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发表于 2011-2-16 21:47:03 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

A. The author's conclusion that they will make profits in Plainsville is based on
the gratuitous assumption that people who are enthusiastic about exercising
will necessarily be interest in buying health food and other health-related
products.
B.A problem in this argument is that it simply concludes that people who are
concerning about healthy lives will automatically became Nature's Way's
customers. Even if many people in P are interest about health food and other
health-related products, the author ignores other factors that may affect the
business of NW, such as the presence of competitors, the population of the
area, and the eating habits of the local residents.
C. Another problem in this argument is that the author simply equates strong
sales of running shoes and exercise clothing to the residents' interests of
sports.
D. The large number of club members does not necessarily indicate that they
will become the customers of NW.
E. The argument's conclusion that NW will make profits is unwarranted.
Profit is a factor of not only revenue but also costs.
F.  Another  problem  with  the  argument  is  that  the  author's  conclusion  that
residents' enthusiasm about health lives will remain unchanged in the future
rests  on  the  unfounded  assumption  that  all  conditions  upon  which  people's
interests depend have remained unchanged.

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发表于 2011-2-16 21:54:35 |只看该作者

Issue 26
不同意~
旧建筑有历史文化价值~
旧建筑也可以发张经济旅游业
要有选择性的保护~
I 48
在有些领域中，很多成就是由个人完成的艺术
另外一些领域中很多成就是由个人引导，靠大众完成的社会类
个人和大众都重要~
I 54
不同意
前人的知识是学习的基础
历史的经验教训可以避免再次发生
但社会在进步，也不能墨守成规~

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发表于 2011-2-17 22:32:09 |只看该作者

Arg4

a. The number of real estate agents is not a decisive factor when judging a company’s superiority.
b. High revenue dosen’t mean high net profits.
c. We are not clear about the quality of the estates in two companies, so we are difficult to do a reasonable comparison between the average price of home sales in two companies.
d. The situation in ten years ago was much different from today, and the author’s personal experience is not persuasive.
e. The quality of home itself is of great importance, a good company cannot sell out a home in poor quality.
ARG5

a. The total number of that country is not told, if there is 1 billion people, the medicine for cold and cough, which are more popular than arthritis, will be more profitable.
b. If the price of the drugs for the treatment of arthritis is high, and people who have trouble with arthritis are usually poor, such drugs cannot be sold well.
c. Only two pharmaceuticals are compared, what about others in ten years.
d. There are so many uncertain steps after clinical studies.
e. The number of patients researched is too small to be persuasive.
Arg6
a. The environment may not be the decisive factor why people choose jazz clubs.
b. There is a gap between the poor and the rich in the nation wide. And jazz fans spend of 1000 dollars a year are not totally spent on jazz clubs.
c. We are not sure whether the jazz music is their selling point, and we don’t have to go to club for enjoying jazz music, we can also listen to CDs or radios.
d. The argument that the clubs which are not named as jazz clubs will not play jazz is less reasonable.

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发表于 2011-2-17 22:37:41 |只看该作者

issue 81
1、爱国主义是国家稳定团结的重要力量。尊重国家历史，可以使得人们从历史中汲取力量，在关键时刻为维护自己民族的尊严和国家的稳定贡献自己力量。热爱自己民族文化，抵制自己周围对历史文化的亵渎和破坏。
2、沙文主义：chauvinistic,chauvinism。沙文主义往往对外是侵略，对内是高压管制。一方面对其他国家和其他民族是一种伤害，另外对自己的国家的人们也是一种束缚和压迫。
I 103
过去的知识是学习的基础~
学习历史可以吸取教训更好的展望未来
历史是国家地区的文化的重要的部分。
I 110
研究历史重要的是客观的还原和记录历史的现实，他们的目的不是为了讲故事，和storytell很不一样。可能会有人说记者，记者不是历史学家。
研究历史不光包括历史中的事件，还包括历史中的文化、古迹、科技成就等。
当然，为了某种需要，有些历史不存在了，或者没有足够证据。所以有必要基于现有的历史遗迹进行分析、严密推理，进行补充。但这不等于随意捏造。

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发表于 2011-2-18 10:19:23 |只看该作者

谢谢楼主啦:loveliness:

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楼上不客气~都是自己看看得~

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发表于 2011-2-18 21:41:56 |只看该作者

arg7

a. Although Ann Green is a member of the Good Earth Coalition, it doesn’t necessarily mean that he will devote himself to protecting environment, on the contrast, no evidence shows that a member of the Clearview town council will not do a lot to protect environment.
b. We are told that the current members in Clearview town council are not protecting our environment, but we are not sure whether they will change views in the future.
c. More materials are needed to clarify what products that the doubled factories are manufacturing, because the pollution of the factories is closely connected with the sort of products. And we don’t know that weather these factories have taken some steps to reduce the pollution if they indeed do harm to invironment.
arg8

a. Mesa Foods only marketed its products within a relatively small region of the country, more materials are needed to support whether MF has a strong growth potential since people’s tastes vary from a area to another, and the local people might have their own sense of tastes.
b. Although MF enjoyed a 20 perticent increase in profits last year, we don’t know whether MF actually make profits, it is possible that MF is still in cost-surpass-income trouble.
c. Although MF’s best selling product has had increased sales over each of the past three years, no evidence shows that this product will still be in leading position because maybe other companies will launch new more attractive product similar to MF’s and former customers may change their favor.
d. Not all snack food is totally favored by young group, if products of MF are designed specially for elders, the merge of two companies will bring about clashes.
arg9

a. The number of percentage of Omega students who participate in the procedure is not provided.
b. No evidence shows students’ evaluating the teaching effectiveness compelled professors to assign higher grades in their classes, there are other such possible reasons as the progress of the students.
c. If the former grade average was low, thirty percent increase seems logical.
d. It is possible that there are great gaps between different schools due to various standards used in evaluating, so potential employers should concern more about evaluating students.

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发表于 2011-2-18 21:58:31 |只看该作者

ISSUE 120
不支持
历史有助于帮助理解某些学科
历史的成败很有借鉴意义。
历史的借鉴作用是有限的，不能因循守旧，裹足不前。历史上没有的不见得现在不能有，历史上成功的现在未必可行。
ISSUE 125
学习历史并不仅仅是去预见未来
要注意到现在和未来的区别。
ISSUE 189
随着科技进步，人们现在的生活中，似乎过去的作品占的比例越来越小。有些人忽视了过去的作品的意义.
科学方面，过去的杰出贡献是现在发现研究新理论的基础。
艺术方面。

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