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发表于 2011-10-31 22:35:55 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

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We recommend thatMonarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, having been in business at thesame location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because itis known for its wide selection of books on all subjects. Clearly, opening thecafé would attract more customers. Space could be made for the café bydiscontinuing the children's book section, which will probably become lesspopular given that the most recent national census indicated a significantdecline in the percentage of the population under age ten. Opening a café willallow Monarch to attract more customers and better compete with Regal Books,which recently opened its own café

我们提议，在 Monarch Books 店里开设一个咖啡厅。 Monarc 在它的店址上经营了 20 余年，由于其对于各类型图书选择的广而广为人知，并拥有庞大的消费者群体。开设咖啡厅显然能吸引更多的顾客。咖啡厅的空间可以通过撤销儿童书籍的柜台来获得，于最近的一次全国调查显示 10 岁以下儿童在总人口中所占的比显著下降，因而儿童书籍很可能将不再好卖。开设咖啡厅可以引更多的顾客并更好和 Regal 书店展开竞争，后者最近刚开设了咖啡厅。

我看不出题目中红色部分和蓝色的部分有什么联系。或者说我们因该如何对待一些看似与结论无关的句子。

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发表于 2011-11-1 09:45:00 |只看该作者

有关系的吧...比如，后面说要剪掉children's book section可能就会损伤wide selection of books on all subjects啊？

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发表于 2011-11-1 11:05:43 |只看该作者

1# ttoto
We recommend thatMonarch Books open a café in its store[结论]. Monarch, having been in business at thesame location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because itis known for its wide selection of books on all subjects【证据1】. Clearly, opening thecafé would attract more customers.【论断1】 Space could be made for the café bydiscontinuing the children's book section【证据2】, which will probably become lesspopular given that the most recent national census【证据3】 indicated a significantdecline in the percentage of the population under age ten【论断2+假设1】. Opening a café willallow Monarch to attract more customers 【重述论断1】and better compete with Regal Book【论断3】s,which recently opened its own café

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苏小柚解惑：
官方指南说：
In reading the argument, you should pay special attention to:

what is offered as evidence, support or proof
what is explicitly stated, claimed or concluded
what is assumed or supposed, perhaps without justification or proof
what is not stated, but necessarily follows from what is stated 【作者你指出了结论和证据1，但是你觉得它们“没有关系”】

In addition, you should consider the structure of the argument【证据1不是直接与结论产生联系。实际上，证据1是作为论断1的前提--即M书店有“购书”客户基础，这些“购书”客户会转化为“咖啡消费”客户。】 — the way in which these elements are linked together to form a line of reasoning; i.e., you should recognize the separate, sometimes implicit steps in the thinking process and consider whether the movement from each step to the next is logically sound【各证据构成一个推理链条，证据a-->论断1+论断2..3.（由证据2..3支撑）+假设X..Y..--> （最终）结论。】. In tracing this line, look for transition words and phrases that suggest the author is attempting to make a logical connection (e.g., however, thus, therefore, evidently, hence, in conclusion).

综合上面的分析可知，证据1貌似与结论没有联系，但是证据1为论断1提供support/evidence，最终为论断推出结论打下前提基础。

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发表于 2011-11-1 22:29:28 |只看该作者

啊哈，明白了，谢谢版主的回答。

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