence on their later life. As for me, I firmly convince that teachers should not assign homework to student everyday and maintain enough time for students to play and do some physical excises.
(开头段绝对的承上启下）
In the first place, doing homework every day is unhealthy for students' physical growth. Many experts in education （教育学专家的官方说法叫E.S,怎么拼始终木有找到- -）point out that it is equally important to take some physical excises instead of doing homework at home(equally和后面的instead of 好像有点不搭诶~), when(after) students have spend their whole day in a boring classroom. Let's take Michael Jordan for example, his talent in basketball (was) proved after school time. It is hard to imagine that if his teacher assign homework every day and always make him overload, he could excellent in basketball, and even has no time to play in the basketball court due to those homework. ( having no time to play in the basketball court due to those homework, how could he be so excellent in basketball. )
In addition with the obvious problem- physical excise, another major obstacle, in my opinion, is about students’ mental healthy(health). Students will have less time to communicate with their parents due to those homework every day. Consequently, it may difficult to cultivate their interpersonal character. They may become more solitary, and even suffer from mental diseases. On the other hand, （应该是呈上说为了解决之一问题吧，To avoid this problem,）teachers should pay considerable attention to improve their teaching skill and enhance their teaching methods, to help students absorb the knowledge during school time.
个人感觉文章写的很好诶，结构和论证都很严谨，词汇句式也有，继续加油的说~

From what have been discussed above, it is reasonably to draw the conclusion that, teachers should not assign homework everyday. Students should be encouraged to communicate with their parents and play after school. A good teacher never relies on (making students overload with homework) students work overload to gain good mark, but by the mean of improving his or her own teaching skill and method to help students’ healthy growth in academic, physical and mental aspects.

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